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Tinke tinke jod kar banana aashiyaana zaroori hai
Usey dehtey hue fir dekh kar muskuraana zaroori hai
Hur nayi galti meri mujhey karti hai ishaara
dhundali ho gayi bhoolon ko bhulaana zaroori hai
Nahi is baat ka ub ranj hasratein haasil nahi hoti
Neend aaye to sapno ko sajaana zaroori hai
Ek badi taakleef aayi to ehsaan yeh saath mein laayi
tamaam choti uljhano ko mitaana zaroori hai.
Raaz rindon ka maikdey mein ja ka milta hai
Thokar lagi hai jub to fir ladhkhadana zaroori hai
Mere Bebaak hone ka unhey shikwa raha aksar
pur mehsoos hota hai to fir jataana zaroori hai
--- Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2010, 04:29:10 PM » |
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welldone good job
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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2010, 04:52:55 PM » |
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Marhaba Prateek ji behad achhi poem likhi hai aapne. Very nice creation.
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«Reply #4 on: February 17, 2010, 03:26:18 AM » |
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI PRATEEK MARDIA JI.....
ZINDAGI ME IK BAAT KO YAAD RAKHNA ZAROORI HAI
JO AAYA HAI USE LAUT JAANA ZAROORI HAI
JO TUNE APNE HAATH SE BANAYA HAI
USKI KHUSHI ZAHIR KARNA ZAROORI HAI
TERA KYA HAI JO TERE HAATH SE JAA RAHA HAI
JAATE WAQAT GUM NAHI ZAHIR KARNA ZAROORI HAI
INSAAN SOTA HAI SAPNE TOH DEKHNA ZAROORI HAI
MAGAR HAR SAPNE NAHIN SACH HONA
USKE LIYE DUKH ZAHIR KARNA NAHIN ZAROORI HAI
MUSHKILEN TOH AATI HAI ZINDAGI MEIN USKA AANA ZAROORI HAI
MUSHKILON KO MUSHKARAKAR SAAMNA KARNA BHI ZAROORI HAI...
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«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2010, 05:28:50 PM » |
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #6 on: March 02, 2010, 07:11:32 PM » |
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #7 on: March 02, 2010, 07:14:35 PM » |
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welldone good job
peeth thapathane ka shukria janaab. Marhaba Prateek ji behad achhi poem likhi hai aapne. Very nice creation.
riyaaz ji aapko yeh prayas pasand aaya jaan ke accha laga. aapne isey saraha uskey liye dhanyawaad.shukria. |
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«Reply #8 on: March 02, 2010, 07:16:36 PM » |
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI PRATEEK MARDIA JI.....
ZINDAGI ME IK BAAT KO YAAD RAKHNA ZAROORI HAI
JO AAYA HAI USE LAUT JAANA ZAROORI HAI
JO TUNE APNE HAATH SE BANAYA HAI
USKI KHUSHI ZAHIR KARNA ZAROORI HAI
TERA KYA HAI JO TERE HAATH SE JAA RAHA HAI
JAATE WAQAT GUM NAHI ZAHIR KARNA ZAROORI HAI
INSAAN SOTA HAI SAPNE TOH DEKHNA ZAROORI HAI
MAGAR HAR SAPNE NAHIN SACH HONA
USKE LIYE DUKH ZAHIR KARNA NAHIN ZAROORI HAI
MUSHKILEN TOH AATI HAI ZINDAGI MEIN USKA AANA ZAROORI HAI
MUSHKILON KO MUSHKARAKAR SAAMNA KARNA BHI ZAROORI HAI...
cara ji aapne is kavita ko pasand kiya uska dhnyawaad. Aapki panktiyaan bhee khoob jach rahi hai. |
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«Reply #9 on: March 02, 2010, 07:17:55 PM » |
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aapki khamoosh awaaz mein jo saranhna ke swar goonjey hai unhe paakar dil gadgad hai. shukria. |
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«Reply #10 on: March 02, 2010, 07:19:47 PM » |
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kaash ji , aapne is kavita ko samay diya aur saraaha uskey liye aapka kot koti dhayawaad. |
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«Reply #12 on: March 04, 2010, 10:12:43 AM » |
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Khwaish bhai, yeh aapki dariyadili hai jo choti si kaushish ke liye bhee taareef ke pul baandh dete hai aap.aapki duyaien saath hai isliye kalam kabhi kabhi kuch tukbandiyaan bana leti hai.pasand karne ke liye shukriya janaab.
Yeh Aapka Badapan Hai Jo Aap Itni Achi kavita Ko Tukbandi Ka Naam De Dete Ho..Bas Aap Zara Plz Kuch Kavitaye Likhte Rahiye,Aapse Humesha Kuch Seekhne Ka Mauka Milta Rahega.. |
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«Reply #14 on: March 16, 2010, 07:24:58 PM » |
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Yeh Aapka Badapan Hai Jo Aap Itni Achi kavita Ko Tukbandi Ka Naam De Dete Ho..Bas Aap Zara Plz Kuch Kavitaye Likhte Rahiye,Aapse Humesha Kuch Seekhne Ka Mauka Milta Rahega..
khwaish bhai, aap agar isi tarah hausla badhaayenge to shaayad kabhi koi 'kavita' bhee rach paaye meri kalam bhee.aapka dheron shukriya manobal badhane ke liye. |
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on eTI community..
