DAAGH DIKHNE LAGE MUJHKO MAHTAAB MEIN ..........HASAN

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Woh   samajhta   hai   apne   ko   Nayaab   meiN ,
Aib  hi  Aib   dhoondhe   hai   Surkhaab   meiN

Justujoo   bus   tumhari   Sar - e - Bazm   hai ,
Ek   talaatum   sa   hai   Chashm - e - Betaab   mein

Jub   se   tuu , aye   Sanam ,  Bewafa   ho  gaya  ,
Daagh   dikhne   lage   mujhko   Mahtaab   meiN

Ho  hi  jaayega   Andaaza   gahraai   ka ,
Kankari   pheink   kar   dekho   Talaab   meiN

Kachchi   Buniyaad   thhi ,  yeh  to  hona  hi   thha ,
Bah   gayee   meri   Basti   bhi   Sailaab   meiN

Paarsai   ki   thhi   jiski   khayee   Qasam  ,
Kya   khabar   thhi   woh   hoga   Sazayaab   meiN

Hai  yeh   Bazm - e - Adab , Koo - e - YaaraaN   naheeN ,
Kuchh   Waza'daari   bhi   rakhiye  Aadaab   meiN

Kab   talak   Tinka   deta   sahaara , 'Hasan'  ,
Aakhirash ,  kho   gaya   main   bhi   Girdaab   meiN










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nayab = rare / extraordinary  ;  surkhaab = a water bird with a rare feather ; talaatum = toofaan ; Parsai = Paaki / piety  ; wazadaari = formal etiquettes ; adaab = manners  ;
Aakhirash = at last / ultimately ; girdaab = Bhanwar
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«Reply #1 on: December 23, 2011, 02:00:49 PM »
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Woh   samajhta   hai   apne   ko   Nayaab   meiN ,
Aib  hi  Aib   dhoondhe   hai   Surkhaab   meiN  Applause Applause

Justujoo   bus   tumhari   Sar - e - Bazm   hai ,
Ek   talaatum   sa   hai   Chashm - e - Betaab   mein  Applause Applause

Jub   se   tuu , aye   Sanam ,  Bewafa   ho  gaya  ,
Daagh   dikhne   lage   mujhko   Mahtaab   meiN  Applause Applause

Ho  hi  jaayega   Andaaza   gahraai   ka ,
Kankari   pheink   kar   dekho   Talaab   meiN  Applause Applause

Kachchi   Buniyaad   thhi ,  yeh  to  hona  hi   thha ,
Bah   gayee   meri   Basti   bhi   Sailaab   meiN  Applause Applause Applause Applause
Ye buniyaade aksar kamjor hoti hai
Paarsai   ki   thhi   jiski   khayee   Qasam  ,
Kya   khabar   thhi   woh   hoga   Sazayaab   meiN  Applause Applause Applause

Hai  yeh   Bazm - e - Adab , Koo - e - YaaraaN   naheeN ,
Kuchh   Waza'daari   bhi   rakhiye  Aadaab   meiN  Applause :clap:Kya Baat hai..

Kab   talak   Tinka   deta   sahaara , 'Hasan'  ,
Aakhirash ,  kho   gaya   main   bhi   Girdaab   meiN

Bahut bahut sanjeedgi hai..








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nayab = rare / extraordinary  ;  surkhaab = a water bird with a rare feather ; talaatum = toofaan ; Parsai = Paaki / piety  ; wazadaari = formal etiquettes ; adaab = manners  ;
Aakhirash = at last / ultimately ; girdaab = Bhanwar

Vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
Hasan Sahab
Jitna doobo, kam hai.. koi kahega 50 ft, koi sau, koi hajaar, mai gaya to vapas hi na aaunga.
Rula diya aapne.. Bahut khoob. Kya Maqta pesh kiya hai.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: December 23, 2011, 02:47:01 PM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab O salaam!



Waah kia kahne janab behad umdaa aur khub gazal se
bazm ko nawaaza hai aapne.. Usual Smile
 
Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe janab... Usual Smile
Kafi umdaa aur gehri soch ka muzahera kiyaa hai daad
daad daad Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye.. Khush O aabad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile







Jub   se   tuu , aye   Sanam ,  Bewafa   ho  gaya  ,
Daagh   dikhne   lage   mujhko   Mahtaab   meiN

Behad khub aur gazab ka sher hai janab
daad daad daad Usual Smile


Ho  hi  jaayega   Andaaza   gahraai   ka ,
Kankari   pheink   kar   dekho   Talaab   meiN

Masha Allaah kia baat hai Siddiqui Sahaab..
Bade tajurbe ki baat kahi hai daad daad daad Usual Smile


Kachchi   Buniyaad   thhi ,  yeh  to  hona  hi   thha ,
Bah   gayee   meri   Basti   bhi   Sailaab   meiN

Bahut khoob janab Kafi purasar raha yeH sher
bhi daad daad daad Usual Smile












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Aakhirash = at last / ultimately ; girdaab = Bhanwar
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«Reply #3 on: December 23, 2011, 02:52:42 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Hasan bhai bahut dilqash andaaz men aapne ye ghazalpesh kee .meree dili mubaarak baad qubool karen.jab jab aapko padgtaa hoon mujhe badd sukoon miltaa hai ek baar fir se daad daad
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«Reply #4 on: December 24, 2011, 08:32:44 AM »
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behtareen ghazal janaab Hasan sahab

dili daad kubul karen

khus rahen
salamat rahen
Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: December 24, 2011, 11:06:24 AM »
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Woh   samajhta   hai   apne   ko   Nayaab   meiN ,
Aib  hi  Aib   dhoondhe   hai   Surkhaab   meiN

Justujoo   bus   tumhari   Sar - e - Bazm   hai ,
Ek   talaatum   sa   hai   Chashm - e - Betaab   mein

Jub   se   tuu , aye   Sanam ,  Bewafa   ho  gaya  ,
Daagh   dikhne   lage   mujhko   Mahtaab   meiN

Ho  hi  jaayega   Andaaza   gahraai   ka ,
Kankari   pheink   kar   dekho   Talaab   meiN

Kachchi   Buniyaad   thhi ,  yeh  to  hona  hi   thha ,
Bah   gayee   meri   Basti   bhi   Sailaab   meiN

Paarsai   ki   thhi   jiski   khayee   Qasam  ,
Kya   khabar   thhi   woh   hoga   Sazayaab   meiN

Hai  yeh   Bazm - e - Adab , Koo - e - YaaraaN   naheeN ,
Kuchh   Waza'daari   bhi   rakhiye  Aadaab   meiN

Kab   talak   Tinka   deta   sahaara , 'Hasan'  ,
Aakhirash ,  kho   gaya   main   bhi   Girdaab   meiN










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nayab = rare / extraordinary  ;  surkhaab = a water bird with a rare feather ; talaatum = toofaan ; Parsai = Paaki / piety  ; wazadaari = formal etiquettes ; adaab = manners  ;
Aakhirash = at last / ultimately ; girdaab = Bhanwar


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«Reply #6 on: December 24, 2011, 02:14:32 PM »
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Vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
Hasan Sahab
Jitna doobo, kam hai.. koi kahega 50 ft, koi sau, koi hajaar, mai gaya to vapas hi na aaunga.
Rula diya aapne.. Bahut khoob. Kya Maqta pesh kiya hai.. Applause Applause Applause

mkv ji , Ghazal  pasand  aayee , bahut  khushi  hui .
Aap  ki hausla  afzai  ke  liye   bahu  bahut  bahut  shukriya .
                                                    Duago , Hasan
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«Reply #7 on: December 24, 2011, 02:17:47 PM »
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Woh   samajhta   hai   apne   ko   Nayaab   meiN ,
Aib  hi  Aib   dhoondhe   hai   Surkhaab   meiN

  nice
Justujoo   bus   tumhari   Sar - e - Bazm   hai ,
Ek   talaatum   sa   hai   Chashm - e - Betaab   mein
waah waah

Jub   se   tuu , aye   Sanam ,  Bewafa   ho  gaya  ,
Daagh   dikhne   lage   mujhko   Mahtaab   meiN
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Ho  hi  jaayega   Andaaza   gahraai   ka ,
Kankari   pheink   kar   dekho   Talaab   meiN
bahut khoob

Kachchi   Buniyaad   thhi ,  yeh  to  hona  hi   thha ,
Bah   gayee   meri   Basti   bhi   Sailaab   meiN
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Paarsai   ki   thhi   jiski   khayee   Qasam  ,
Kya   khabar   thhi   woh   hoga   Sazayaab   meiN
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Hai  yeh   Bazm - e - Adab , Koo - e - YaaraaN   naheeN ,
Kuchh   Waza'daari   bhi   rakhiye  Aadaab   meiN

 Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
Kab   talak   Tinka   deta   sahaara , 'Hasan'  ,
Aakhirash ,  kho   gaya   main   bhi   Girdaab   meiN

kya kaha hai waah








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nayab = rare / extraordinary  ;  surkhaab = a water bird with a rare feather ; talaatum = toofaan ; Parsai = Paaki / piety  ; wazadaari = formal etiquettes ; adaab = manners  ;
Aakhirash = at last / ultimately ; girdaab = Bhanwar

bahut khoob hasan sahab............!
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«Reply #8 on: December 24, 2011, 03:36:44 PM »
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Woh   samajhta   hai   apne   ko   Nayaab   meiN ,
Aib  hi  Aib   dhoondhe   hai   Surkhaab   meiN

Justujoo   bus   tumhari   Sar - e - Bazm   hai ,
Ek   talaatum   sa   hai   Chashm - e - Betaab   mein

Jub   se   tuu , aye   Sanam ,  Bewafa   ho  gaya  ,
Daagh   dikhne   lage   mujhko   Mahtaab   meiN

Ho  hi  jaayega   Andaaza   gahraai   ka ,
Kankari   pheink   kar   dekho   Talaab   meiN

Kachchi   Buniyaad   thhi ,  yeh  to  hona  hi   thha ,
Bah   gayee   meri   Basti   bhi   Sailaab   meiN

Paarsai   ki   thhi   jiski   khayee   Qasam  ,
Kya   khabar   thhi   woh   hoga   Sazayaab   meiN

Hai  yeh   Bazm - e - Adab , Koo - e - YaaraaN   naheeN ,
Kuchh   Waza'daari   bhi   rakhiye  Aadaab   meiN

Kab   talak   Tinka   deta   sahaara , 'Hasan'  ,
Aakhirash ,  kho   gaya   main   bhi   Girdaab   meiN










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nayab = rare / extraordinary  ;  surkhaab = a water bird with a rare feather ; talaatum = toofaan ; Parsai = Paaki / piety  ; wazadaari = formal etiquettes ; adaab = manners  ;
Aakhirash = at last / ultimately ; girdaab = Bhanwar

Waah Waah Waah!!!!

bahut Bahut Khoooob Hasan ji..

Sabhi A'shaar Ek Se Badhkar Ek..

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«Reply #9 on: December 24, 2011, 06:28:13 PM »
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Khoobter hai 'HASAN' yeh Ghazal aapki
Bher gayee yeh khushi chashm-pur-aab mein

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«Reply #10 on: December 24, 2011, 07:45:47 PM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab O salaam!



Waah kia kahne janab behad umdaa aur khub gazal se
bazm ko nawaaza hai aapne.. Usual Smile
 
Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe janab... Usual Smile
Kafi umdaa aur gehri soch ka muzahera kiyaa hai daad
daad daad Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye.. Khush O aabad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile



Parwaaz  saheb , Adaab . Ghazal  padhne 
aur  hausla  afzai  ke  liye  bahut  bahut  shukriya.
Khush  rahiye . Duago ,  HASAN
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«Reply #11 on: December 24, 2011, 09:42:17 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Hasan bhai bahut dilqash andaaz men aapne ye ghazalpesh kee .meree dili mubaarak baad qubool karen.jab jab aapko padgtaa hoon mujhe badd sukoon miltaa hai ek baar fir se daad daad
Saini saheb.Aap  ne  ghazal  sarahi aur
nacheez  ko  purkhuloos  tabsire  se  nawaaza.
Bahut  shukriya . HASAN
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«Reply #12 on: December 25, 2011, 12:52:31 AM »
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Shihab mian , Aap  to  aadaab e mehfil  se khoob
waqif  hain , aap  ko  kaise kuchh kah  sakta  hoon .
Haan   aadaab e mahfil  ko  nazm  zaroor  kiya  hai.
Aap ka  hausla afzai ke liye  bahut bahut  shukriya.
                                               - HASAN
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«Reply #13 on: December 25, 2011, 10:43:43 AM »
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behtareen ghazal janaab Hasan sahab

dili daad kubul karen

khus rahen
salamat rahen
Usual Smile
Sarfira ji.Hausla  afzai  ke  liye
bahut  shukriya.Khush  rahiye.Hasan
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«Reply #14 on: December 25, 2011, 10:58:56 AM »
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Woh   samajhta   hai   apne   ko   Nayaab   meiN ,
Aib  hi  Aib   dhoondhe   hai   Surkhaab   meiN

Justujoo   bus   tumhari   Sar - e - Bazm   hai ,
Ek   talaatum   sa   hai   Chashm - e - Betaab   mein

Jub   se   tuu , aye   Sanam ,  Bewafa   ho  gaya  ,
Daagh   dikhne   lage   mujhko   Mahtaab   meiN

Ho  hi  jaayega   Andaaza   gahraai   ka ,
Kankari   pheink   kar   dekho   Talaab   meiN

Kachchi   Buniyaad   thhi ,  yeh  to  hona  hi   thha ,
Bah   gayee   meri   Basti   bhi   Sailaab   meiN

Paarsai   ki   thhi   jiski   khayee   Qasam  ,
Kya   khabar   thhi   woh   hoga   Sazayaab   meiN

Hai  yeh   Bazm - e - Adab , Koo - e - YaaraaN   naheeN ,
Kuchh   Waza'daari   bhi   rakhiye  Aadaab   meiN

Kab   talak   Tinka   deta   sahaara , 'Hasan'  ,
Aakhirash ,  kho   gaya   main   bhi   Girdaab   meiN










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nayab = rare / extraordinary  ;  surkhaab = a water bird with a rare feather ; talaatum = toofaan ; Parsai = Paaki / piety  ; wazadaari = formal etiquettes ; adaab = manners  ;
Aakhirash = at last / ultimately ; girdaab = Bhanwar

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause
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