Ghazlen

by @kaash on February 05, 2010, 08:00:14 PM
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chand harfon si har zindagi ek ghazal hi si hai
saba ho shamma ho mehfil bhi ek ghazal hi si hai


khumar ka har lamha betahasha khumari bharta
bekarari khwabon se jo milti ek ghazal hi si hai


harf-e-andaaz ke janib harf-e-ashaar ke jaanib bhi
kalam jo machal ke ruk ke chalti ek ghazal hi si hai


hairaan hote ho kyun kaisi ye chahaten thahri
khyaalon ke aagan ki chhaanv si,ek ghazal hi si hai



kisi ummeed se nahi badhti na kisi takreer se ulajhti
haule se dil-e-baagba ki rawani,ek ghazal hi si hai




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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2010, 02:53:54 PM »
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very nice ghazal........
kash ji......
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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2010, 06:01:25 PM »
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BEHTREEN KAASH SAHAB Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2010, 06:53:41 PM »
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Wah Aakaashji achhi ghazal hai aap ki... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kal-kal karti behti nadeeya ek ghazal hi si hai
Khil-khilaati teri wo hansi,ek ghazal hi si hai

Chatakti kheelti ye kaliyein,ek ghazal hi si hai
Jhukti-uthti teri ye palkein,ek ghazal hi si hai

Gulab par utri oos ki boonde,ek ghazal hi si hai
Ruksaar se utarte tere aansoo,ek ghazal hi si hai



chand harfon si har zindagi ek ghazal hi si hai
saba ho shamma ho mehfil bhi ek ghazal hi si hai


khumar ka har lamha betahasha khumari bharta
bekarari khwabon se jo milti ek ghazal hi si hai


harf-e-andaaz ke janib harf-e-ashaar ke jaanib bhi
kalam jo machal ke ruk ke chalti ek ghazal hi si hai


hairaan hote ho kyun kaisi ye chahaten thahri
khyaalon ke aagan ki chhaanv si,ek ghazal hi si hai



kisi ummeed se nahi badhti na kisi takreer se ulajhti
haule se dil-e-baagba ki rawani,ek ghazal hi si hai





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«Reply #4 on: February 07, 2010, 12:34:39 AM »
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Thanks...shukriya...dhanyawaad...aakashji....

shukriya, aapne bhi bahut acha likha hai
thanks a lot for the appreciation
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«Reply #5 on: February 07, 2010, 07:02:41 PM »
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Nice Kaash Ji And u Also Creation Nice Koyal JI
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«Reply #6 on: February 08, 2010, 04:27:41 PM »
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Wah wah kya baat hai Aakaashji....
badi badhiya lines hain aapki.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Hado ki kya baat karte,ye dard-o-gham be-had hain
Aao ab hum sehte-sehte sitam,iske humsafar ho len




dil kahta hai dhadkano se lipatke ro len
ashk itne thak chuke,kahte hain so len

dard ki had kya aur sitam ki had kya
gham ruken bhi yun,ek silsila-e-dard ho len

falsafon pe falsafen kahin kahaniyun ki daastaa
kagaz ko mayassar nahi berukhi-e-kalam ho len

kitni tanhayiyan faqat ek tanhayi lati hai
masrufiyat jitni bhi badhen,akhirash ruswa ho len

sukoon jab zara mila sukoon ko hi talaashta fira
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«Reply #7 on: March 10, 2010, 05:52:35 PM »
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Bohot khoob Kaash Ji..bohot khoob ghazlain likhi hain aapne....

Koyal, aapne bhi achcha saath diya......
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«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2010, 07:37:21 PM »
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Shukriya..Rishi-bhai....

Nice Kaash Ji And u Also Creation Nice Koyal JI
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«Reply #9 on: March 17, 2010, 07:38:15 PM »
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Dhanaywaad Aakaash-ji.....


shukriya Rishi dear and Koyal ji
acha sher likha hai aapne Koyal ji   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: March 17, 2010, 07:39:22 PM »
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Tahe dil se shukriya Talat-di..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Bohot khoob Kaash Ji..bohot khoob ghazlain likhi hain aapne....

Koyal, aapne bhi achcha saath diya......
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«Reply #11 on: March 20, 2010, 11:04:02 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: April 04, 2010, 05:03:52 PM »
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Wah wah kaash ji,bahut badiya,dil ko chu gayi aapke gazal.mindblowing creation,Koyal ji aape bhi kamaal ke lines likhi. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: April 06, 2010, 01:33:37 PM »
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Nice Ghazals Kaash Ji
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«Reply #14 on: April 22, 2010, 03:26:53 PM »
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Wah wah Kaash ji bahut khoobsurat gazal pesh kiya aapne.marvelous creation.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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