Poem... "when i'll not be here".....!!!!!

by sweet_raabii on March 06, 2006, 05:26:35 AM

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When i'll not be here
to Love you

When i'll not be with you
to Share the joy

When i'll not be standing
by You in hard

When i'll not be with you
to Laugh together

When i'll not be living any more
in this Beautiful world of ours

I Assure you
I'll always be your Heart
to say quietly

My Love will always be with YOU.....

By Raabii.


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Poem... "when i'll not be here".....!!!!!

«Reply #1 on: March 06, 2006, 06:06:41 AM »

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Poem... "when i'll not be here".....!!!!!

«Reply #2 on: March 24, 2006, 12:08:52 AM »

Rabi Ji ... !!!

A very simple poem with heavy meaning.

All you are expressing is ... the thought if your lover is not there with you ... but in the end you feel no matter what you'll always have love for your lover burning deep within you.


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Poem... "when i'll not be here".....!!!!!

«Reply #3 on: April 14, 2006, 02:09:06 PM »

raabi ji aapki poem sach mein bahot hi pyaari hai , is peom mein ye baat saaf zahir hoti hai ki how much u care for ur love even when u will not be with him
aap ne likha hai ki "My Love will always be with YOU....."
ye prove kerte hai ki , aap kahi bhi rahe hai, lekin aapka pyaar aapke lover ke saath hamesha rahega


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«Reply #4 on: April 15, 2006, 09:44:43 AM »

very beautifull way of reaasuring your loved one that whatever may happen my love will be there for you.

Sweet rabbi very clear and loud. I love this.

simply great.........