Jab kabhi unko deykhtaa hoon paas aatey huye!

by abdbundeli on January 14, 2009, 12:54:17 PM
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Jab kabhi unko deykhtaa hoon paas aatey huye!
Naseem-e-khuld lahartee hai gungunaatey huye!!

Dagmagaatey hain qadam bey-piye zamaaney key;
Jab guzartaa hai meyraa yaar dagmagaatey huye!

Lakh kahtaa hoon, “Nazar hai buree zamaaney kee;
Nazar bachaayaa karo, lout key ghar jaatey huye!”

Tum ho anjaan usooloun sey nigahbaanoun key;
Ham ney deykhaa hai buzurgoun ko budbudaatey huye!

Raat-din ro key samundar ko kiyaa hai khaaraa;
Koyi Majnu na milaa lailiyoun ko gaatey huye!

Koun kahtaa hai rah-e-ishq naheen hai aasaan?
Qaafiley deykhiye shahnaaiyaan bajaatey huye!

Ab, akheeree mein kyaa sunaayen: kon suntaa hai:
Umra guzree ho jisey baarhaa sunaatey huye?
 
Log kahtey hain, ‘abd’ ab bhi hai jawaan shaayad!
Kareygaa kooch nagmah-e-shabaab gaatey huye!!

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«Reply #1 on: January 14, 2009, 05:08:17 PM »
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Really Nice One Abd Ji
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«Reply #2 on: January 14, 2009, 10:58:05 PM »
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kya baat hai adbji....

har chiz se waquf hai 'adb' zamaanake,
husn ko dekh kar,bujurg dagmagate hai zamaane mein.
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«Reply #3 on: January 14, 2009, 11:27:50 PM »
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Bahoot khoob likha hai abd ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 15, 2009, 12:11:12 AM »
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Really Nice One Abd Ji
Shukriyah Rajesh Harish ji! I'm happy you liked it!
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«Reply #5 on: January 15, 2009, 12:12:39 AM »
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kya baat hai adbji....
har chiz se waquf hai 'adb' zamaanake,
husn ko dekh kar,bujurg dagmagate hai zamaane mein.
Shukriyah janaab!
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«Reply #6 on: January 15, 2009, 12:13:56 AM »
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Bahoot khoob likha hai abd ji Applause Applause
Thanks a lot salma786 ji!
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«Reply #7 on: January 15, 2009, 04:40:48 AM »
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Wah abd bhai jitna padaha hain ab tak aapko usme yeh muje sabseeeeeeeeeee ziyada pasand aayee waise to sher ke zariye dad deta hu aapko par is bar kehne ka dil hua ke Subhan_allah

Bohat parsaiee ki batein jo karta tha kabhi humse
Humne dekha hain use bhi badnaam galiyo me jatey huye
Koi gunah koi sharam koi khudaye khauf na raha usme
GHAYEL ne to sirf pee thi, ABD ko dekha hain sharabo se nahate huye

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«Reply #8 on: January 15, 2009, 06:03:35 AM »
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Wah abd bhai jitna padaha hain ab tak aapko usme yeh muje sabseeeeeeeeeee ziyada pasand aayee waise to sher ke zariye dad deta hu aapko par is bar kehne ka dil hua ke Subhan_allah

Bohat parsaiee ki batein jo karta tha kabhi humse
Humne dekha hai use bhi badnaam galiyo me jatey huye
Koi gunah koi sharam koi khudaye khauf na raha usme
GHAYEL ne to sirf pee thi, ABD ko dekha hai sharabo se nahate huye

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Sajid Ghayel ji!
Aapkey comments pyaarey lagey! Waisey bhi pyaarey logoun ki baateyn to pyaaree lagteen hi hain! SHUKRIYAH!


Guzrey hain ham us dour sey, paa saaqiyah kaa saath;
Khum ki to baat kyaa kaheyn, maykhaanah pee gaye!
Us kaa karam na hotaa, to, hotaa na jaaney kyaa?
Us ney pilaayee khoob: jiye; itnaa jii gaye!!

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«Reply #9 on: January 15, 2009, 07:44:47 AM »
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u r really very talented! keep it up!
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«Reply #10 on: January 15, 2009, 08:36:37 AM »
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u r really very talented! keep it up!
Thanks for the commendations!
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«Reply #11 on: January 15, 2009, 08:54:17 AM »
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mashallah....bahut accha likha hai abd ji.. Clapping Smiley....kya mai aapka naam jaan sakti hun?? if u dont mind...... Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: January 15, 2009, 11:40:31 PM »
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mashallah....bahut accha likha hai abd ji.. Clapping Smiley....kya mai aapka naam jaan sakti hun?? if u dont mind...... Usual Smile
Thanks a lot fairy2633 ji!
Aap to 'fairy' hain, to waisey bhi aap sey kyaa chhupaa huaa hogaa!!
Poochh hi raheen hain, to,meyraa pooraa naam Ram Prakash Garg hai! Mein teen 'upnaamoun' sey 'leykhan kaarya' kartaa hoon:
1. Hindi mein 'Ramwatiya'; 2. English mein 'G.R.Prakash' aur 3. Urdu mein 'abd bundeli'
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