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Dard-E-Dil Hua Kam Hai Dard-E-Dil Sunane Se
Zakhm Barh Gaya Laikin Daikhne Dikhane Se
Jan-O-Dil Gaya Apna Aap Ki Ada Thehri Kiya Mila Tumhei Akhir Yoon Humein Rulane Se
Khirman-E-Muhabbat Pe Barq Se Chamakti Hai
Is Ko Bhi Raqabat Hai Jaise Aashiyane Se
Raste Ke Pathar Ko Thokarein Hi Milti Hein
Kiya Gila Muqadar Se Kiyoon Gila Zamane Se
Her Satar Mein Qissa Hai Mere Piyar Ka Janaan
Kaise Naam Kato Ge Ab Mera Fasane Se
Zindagi Ki Rahoon Mein Salman Phir Akaila Hai
Kiya Mila Muhabbat Mein Kashtiyan Jalane Se ......................
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«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2005, 06:39:49 PM » |
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Wah Waheed bhai.....bahut khoob.......bahut dino ke bad suna apko humne...........
Dard e dil ka bayan sun ke phir se wahi yad aayi hai,
Wahi batein wahi mausam jisne humko di tanhai hai,
Bhulaye bhi bhala kaise hum iss dil ke zakhmon ko,
Aaj iss dost ne wahi bat jab phir se sunayi hai.....
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«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2005, 04:13:36 AM » |
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Dard-E-Dil Hua Kam Hai Dard-E-Dil Sunane Se
Zakhm Barh Gaya Laikin Daikhne Dikhane Se
Jan-O-Dil Gaya Apna Aap Ki Ada Thehri Kiya Mila Tumhei Akhir Yoon Humein Rulane Se
Khirman-E-Muhabbat Pe Barq Se Chamakti Hai
Is Ko Bhi Raqabat Hai Jaise Aashiyane Se
Raste Ke Pathar Ko Thokarein Hi Milti Hein
Kiya Gila Muqadar Se Kiyoon Gila Zamane Se
Her Satar Mein Qissa Hai Mere Piyar Ka Janaan
Kaise Naam Kato Ge Ab Mera Fasane Se
Zindagi Ki Rahoon Mein Salman Phir Akaila Hai
Kiya Mila Muhabbat Mein Kashtiyan Jalane Se ...................... wah waheed,bohat hi khoob  |
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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2005, 04:33:53 AM » |
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Dard-E-Dil Hua Kam Hai Dard-E-Dil Sunane Se
Zakhm Barh Gaya Laikin Daikhne Dikhane Se
Jan-O-Dil Gaya Apna Aap Ki Ada Thehri Kiya Mila Tumhei Akhir Yoon Humein Rulane Se
Khirman-E-Muhabbat Pe Barq Se Chamakti Hai
Is Ko Bhi Raqabat Hai Jaise Aashiyane Se
Raste Ke Pathar Ko Thokarein Hi Milti Hein
Kiya Gila Muqadar Se Kiyoon Gila Zamane Se
Her Satar Mein Qissa Hai Mere Piyar Ka Janaan
Kaise Naam Kato Ge Ab Mera Fasane Se
Zindagi Ki Rahoon Mein Salman Phir Akaila Hai
Kiya Mila Muhabbat Mein Kashtiyan Jalane Se ...................... Bahut khub.................. |
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«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2005, 06:13:32 AM » |
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Dard-E-Dil Hua Kam Hai Dard-E-Dil Sunane Se
Zakhm Barh Gaya Laikin Daikhne Dikhane Se
Jan-O-Dil Gaya Apna Aap Ki Ada Thehri Kiya Mila Tumhei Akhir Yoon Humein Rulane Se
Khirman-E-Muhabbat Pe Barq Se Chamakti Hai
Is Ko Bhi Raqabat Hai Jaise Aashiyane Se
Raste Ke Pathar Ko Thokarein Hi Milti Hein
Kiya Gila Muqadar Se Kiyoon Gila Zamane Se
Her Satar Mein Qissa Hai Mere Piyar Ka Janaan
Kaise Naam Kato Ge Ab Mera Fasane Se
Zindagi Ki Rahoon Mein Salman Phir Akaila Hai
Kiya Mila Muhabbat Mein Kashtiyan Jalane Se ...................... wah ! kia mila mohabat ma kashtiyan jalany sey ! ..khooolll |
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2005, 06:58:22 AM » |
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Dard-E-Dil Hua Kam Hai Dard-E-Dil Sunane Se
Zakhm Barh Gaya Laikin Daikhne Dikhane Se
Jan-O-Dil Gaya Apna Aap Ki Ada Thehri Kiya Mila Tumhei Akhir Yoon Humein Rulane Se
Khirman-E-Muhabbat Pe Barq Se Chamakti Hai
Is Ko Bhi Raqabat Hai Jaise Aashiyane Se
Raste Ke Pathar Ko Thokarein Hi Milti Hein
Kiya Gila Muqadar Se Kiyoon Gila Zamane Se
Her Satar Mein Qissa Hai Mere Piyar Ka Janaan
Kaise Naam Kato Ge Ab Mera Fasane Se
Zindagi Ki Rahoon Mein Salman Phir Akaila Hai
Kiya Mila Muhabbat Mein Kashtiyan Jalane Se ...................... TOOO GOOOOOOOOD!! |
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2005, 08:39:32 AM » |
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bahut ache waheed
li talashi jabhi bhi guzre hue lamho ne meri
atka hua paya mujhe usi umeed per meri
derd tha kisi aur ka lekin tees thi meri
karti rahi jo intezaar wo aankh thi meri
gungunati patjhad mili dali per do patte liye
mousam ko wo jode rahi her shaakh se meri
de raha tha chaav mujhko khud mera hi saya
ki roshni bunti rahi nayi parchaiyan meri
ruke hue jharne mile kayi aankho me mujhko
ki kashtiyaan dubti rahi kinaro per meri
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«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2005, 09:07:38 AM » |
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bahut ache waheed
li talashi jabhi bhi guzre hue lamho ne meri
atka hua paya mujhe usi umeed per meri
derd tha kisi aur ka lekin tees thi meri
karti rahi jo intezaar wo aankh thi meri
gungunati patjhad mili dali per do patte liye
mousam ko wo jode rahi her shaakh se meri
de raha tha chaav mujhko khud mera hi saya
ki roshni bunti rahi nayi parchaiyan meri
ruke hue jharne mile kayi aankho me mujhko
ki kashtiyaan dubti rahi kinaro per meri thanx alot...........nidhi....thy.....amrita........... ..sadiqa jawed......aarzuu......sam............... wonderful reply thy..............sam..........kya jabardast likhe ho bhai log dil khus ho gaya..........dono logon ki reply.................. dil ab aas lagi hai shayad laut aaye woh yeh dhuan dil mein utha hai jalne ki nishani hai tum apne rung nahao hum apni mauj udayen wah baat bhool bhi jao jo aani jaani hue.......... |
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«Reply #8 on: June 20, 2005, 09:11:00 AM » |
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thanx n bahut ache waheed
derd hi derd bher diya dil ke her taar me
jaate hue loota hai hume mousam-e-bahar ne
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«Reply #9 on: June 20, 2005, 09:15:36 AM » |
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bohot achhe waheed and sam..!!! ..
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«Reply #10 on: June 20, 2005, 09:29:43 AM » |
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thanxxxxxxxxxxx alot sam.............sanya..........mamu ki dost...  bahot khoob sam............... dekh mere jakham ab bhi bhare nahi hai ab main chahta hoon koi aakar jala de mujhko.... |
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«Reply #11 on: June 20, 2005, 09:35:20 AM » |
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Dard-E-Dil Hua Kam Hai Dard-E-Dil Sunane Se
Zakhm Barh Gaya Laikin Daikhne Dikhane Se
Jan-O-Dil Gaya Apna Aap Ki Ada Thehri Kiya Mila Tumhei Akhir Yoon Humein Rulane Se
Khirman-E-Muhabbat Pe Barq Se Chamakti Hai
Is Ko Bhi Raqabat Hai Jaise Aashiyane Se
Raste Ke Pathar Ko Thokarein Hi Milti Hein
Kiya Gila Muqadar Se Kiyoon Gila Zamane Se
Her Satar Mein Qissa Hai Mere Piyar Ka Janaan
Kaise Naam Kato Ge Ab Mera Fasane Se
Zindagi Ki Rahoon Mein Salman Phir Akaila Hai
Kiya Mila Muhabbat Mein Kashtiyan Jalane Se ...................... zakhm toh fir bhi bhar jaate hai nishaan wahi chod jaate hain na chahate hue bhi har pal humein beetien lamho ki yaad dilate hain |
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«Reply #12 on: June 20, 2005, 09:45:47 AM » |
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Dard-E-Dil Hua Kam Hai Dard-E-Dil Sunane Se
Zakhm Barh Gaya Laikin Daikhne Dikhane Se
Jan-O-Dil Gaya Apna Aap Ki Ada Thehri Kiya Mila Tumhei Akhir Yoon Humein Rulane Se
Khirman-E-Muhabbat Pe Barq Se Chamakti Hai
Is Ko Bhi Raqabat Hai Jaise Aashiyane Se
Raste Ke Pathar Ko Thokarein Hi Milti Hein
Kiya Gila Muqadar Se Kiyoon Gila Zamane Se
Her Satar Mein Qissa Hai Mere Piyar Ka Janaan
Kaise Naam Kato Ge Ab Mera Fasane Se
Zindagi Ki Rahoon Mein Salman Phir Akaila Hai
Kiya Mila Muhabbat Mein Kashtiyan Jalane Se ...................... zakhm toh fir bhi bhar jaate hai nishaan wahi chod jaate hain na chahate hue bhi har pal humein beeti baatein yaad dilate hain.. very nice amrita........................ Ankhon me uter ker dheere dheere purane gham Palkon pe nanhe nanhe sitare piro gae Ab bachpane ki neend to ek khwab ho gai Wo din kanha ke raat huee aour so gaye........................ |
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«Reply #13 on: June 20, 2005, 10:11:10 AM » |
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nice work all.
"teri dil ki baat me kuch aise pal mujhe nazar aaye,
jo kabhi kisi ne mujhe thhe samjhaaye,
naadan thhi main jo kuch samajhna na chahti thhi,
kisi ke pyaar me bas doobna hi doobna chahti thhi."
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«Reply #14 on: June 20, 2005, 10:19:05 AM » |
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nice work all.
"teri dil ki baat me kuch aise pal mujhe nazar aaye,
jo kabhi kisi ne mujhe thhe samjhaaye,
naadan thhi main jo kuch samajhna na chahti thhi,
kisi ke pyaar me bas doobna hi doobna chahti thhi." wow nidhi ....................kya khoob likhi ho.........very nice dost......... najaney dil main terey kya jazbaat hain ab acha hi kya tha main ney apni dosti ke liye ek wohi hasti thee mehwarey zindagi “Nidhi” taras gaya hoon main us sehar ki roshni ke liye....................... |
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on eTI community..
