Why even a good poem may not get appreciation or comments?

by Ricky on July 01, 2007, 05:00:19 PM
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«Reply #30 on: June 22, 2010, 03:00:21 PM »
It is so true..
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«Reply #31 on: October 07, 2010, 06:45:44 AM »
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«Reply #32 on: October 21, 2010, 03:33:40 AM »
Thanks for the suggestion. I apprecite all the points you mentioned. Specially for the new comers on this site, these are good guide lines.
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«Reply #33 on: October 23, 2010, 01:43:26 AM »
nice suggestions.....I fully agree......
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #34 on: October 28, 2010, 07:27:34 AM »
AJI ek baat sach kahun....to ye sar reasons kabhi sach hua karte the..
Ricky jii...apke 1 to 10 sare points padhe pehle laga sahi he..par fir dheere se samajh ayaa ...purani baat ho gaye..

Ankh ka andha naam Nayansukh bhale hi ho ...ap ek bar to check karoge ki sach me andha he ya nahi...
SO RELEVANN OR IRRELEVANT SUBJECT YA HEADLINE YA TOPIC KA KOI FARK NAHI PADTA...

POSTING IN WRONG SECTION: Dikh to ek hi forum par raha he na padha jaye or report kiya jaye to moderator sahi section bh de dege par .....ye bhi nhai kiya jata..

LACK OF SENSE:  SENSE kya hai ...bura kripya koi na mane...ham- me-se kitno ko pata hai ki poems kitne tarah ki hoti hai..jo ham sense ki baat karen..mujhe hi nahi pata ...

chaliye yahi koi bata de mujhe...ki..SHAYARI>>GAZAL>>>RUBAAI>>>SHER>>>NAZM inme kya antar hota hai...agar ye sab jaante he to theek he warna sense ki baat uthani h nahi chahiye...

AAGE na kehete huye sirf itna kahuga..respect and appreciate all ..5 min ke liye apni poem post karne aate he to 5 me se 4min khud ko or 1min sabko dejiye ...koshish to kijiye hiii...kafi kuchh badal jayega~

<<<AGAR KOI BAT GALAT KEH DI HO TO KRIPYA KSHMA KIJIYEGA >>>
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«Reply #35 on: March 01, 2011, 05:10:55 AM »
दोस्त के साथ मेरा जीवन जन्नत बन जाए,
मुरझाये हुए भी फूल खिलने लग जाए,
जिस तरह कृष्ण से सुदामा के चावल खाए,
उसी तरह हम सब इस बंधन में बन जाए।
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«Reply #36 on: July 04, 2011, 03:00:18 PM »
AJI ek baat sach kahun....to ye sar reasons kabhi sach hua karte the..
Ricky jii...apke 1 to 10 sare points padhe pehle laga sahi he..par fir dheere se samajh ayaa ...purani baat ho gaye..

Ankh ka andha naam Nayansukh bhale hi ho ...ap ek bar to check karoge ki sach me andha he ya nahi...
SO RELEVANN OR IRRELEVANT SUBJECT YA HEADLINE YA TOPIC KA KOI FARK NAHI PADTA...

POSTING IN WRONG SECTION: Dikh to ek hi forum par raha he na padha jaye or report kiya jaye to moderator sahi section bh de dege par .....ye bhi nhai kiya jata..

LACK OF SENSE:  SENSE kya hai ...bura kripya koi na mane...ham- me-se kitno ko pata hai ki poems kitne tarah ki hoti hai..jo ham sense ki baat karen..mujhe hi nahi pata ...

chaliye yahi koi bata de mujhe...ki..SHAYARI>>GAZAL>>>RUBAAI>>>SHER>>>NAZM inme kya antar hota hai...agar ye sab jaante he to theek he warna sense ki baat uthani h nahi chahiye...

AAGE na kehete huye sirf itna kahuga..respect and appreciate all ..5 min ke liye apni poem post karne aate he to 5 me se 4min khud ko or 1min sabko dejiye ...koshish to kijiye hiii...kafi kuchh badal jayega~

<<<AGAR KOI BAT GALAT KEH DI HO TO KRIPYA KSHMA KIJIYEGA >>>
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Good, I liked your comments, though you did very little effort to make them easier to read and good to understand but actually that is the hardest part of expressing something over a community or place like Yoindia.

Regarding, "Yeh purani baat ho gayi", well, I suggest you that register as a new member at Yoindia and see Yoindia Shayariadab as if you are seeing it for first time. Rest will be a virtue.

Also, you may have not noticed but you actually supported my POINT 8.
You have written :
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AAGE na kehete huye sirf itna kahuga..respect and appreciate all ..5 min ke liye apni poem post karne aate he to 5 me se 4min khud ko or 1min sabko dejiye ...koshish to kijiye hiii...kafi kuchh badal jayega~

Now read my point No. 8 , so you yourself proved that they are still valid in one or other situation. And one must not forget that I had compiled those points with help of other members. Hence those are actually outcome of cumulative effort.
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«Reply #37 on: October 12, 2011, 08:37:14 PM »
Ricky I agree to all your points and especially about the long poems.
I would like to add another point: Misspelling of the words which I found in many poems. A good poem is spoilt due to misspelling of the words.

My another suggestion is to write the meanings of the difficult words used in the poems. Also it is good if the poets write the bottom line of their poems.
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«Reply #38 on: October 20, 2011, 04:58:25 AM »
TRUTH
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«Reply #39 on: October 26, 2011, 01:48:16 PM »
where i post  my poetry there every one read and comment it

i posted one poem but till yet there is no comment its  mean no body read it

please guide  me
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«Reply #40 on: October 26, 2011, 06:59:35 PM »
Well, people do read but as you already see reasons given here, there must be something which making it little hard for your poem to get comments.

Read all points given in this post, try to figure out what could be issue with your post. I am sure once you figures it out, you can fix it and create something beautiful.
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«Reply #41 on: December 02, 2011, 12:35:02 PM »
nice poet ricky.
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«Reply #42 on: November 06, 2012, 07:50:19 AM »
I added two more points today..
Point 5 and point 6 .

Comment please !
Ricky you have done wonderful job .Hats off. God bless you.
sheel didi

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RAJAN KONDAL
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«Reply #43 on: January 30, 2013, 07:02:43 PM »
it 's real helpfull for me thanks to u
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Advo.RavinderaRavi
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«Reply #44 on: February 11, 2014, 03:39:20 AM »
Great work.
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