najoomi dekh zara,,,ghazal,,,,,,jeet jainam

by jeet jainam on December 07, 2014, 09:27:08 PM
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mare hatho,n ki  lakeerai,n  kiyon  mitt  see  gayi hain,
najoomi dekh zara kiyon rishto ki dor katt see gayi hain,

bhool aaye  hain  hum apni  takdeer na  jaane  kis jageh,
ab to dard  bhadta  gaya  khushi bhi ghatt see gayi hain,

main nahi  janta ye dil-e-nadaan kiya kar bethe kisi din,
gairo,n ka gum sambhalte huye dhadkan tham see gayi hain,

didaar-e-yaar ho jata ek  baar yahi  tammnaa  rahi akhri,
par uska intezaar  karte-karte  saanse ruk see gayi hain,

mera bhi haal mohhobat  main  kiya tumne majnu ke  jaisa,
tujhe abaad karte gaye  khud ki hasti lutt see gayi hain,

hath pakad kar uska aksar paar laga  diya karte they hum,
aaj bin uske ye kashti kinaare par hi dubb see gayi hain,



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«Reply #1 on: December 07, 2014, 09:33:24 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 07, 2014, 11:52:39 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 08, 2014, 01:58:09 AM »
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Jeet jee Aadaab ...!

Waah janaab waah bahut khoob ... badi achchi peshkash rahi ...
Kafi khoobsurat ahsaas O khayaaloN ko baNdha hai aapne ...

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhte rahiye bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


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«Reply #4 on: December 08, 2014, 05:01:43 AM »
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bahut umdah Jeet Sahib, dheron daad.
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«Reply #5 on: December 08, 2014, 09:20:25 AM »
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Housla afjai or hame waqt dane ke liye tah dil se shukriya parwaaz sir ji
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Bohat bohat shukriya surinder sir ji
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«Reply #7 on: December 08, 2014, 12:43:30 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: December 08, 2014, 03:59:44 PM »
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bahut bahut khub jeetji..........
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