mahnat karke dekh,,ghazal,,,,,jeet jainam saini,,,,,

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aaj na koi sad shayri na koi romentice kuch alag tareh ki ghazal likhne ki koshish kar raha hu,umeed hai apko pasand aayegi,

kiyon insaan beimaani ke raah par chala jata hai,
mahnat to karke dakh is se bhi pet bhar jata hai,

woh shaks kiyaa  janega kisi bebas ka dard o gam,
jo chaar pasia hath aa jaane se  akkad  jata hai,

gareebo,n ko ujaad log banane lage ghar kanch ke,
par woh na jane ek pather se kanch toot jata hai,

shohrat milte hee apne bado ka jo  niraadar kare,
eyse bemuravat logo,n se khuda bhi ruth jata hai,

waqt ki raftaar main apno ko piche  chorene wala,
apni hee sajaayi mahfil main tanha  rah jata hai,

ameeri ki chakaa chondh jiski ankho mai pad jaye,
woh  har jaroorat  mand ko  andekha kar jata hai,

der saver jab  pachtaave kee  aag bhadkti dil par,
bebas hokar zamaane ke bich tadapta  rah jata hai,
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«Reply #1 on: March 26, 2015, 10:50:07 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 27, 2015, 05:40:48 AM »
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bahut aunder prernaa detaa huaa kalaam
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«Reply #3 on: March 27, 2015, 10:09:05 AM »
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sahi kaha, bahut achhey
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«Reply #4 on: March 27, 2015, 04:50:26 PM »
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bohat bohat shukriya surinder sir ji daaaaaaadddddd or rau kabool
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«Reply #5 on: March 27, 2015, 04:51:31 PM »
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