KOI ABB CHAAHE SARAAHE , NA SARAAHE MUJHKO ...........HASAN

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Chaahe   tanqeed   kare   chaahe   saraahe   mujhko ,
Uss ki   marzi   pe  hai   woh   kaise   nibaahe   mujhko

Pyaar   samjhooN   maiN   isse , ya   kahuuN   nafrat   usski ,
Uss ko   achchha   nahiiN   lagta   koi   chaahe   mujhko

Kah   diya   Dil  ne  to  phir   dena   hai   Mazloom  ka   saath
Koi   abb   chaahe   saraahe  , na   saraahe   mujhko

Jaane   Manzil   hai   kidhar  , kaun   dagar   jaana   hai ,
Zindagi   chhod   gayee   kaun   doraahe   mujhko

Daulat - e - ilm   bhi   hai , Husn   bhi ,  tahzeeb   bhi   hai ,
Beti   Muflis   ki   huuN   maiN ,  kaun   biyaahe    mujhko

Kaise   ilzaam   duuN   ZakhmoN  pe   Namak - paashi   ka ,
Woh   namak   kay   hai   faqat   bhejta   Phaahe   mujhko

Bistar - e - waqt  pe  Bay - faiz   sa   ek   Laasha   huuN ,
Abb   koi   dekhne   bhi   aaye   to   kaahe   mujhko

Ho   chuka   tark - e - ta'alluq   to  'Hasan'   uss se   magar ,
Chhedta   rahta   hai   woh   gaahe - bagaahe    mujhko
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«Reply #1 on: November 18, 2011, 03:19:14 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 18, 2011, 03:51:53 PM »
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Chaahe   tanqeed   kare   chaahe   saraahe   mujhko ,
Uss ki   marzi   pe  hai   woh   kaise   nibaahe   mujhko

Pyaar   samjhooN   maiN   isse , ya   kahuuN   nafrat   usski ,
Uss ko   achchha   nahiiN   lagta   koi   chaahe   mujhko

Kah   diya   Dil  ne  to  phir   dena   hai   Mazloom  ka   saath
Koi   abb   chaahe   saraahe  , na   saraahe   mujhko

Jaane   Manzil   hai   kidhar  , kaun   dagar   jaana   hai ,
Zindagi   chhod   gayee   kaun   doraahe   mujhko

Daulat - e - ilm   bhi   hai , Husn   bhi ,  tahzeeb   bhi   hai ,
Beti   Muflis   ki   huuN   maiN ,  kaun   biyaahe    mujhko

Kaise   ilzaam   duuN   ZakhmoN  pe   Namak - paashi   ka ,
Woh   namak   kay   hai   faqat   bhejta   Phaahe   mujhko

Bistar - e - waqt  pe  Bay - faiz   sa   ek   Laasha   huuN ,
Abb   koi   dekhne   bhi   aaye   to   kaahe   mujhko

Ho   chuka   tark - e - ta'alluq   to  'Hasan'   uss se   magar ,
Chhedta   rahta   hai   woh   gaahe - bagaahe    mujhko

Bahut Khoob
Bade muddat ke baad ek naayaab kalaam pesh ki apne. apne naam ke mutaabik..par bada intejar karwaya apne..koi gum nahi..lekin dil khush ho gaya..
Mere liye ye ek saugaat ke samaan hai..(teacher bhi hai)..
Poori ghajal ..Masa -allah ..kya alphaj use kiye hai apne..dobara padha tab jake samjha...
Bistar-e-waqt......is ashaar me jo apne 'kaahe' ka istemaal kiya hai...maar daala hame.. Bahut khoob..
Har Ashaar ..mastam mast.
aur ha..Jitna khoobsurat Matla kaha hai, utna hi dam maqte me bhi hai..
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: November 18, 2011, 09:24:43 PM »
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Chaahe   tanqeed   kare   chaahe   saraahe   mujhko ,
Uss ki   marzi   pe  hai   woh   kaise   nibaahe   mujhko

Pyaar   samjhooN   maiN   isse , ya   kahuuN   nafrat   usski ,
Uss ko   achchha   nahiiN   lagta   koi   chaahe   mujhko

Kah   diya   Dil  ne  to  phir   dena   hai   Mazloom  ka   saath
Koi   abb   chaahe   saraahe  , na   saraahe   mujhko

Jaane   Manzil   hai   kidhar  , kaun   dagar   jaana   hai ,
Zindagi   chhod   gayee   kaun   doraahe   mujhko

Daulat - e - ilm   bhi   hai , Husn   bhi ,  tahzeeb   bhi   hai ,
Beti   Muflis   ki   huuN   maiN ,  kaun   biyaahe    mujhko

Kaise   ilzaam   duuN   ZakhmoN  pe   Namak - paashi   ka ,
Woh   namak   kay   hai   faqat   bhejta   Phaahe   mujhko

Bistar - e - waqt  pe  Bay - faiz   sa   ek   Laasha   huuN ,
Abb   koi   dekhne   bhi   aaye   to   kaahe   mujhko

Ho   chuka   tark - e - ta'alluq   to  'Hasan'   uss se   magar ,
Chhedta   rahta   hai   woh   gaahe - bagaahe    mujhko


Main Jab Bhi Aapki Likhe Ghazalein padhta Hoon, Mujhe Fakr Sa Mehsoos Hota Hai ke Aap Hum Sab ke beech Ho..Kya Kehne Hassan Ji Aapke..Umda Shayar Hai Aap..

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob..Har Ek A'shaar Lajawaab Aur Duniya Bhar Ki Gehrai Liye Hue Hai..Bahutttttttttttt AChe..

Yuhi Likhte Rahiye..

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«Reply #4 on: November 19, 2011, 12:02:50 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab badi khub kalaam se nawaaza hai bazm ko.. Usual Smile
Ahsaas O khayaal kafi shayaranaa rahe.. sabhi ashaar
khoob huye haiN janab ... humari dili daad O mubarakbad
kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Aate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile



Chaahe   tanqeed   kare   chaahe   saraahe   mujhko ,
Uss ki   marzi   pe  hai   woh   kaise   nibaahe   mujhko

Achcha Matla kaha hai sahaab.. khub baat kahi hai daad.. Usual Smile   

Pyaar   samjhooN   maiN   isse , ya   kahuuN   nafrat   usski ,
Uss ko   achchha   nahiiN   lagta   koi   chaahe   mujhko

WallaaH Masha Allaah janab behad khubsurat sher kaha hai
daad daad daad.. waqai behad khoob.. Usual Smile   


Kah   diya   Dil  ne  to  phir   dena   hai   Mazloom  ka   saath
Koi   abb   chaahe   saraahe  , na   saraahe   mujhko

Bahut khub Sahaab bahut achche daad ... Usual Smile   

Jaane   Manzil   hai   kidhar  , kaun   dagar   jaana   hai ,
Zindagi   chhod   gayee   kaun   doraahe   mujhko

waah waah waah kia kahne janab aur aik khubsurat sher raha
daad daad daad.. Usual Smile   


Daulat - e - ilm   bhi   hai , Husn   bhi ,  tahzeeb   bhi   hai ,
Beti   Muflis   ki   huuN   maiN ,  kaun   biyaahe    mujhko

Masha Allaah janab khub khayaal baNdha hai daad.. Usual Smile   

Kaise   ilzaam   duuN   ZakhmoN  pe   Namak - paashi   ka ,
Woh   namak   kay   hai   faqat   bhejta   Phaahe   mujhko

Achcha sher hua hai daad.. Usual Smile   

Bistar - e - waqt  pe  Bay - faiz   sa   ek   Laasha   huuN ,
Abb   koi   dekhne   bhi   aaye   to   kaahe   mujhko

Waah Waah waah janab dil ki baat kahi hai hazaaroN daad .. Usual Smile
bahut khoob janab.. Usual Smile   


Ho   chuka   tark - e - ta'alluq   to  'Hasan'   uss se   magar ,
Chhedta   rahta   hai   woh   gaahe - bagaahe    mujhko

Bahut achcha Maqta hai janab daad.. Par sawaal ka jawaab to
wohi bhali bhanti deN aapke Usual Smile   


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«Reply #5 on: November 19, 2011, 09:49:43 AM »
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Siddiqui sahab bahut bahut mubarakbaad janab
ek aur umda gazal aapne mehfill ke naam ki hai
dil se daaaaaaaaaaaaaaad Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: November 19, 2011, 10:44:36 AM »
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Chaahe   tanqeed   kare   chaahe   saraahe   mujhko ,
Uss ki   marzi   pe  hai   woh   kaise   nibaahe   mujhko

Pyaar   samjhooN   maiN   isse , ya   kahuuN   nafrat   usski ,
Uss ko   achchha   nahiiN   lagta   koi   chaahe   mujhko

Kah   diya   Dil  ne  to  phir   dena   hai   Mazloom  ka   saath
Koi   abb   chaahe   saraahe  , na   saraahe   mujhko

Jaane   Manzil   hai   kidhar  , kaun   dagar   jaana   hai ,
Zindagi   chhod   gayee   kaun   doraahe   mujhko

Daulat - e - ilm   bhi   hai , Husn   bhi ,  tahzeeb   bhi   hai ,
Beti   Muflis   ki   huuN   maiN ,  kaun   biyaahe    mujhko

Kaise   ilzaam   duuN   ZakhmoN  pe   Namak - paashi   ka ,
Woh   namak   kay   hai   faqat   bhejta   Phaahe   mujhko

Bistar - e - waqt  pe  Bay - faiz   sa   ek   Laasha   huuN ,
Abb   koi   dekhne   bhi   aaye   to   kaahe   mujhko

Ho   chuka   tark - e - ta'alluq   to  'Hasan'   uss se   magar ,
Chhedta   rahta   hai   woh   gaahe - bagaahe    mujhko

hasan sahab ...masha allah ,,,dil fareb kalaam hai ,,,,sabhi assaar bahut hi nayab hain ,,,,har lafz par dheron daad ke haqdaar hain aaap ...kabul farmayen ...aur nawazte rahen iss bazm ko ,,,apne ,,,khusgwaar ,,,kalaamon se...khuda hafiz
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«Reply #7 on: November 19, 2011, 02:22:54 PM »
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Chaahe   tanqeed   kare   chaahe   saraahe   mujhko ,
Uss ki   marzi   pe  hai   woh   kaise   nibaahe   mujhko

Pyaar   samjhooN   maiN   isse , ya   kahuuN   nafrat   usski ,
Uss ko   achchha   nahiiN   lagta   koi   chaahe   mujhko

Kah   diya   Dil  ne  to  phir   dena   hai   Mazloom  ka   saath
Koi   abb   chaahe   saraahe  , na   saraahe   mujhko

Jaane   Manzil   hai   kidhar  , kaun   dagar   jaana   hai ,
Zindagi   chhod   gayee   kaun   doraahe   mujhko

Daulat - e - ilm   bhi   hai , Husn   bhi ,  tahzeeb   bhi   hai ,
Beti   Muflis   ki   huuN   maiN ,  kaun   biyaahe    mujhko


Kaise   ilzaam   duuN   ZakhmoN  pe   Namak - paashi   ka ,
Woh   namak   kay   hai   faqat   bhejta   Phaahe   mujhko

Bistar - e - waqt  pe  Bay - faiz   sa   ek   Laasha   huuN ,
Abb   koi   dekhne   bhi   aaye   to   kaahe   mujhko

Ho   chuka   tark - e - ta'alluq   to  'Hasan'   uss se   magar ,
Chhedta   rahta   hai   woh   gaahe - bagaahe    mujhko




bahut khoobsurat ghazal. jo highlight kiya hai wo khususan pasand aaya hasan sahab
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«Reply #8 on: November 19, 2011, 08:21:49 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:Hasan bhai ashaar bahut achhe nibhaaye gaye hain .dil kee gahraaiyon se daad o mobaarak qbool farmaaye.
Saini ji,Ghazal parhne aur hausla afzai ko khoobsurti se nibaahne ke liye tah e dil se shukriya.Hasan
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«Reply #9 on: November 20, 2011, 09:49:29 AM »
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Bahut Khoob
Bade muddat ke baad ek naayaab kalaam pesh ki apne. apne naam ke mutaabik..par bada intejar karwaya apne..koi gum nahi..lekin dil khush ho gaya..
Mere liye ye ek saugaat ke samaan hai..(teacher bhi hai)..
Poori ghajal ..Masa -allah ..kya alphaj use kiye hai apne..dobara padha tab jake samjha...
Bistar-e-waqt......is ashaar me jo apne 'kaahe' ka istemaal kiya hai...maar daala hame.. Bahut khoob..
Har Ashaar ..mastam mast.
aur ha..Jitna khoobsurat Matla kaha hai, utna hi dam maqte me bhi hai..
 Applause Applause Applause
Ab bas ise dhoom machane ke liye chod dijiye.
MKV ji,Adab.Thore  alag se radeef o qaafiye mein she'r kahne ka maza hi kuchh aur hai.Kabhi kabhi mai bhi koshish kar leta hoon.Aap ne pasand farmaaya,bahut mashkoor hoon.Insha allah eik do aisi aur koshishein hain jo kabhi aap doston ki khidmat mein haazir karoonga.Khush rahiye.Duago , HASAN
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«Reply #10 on: November 20, 2011, 02:08:10 PM »
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Main Jab Bhi Aapki Likhe Ghazalein padhta Hoon, Mujhe Fakr Sa Mehsoos Hota Hai ke Aap Hum Sab ke beech Ho..Kya Kehne Hassan Ji Aapke..Umda Shayar Hai Aap..

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob..Har Ek A'shaar Lajawaab Aur Duniya Bhar Ki Gehrai Liye Hue Hai..Bahutttttttttttt AChe..

Yuhi Likhte Rahiye..

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Khwaish ji,Bahut bahut shukriya.Aap ki zarranawaazi hai.Aap jaise sukhanwar aur sukhanshinaas agar apni mohabbat se nawaazte hain to meri koshishon ke liye eik azeem sarmaaye se kum nahiin.Khush rahiye.Duago,HASAN
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«Reply #11 on: November 20, 2011, 03:35:14 PM »
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Wah kya kehne bahut khub janaab hasan sahab
Waise aapko daad dene ki humari auqaat to nahi
Phir bhi raha nahi gaya so maafi chahta hun main
is khoobsurat peshkash pe mubarakbad aur
Hazaaron dili daad janaab...

Shad o aabad rahiye...

Shihab...
Azizam  Shihab  mian , AOA. Aap  itne  takallufaat  se  kaam  lete  hain  ki  Lucknow  waale  bhi  aap  ke  saamne  pani  bharte  mahsoos  hote  hain. Aap  ke tabsire , chaahe  tanqeed  mein  hon  ya  sataaish  mein  ,  sar  aankhon  per hain . Iss  liye  guzarish  hai  ki  aap  zyaada  inkisaar  se  kaam  na  lein  ki  yeh  khaksaar  bilkul  zameen  mein  hi  garr  jaaye , bulki  YO  ke  mere azeez  aur  naujawaan  dost  ki  tarah  be jhijhak  ,  be baak  tabsire  ke  saath  mezbaani  ka  mauqa  dein . Duago , HASAN

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«Reply #12 on: November 20, 2011, 08:47:27 PM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab badi khub kalaam se nawaaza hai bazm ko.. Usual Smile
Ahsaas O khayaal kafi shayaranaa rahe.. sabhi ashaar
khoob huye haiN janab ... humari dili daad O mubarakbad
kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Aate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile


Parwaaz saheb,Aap ke purkhuloos tabsire aur mubarakbad ke liye tahe dil se mamnoon hoon.Khush rahiye.Duago,Hasan 
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«Reply #13 on: November 20, 2011, 08:50:53 PM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab badi khub kalaam se nawaaza hai bazm ko.. Usual Smile
Ahsaas O khayaal kafi shayaranaa rahe.. sabhi ashaar
khoob huye haiN janab ... humari dili daad O mubarakbad
kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Aate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile


Parwaaz  saheb. Aap  ke  purkhuloos  tabsire aur  mubarakbaad  ke  liye  tahe  dil  se  mamnoon  hoon . Khush rahiye . Duago , Hasan


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«Reply #14 on: November 21, 2011, 09:12:54 AM »
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Siddiqui sahab bahut bahut mubarakbaad janab
ek aur umda gazal aapne mehfill ke naam ki hai
dil se daaaaaaaaaaaaaaad Applause Applause Applause
Sanjeev  kash  ji . Aap  ka  ghazal  parhne  aur  naacheez  ki hausla  afzai  ke  liye  bahut  bahut  shukriya . Apna  saath  banaaye rakhiyega . Duago , HASAN
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