Zindagi tamam ho gayee.....(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on April 09, 2009, 06:53:56 AM
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Kab aayee jane subah, kab sham ho gayee
Kuch is tarah tere bina, zindagi tamam ho gayee

Waris tha main akayla, na batee gayee virasat
Barbadiyaan shehar ki, mere nam ho gayee

Woh ghabraker mohabbat se, kar bhaithe bewafaiee
Aur meri wafa  yaro, badnaam ho gayee

Mera raaz_daar mujhse, aakhe laga churane
Jo kahi na thi humne, batein woh bhi aam ho gayee

Mere haq me kaun kehta, kaun deta meri safaiee
Duniya jab yeh sari, husn ki ghulam ho gayee

Nahi guftugu ka salika, jise kehta tha zamana
Usi GHAYEL se ab GHAZLE, hum_kalam ho gayee

Kab aayee jane subah, kab sham ho gayee
Kuch is tarah tere bina, zindagi tamam ho gayee

-Sajid Ghayel-
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #1 on: April 09, 2009, 07:03:36 AM »
Wah kya baat hai sajid ji.. Very nice lines...
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karndhar
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«Reply #2 on: April 09, 2009, 07:20:32 AM »
Bahut Khoob Sajid Ji, Excellent !!!!!!!
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chitralsony
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«Reply #3 on: April 09, 2009, 07:42:38 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 09, 2009, 06:53:56 AM
Kab aayee jane subah, kab sham ho gayee
Kuch is tarah tere bina, zindagi tamam ho gayee

Waris tha main akayla, na batee gayee virasat
Barbadiyaan shehar ki, mere nam ho gayee

Woh ghabraker mohabbat se, kar bhaithe bewafaiee
Aur meri wafa  yaro, badnaam ho gayee

Mera raaz_daar mujhse, aakhe laga churane
Jo kahi na thi humne, batein woh bhi aam ho gayee

Mere haq me kaun kehta, kaun deta meri safaiee
Duniya jab yeh sari, husn ki ghulam ho gayee

Nahi guftugu ka salika, jise kehta tha zamana
Usi GHAYEL se ab GHAZLE, hum_kalam ho gayee

Kab aayee jane subah, kab sham ho gayee
Kuch is tarah tere bina, zindagi tamam ho gayee

-Sajid Ghayel-
subhanallah ghayel ji bhot khoob ,
       dori ka yay tilasam oskay liayy  karger raha
       kon kehta hay kay wo bicher kai tum say mutabr raha
       jo tum say bichernay kay malal kay sath safr may raha
       wohi wafa ka mara tairi nazer may elzam ki zad may raha
       tu to na kr ghayel duniya kay ghulami ki yay batain janaa
       taira mehboob tuj say dur hokay qaid tairay badan may raha
       kon kehta hay kay ata nahi tuj ko guftogu ka saliqa
       jo tuj say hamkalam raha pholon say bharay chaman may raha
       
       
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: April 09, 2009, 11:28:38 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 09, 2009, 06:53:56 AM
Kab aayee jane subah, kab sham ho gayee
Kuch is tarah tere bina, zindagi tamam ho gayee

Waris tha main akayla, na batee gayee virasat
Barbadiyaan shehar ki, mere nam ho gayee

Woh ghabraker mohabbat se, kar bhaithe bewafaiee
Aur meri wafa  yaro, badnaam ho gayee

Mera raaz_daar mujhse, aakhe laga churane
Jo kahi na thi humne, batein woh bhi aam ho gayee

Mere haq me kaun kehta, kaun deta meri safaiee
Duniya jab yeh sari, husn ki ghulam ho gayee

Nahi guftugu ka salika, jise kehta tha zamana
Usi GHAYEL se ab GHAZLE, hum_kalam ho gayee

Kab aayee jane subah, kab sham ho gayee
Kuch is tarah tere bina, zindagi tamam ho gayee

-Sajid Ghayel-

Applause Applause Applause

Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji .. Very nice creation !
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: April 09, 2009, 11:29:23 AM »
Quote from: chitralsony on April 09, 2009, 07:42:38 AM
subhanallah ghayel ji bhot khoob ,
       dori ka yay tilasam oskay liayy  karger raha
       kon kehta hay kay wo bicher kai tum say mutabr raha
       jo tum say bichernay kay malal kay sath safr may raha
       wohi wafa ka mara tairi nazer may elzam ki zad may raha
       tu to na kr ghayel duniya kay ghulami ki yay batain janaa
       taira mehboob tuj say dur hokay qaid tairay badan may raha
       kon kehta hay kay ata nahi tuj ko guftogu ka saliqa
       jo tuj say hamkalam raha pholon say bharay chaman may raha
       
       

Very nice reply Taiba Ji
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #6 on: April 09, 2009, 12:26:32 PM »
Quote from: Sophi on April 09, 2009, 07:03:36 AM
Wah kya baat hai sajid ji.. Very nice lines...

Nawazish Karam hain Dost...
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #7 on: April 09, 2009, 05:48:36 PM »
Quote from: karndhar on April 09, 2009, 07:20:32 AM
Bahut Khoob Sajid Ji, Excellent !!!!!!!

Bohat bohat shukriyaa Karndhar....
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #8 on: April 11, 2009, 07:36:25 AM »
Quote from: chitralsony on April 09, 2009, 07:42:38 AM
subhanallah ghayel ji bhot khoob ,
       dori ka yay tilasam oskay liayy  karger raha
       kon kehta hay kay wo bicher kai tum say mutabr raha
       jo tum say bichernay kay malal kay sath safr may raha
       wohi wafa ka mara tairi nazer may elzam ki zad may raha
       tu to na kr ghayel duniya kay ghulami ki yay batain janaa
       taira mehboob tuj say dur hokay qaid tairay badan may raha
       kon kehta hay kay ata nahi tuj ko guftogu ka saliqa
       jo tuj say hamkalam raha pholon say bharay chaman may raha
     


Tujhse bichad ke nikla, main dhoondne khudhi ko

Lekin jaha bhi pohcha, main tera hi raha....

-SG-
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #9 on: April 12, 2009, 09:22:48 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on April 09, 2009, 11:28:38 AM
Applause Applause Applause

Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji .. Very nice creation !

Bohat shukriyaan Talat...
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