"khoobsurat ek intekhaab ho tum"

by aaina on September 02, 2009, 10:05:30 PM
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Harf e aakhir mera jawaab ho tum
Zindagi aisi ek kitaab ho tum

Usko acha laga hai koi karam
Mujhko jo mil gaya swaab ho tum

Aaino ki kahan zaroorat tumhe
Husn e bepanah lajawab ho tum

Isse pehle zindagi ne jo kya hi nahi
Wo khoobsurat ek intekhaab ho tum

Tum to likhi ho jabee.n par meree
Aur mein samjhta tha mahtaab ho tum

Khatam na hoga jo mere jeete jii aslam
Wafaao.n ka ek aisa hisaab ho tum
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«Reply #1 on: September 02, 2009, 11:35:53 PM »
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Wah wah bohat khoob very nice Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 02, 2009, 11:58:22 PM »
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bahoot khoob aaina ji!!
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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2009, 02:14:51 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Aaina ji mindblowing creation. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2009, 11:27:23 AM »
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Masha Allah... mere paas alfaaz nai hain, itni khubsurat paesh kash hai ye Aslam bhai!
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«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2009, 11:34:26 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on September 02, 2009, 10:05:30 PM
Harf e aakhir mera jawaab ho tum
Zindagi aisi ek kitaab ho tum

Usko acha laga hai koi karam
Mujhko jo mil gaya swaab ho tum

Aaino ki kahan zaroorat tumhe
Husn e bepanah lajawab ho tum

Isse pehle zindagi ne jo kya hi nahi
Wo khoobsurat ek intekhaab ho tum

Tum to likhi ho jabee.n par meree
Aur mein samjhta tha mahtaab ho tum

Khatam na hoga jo mere jeete jii aslam
Wafaao.n ka ek aisa hisaab ho tum


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Aslam Ji, aap ki ghazalon ki jitni taareef ki jaaye kam hai.....Ek baar phir se Yoindia ko aapne ek nayaab tohfa diya hai is ghazal ki surat main....Bohot bohot khoob.....Khoobsurat lafzon se saja ek guldasta hai ye aapki ghazal jis ki khushbu khud likhne waale ki maharat bayaan kar rahi hai.
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«Reply #6 on: September 03, 2009, 02:26:49 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoobsurat likha hia aapne. Sahi mein ye ek nayaab moti hai yoindia ke khazane ka Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: September 03, 2009, 02:44:15 PM »
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Bahut hi acchi ghazal hai
ek tareeke ki taraashi hui kaarigiri

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: September 16, 2009, 09:14:56 AM »
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Quote from: khushi4pari on September 02, 2009, 11:35:53 PM
Wah wah bohat khoob very nice Applause Applause Applause Applause


thnxxxxx pari...............
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«Reply #9 on: September 16, 2009, 09:15:35 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on September 02, 2009, 11:58:22 PM
bahoot khoob aaina ji!!




bhut bhut shukriya pooja ji
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«Reply #10 on: September 16, 2009, 09:17:18 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on September 03, 2009, 02:14:51 AM
Wah wah bahut khoob Aaina ji mindblowing creation. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



thnxxxxxxx so much madhu ji thnxxx for ur beautifull comments
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«Reply #11 on: September 16, 2009, 09:19:20 AM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on September 03, 2009, 11:27:23 AM
Masha Allah... mere paas alfaaz nai hain, itni khubsurat paesh kash hai ye Aslam bhai!


A_D bhut bhut skhukriya is hosla afzaai ka god bless u
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«Reply #12 on: September 16, 2009, 09:20:12 AM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on September 03, 2009, 02:26:49 PM
Bahut bahut khoobsurat likha hia aapne. Sahi mein ye ek nayaab moti hai yoindia ke khazane ka Clapping Smiley



thnxxxxxxxx so much angel zarra nawaazi hai aapki...............
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«Reply #13 on: September 16, 2009, 09:21:17 AM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on September 03, 2009, 02:44:15 PM
Bahut hi acchi ghazal hai
ek tareeke ki taraashi hui kaarigiri

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause



bhut shukriya reaper ji thnxxxxxx alot
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«Reply #14 on: September 16, 2009, 09:23:49 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on September 03, 2009, 11:34:26 AM
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Aslam Ji, aap ki ghazalon ki jitni taareef ki jaaye kam hai.....Ek baar phir se Yoindia ko aapne ek nayaab tohfa diya hai is ghazal ki surat main....Bohot bohot khoob.....Khoobsurat lafzon se saja ek guldasta hai ye aapki ghazal jis ki khushbu khud likhne waale ki maharat bayaan kar rahi hai.



Merbaani hai aapki talat jo aap is nazariye se daikhti aur sochti hain aapke in khoobsurat alfaazo.n ka tahe dil se shukruguzaar hu.n bhut bhut shukriya you.n hi hosla badhaati rahiye, Allah aapko khush rakhe aameen
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