Why even a good poem may not get appreciation or comments?

by Ricky on July 01, 2007, 05:00:19 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 19, 2009, 08:32:50 AM »
Thanks for sharing all these valuable points Ricky....
But i would like to share something whats in ma mind from many days....Actually as per ur point 3. we should'not write long poems which ll not hold d interest of d readers. I agree to dis point. But I feel until d meaning of ma poetry s  completely gained i shud kip on writing n if in tht case ma poetry becmg long tht shudnt b any prblm for d readers.....But some of d poets commentd me not to write long poetry....So i think its cz of ur Point no. 3........dey r jst implimenting ur points to us.
N i felt its bad! Dey shud understand d motto of writing a long poem!!
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«Reply #16 on: January 19, 2009, 08:41:30 AM »
Another point i Would like to raise.
Here i saw most of d gud poets encouraged us to write more gud poetries.N m very much thankful to dem!
But some of dem gives negative comments....Its d reason newcomers lyk us ll not feel lyk writing more.Dey just kip on showing u ur mistakes(as per dem) which s not actually a mistake.I would like to say tht it ll b better if dey comment in a better way to improve us...not to show how good dey r n how bad v write.
I felt lyk sharing it here so written...Hope to get a positive response from u!!
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«Reply #17 on: January 19, 2009, 08:59:37 AM »
Another point i Would like to raise.
Here i saw most of d gud poets encouraged us to write more gud poetries.N m very much thankful to dem!
But some of dem gives negative comments....Its d reason newcomers lyk us ll not feel lyk writing more.Dey just kip on showing u ur mistakes(as per dem) which s not actually a mistake.I would like to say tht it ll b better if dey comment in a better way to improve us...not to show how good dey r n how bad v write.
I felt lyk sharing it here so written...Hope to get a positive response from u!!

dear salma ji i agree with you but as far as my knowdlege no one has put a negative comments on your peotry !! and for the readers it doesnt matter how long the peom is whah the always matter is that how sweet the peom is !! ok!! a good poet is that who will not say anything to readers cause the work of peot is to leave the peom and the readers are the one to deciede !! and why ur pointing the fingers to your readers let them say whatever they wish we all are like family here so if some committed any mistake so its the duty of the seniors members to explain them but through PM not in the thread !! so please try an understand the readers what exactly they want from us !! ok !! and forgive me if i am wrong !! Hope you don't mind any thing !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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salil2002
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«Reply #18 on: January 19, 2009, 09:34:15 AM »
i m agree wid what salma had said............
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salma786
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«Reply #19 on: January 19, 2009, 09:45:29 AM »
Abdul ji....Wat i hav written its for d admin's n ricky!
N i felt dose things so i shared here!!
I respect each n every body here...I just want to give light on d point tht we shud encourage n suggest all how dey can improve xcept showing dem dey r not good in poetry!
Dis will lead to conflicts in YOindia n ll reduce d importance of necomers to create sm gud stuff!
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salma786
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«Reply #20 on: January 19, 2009, 09:47:07 AM »
Thanks salil!
It happend to me sometyms...so i mentioned here!
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«Reply #21 on: January 19, 2009, 09:23:41 PM »
I appreciate your conern Salma786, however in point No.3 I never mentioned that you should not write Long Poem. But, I just shared my views as well as personal experience that Long Poem may not get comments/reply as quickly as short one. However, after reading your view I have added one more line to clarify it.

Regarding Negative comment:
I have added Point No. 10 in it. So as said, Yoindia is a Family of poets which is willing to help each. Kindly do not take them as negative comment. Instead ask them how to improve. They should be happy to help you.

Another point i Would like to raise.
Here i saw most of d gud poets encouraged us to write more gud poetries.N m very much thankful to dem!
But some of dem gives negative comments....Its d reason newcomers lyk us ll not feel lyk writing more.Dey just kip on showing u ur mistakes(as per dem) which s not actually a mistake.I would like to say tht it ll b better if dey comment in a better way to improve us...not to show how good dey r n how bad v write.
I felt lyk sharing it here so written...Hope to get a positive response from u!!
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«Reply #22 on: January 20, 2009, 10:14:17 AM »
Kyun Jhoot Bolti Ho Tum,.
Kya Maine Tumhare Post's Par Jawaab Nahi Diye
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«Reply #23 on: February 17, 2009, 12:35:34 PM »

10. Negative Comments/Suggestion for Improvements- Specially for Newcomers: Here on Yoindia Shayariadab our motive is to spread and encourage original poetry. We have many members who improved a lot with time and now are very good poets. In order to improve new comers, experienced poet / senior members can give you suggestion, can tell you way to improve your poetry. Can be a negative comment but Please do not get discouraged from those comments, you may find them negative but they are to improve your skills. Though I request senior members to give suggestion in friendly way and with required explanation. Also, I request members to take suggestion in OPEN instead of PM, that way other members will also get benefit from it.
(Point 10 is based on inputs from salma786)



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Well Ricky,

I think you should now change this one....Though personally I also agree with you that in open threads, in a friendly manner some negative comments and suggestion will help not only that particular poet but also other members to hel......... I get PMs of people to delete such posts from their threads...People still do not welcome negative comments openly....They may do in PMs !!
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«Reply #24 on: February 17, 2009, 01:37:35 PM »
Thanks Ricky that u felt its importance...... I think it has made a difference now n wish people ll keep ur points in mind thumbsup
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«Reply #25 on: March 24, 2009, 08:56:16 AM »
Thanks. We appreciate your help for new comers.
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«Reply #26 on: March 25, 2009, 09:53:27 AM »
very nice sharing Ricky..
strong n deep analysis 4m u..
every point is correct n true..
n i feel if one follows it..his/her poem will definitely
be appreciated...

u ask 4m everyone to make it more clear..i think this is great..

well i would also like to share some points
which i think play important role..

1. IMPORTANT TIPS 4M MEMBERS who can write..
i think those who can write usually give their suggestions.
n their tips matter for a newcomer/poet..he/she shud take
their suggestions/tips positively n shud not be remain biased..
coz their motto is after all a good poem..



2. IMPORTANT TIPS 4m members who dont write..
similarly i think those who dnt write or rarely
write..they are readers so a poet shud take their advice
as per them..n he shud try to implement that..
sometimes they give very important suggestions
which can make the poem more delightful..


3. Store/save nice lines..
sometimes it happens that some nice ideas or lines of poetry
come to poet's mind but he doesn't write or save it..
he/she shud save it through any means..
if he doesnt...then while writing he may not b able to remember
those lines..then either he/she manages it half heartedly or
leave the same n go 4 new poem.
n in this process a good poem which can become a very gud
poem miss by the poet himself n hence cann't get the desired apprctn..


Thanks for the nice suggestions, Kaash Ji....The third point happens with me so many times when I am busy (and some lines come to mind) and later when I am free, not able to recall that  DOH
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«Reply #27 on: May 02, 2009, 12:56:37 AM »
i agree with kaash ji.kabhi kabhi waqt hi nahi milti comments karne ke liye.
ye nahi sochna chaiye usne mere post pe kyun nahi comment kiya.itna hi sochiye ki aap koshish ki kuch likhne ki.mai aaj sabhi shayar se yahi kahungi ,mai sabhi ke shayaris ko respect karti hoon par kabhi kabhi comment nahi kar pati hoon.peace be upon all my friends.god bless you all.
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«Reply #28 on: August 09, 2009, 08:39:30 AM »
Submitting Poems on Yoindia is easy, I have moved your posts to another section.
To answer posts you should first goto Yoindia Shayari Forums and then goto appropriate section and look for "Submit your Poetry / Post" button.

Alternatively, simply use "Submit Your Poetry Now" button which is there on every page.
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«Reply #29 on: June 18, 2010, 10:57:57 PM »
it is worthy well to tell some one special that i love him,because i will be the one who will make you feel so great and special,life is all about love and care,just lets work with one heart to bring a lasting peace to humanity,
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