ghazal

by yati_om on December 19, 2009, 04:45:44 PM
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कौन  मानेगा  नसीहत  ही मेरी.
खुल गयी है जब हकीकत ही मेरी.

चुटकुले सब आपके दिलचस्प हैं,
अनमनी कुछ है तबीयत ही मेरी.

कौन अपमानित कराता है मुझे,
सच कहूँ तो सिर्फ नीयत ही मेरी.

साथ होगा कौन अंतिम दौर में,
तय करेगी अब वसीयत ही मेरी.

यार तुम भी सज गए बाज़ार में,
पूछते फिरते थे कीमत ही मेरी.

         -ओमप्रकाश यती
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«Reply #1 on: December 19, 2009, 05:23:58 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB YATI JI Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: December 19, 2009, 06:20:29 PM »
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बहुत उत्तम गज़ल लिखी हॅ ओमप्रकाश जी. बधाई. आशा हॅ आगे भी आपकी रचनाओ का रसास्वादन होता रहेगा. मेरा एक शेर अर्ज़ है 

अब दिया उम्मीद  का जलता नही
जो बिछड जाता है वो मिलता नही

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guhar
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«Reply #3 on: December 19, 2009, 06:51:46 PM »
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yati ji...
shreshta,,,,kaabile-e -daad....bahot khoob....itni bhadiya kriti parosne ke liye dhanyawaad. icon_albino
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #4 on: December 20, 2009, 03:06:52 PM »
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Nice
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #5 on: December 20, 2009, 03:11:03 PM »
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Nice one Om Ji
You had already posted the same in English Script
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #6 on: December 21, 2009, 12:23:13 AM »
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Beautiful gazal Yati ji,lovely line Riyaz ji,bahut khoob icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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