My First Ghazal

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Apna Ghar Khud Hi Khud Banaya Hai
Usko Hamnay Hi Khud Sajaya Hai
Ghar Mai Deewar Ki Parchaii Thi
Mainay Samjha Ki Tera Saya Hai
Tez Andhii Ne Hilaya Tha Mera Darwaza
Mainay Samjha Ke Koi Aya Hai
Khwaab Mai Paas Tujhko Dekha Tha
Mainay Samjha Ki Tujhko Paaya Hai
Merey Sar Par Jo Ashiyaana Hai
Mai Samjhta Tha Tera Saaya Hai
Sotay Sotay Hi Raat Mai Aksar
Teri Yado Ne Hi Jagaya Hai
Uski Tareef Mai Karu Kaisay
Jisko Khaliq Ne Khud Banaya Hai
Saray Aalam Se Mai Ye Kehta Hoon
Mainay To Sirf Usko Chaha Hai
Chahe Amber Ke Jaisa Saami Ho
Usko Bhi Bolna Sikhaya Hai
Jisko Roshan Kiya Zamane Mai
Usnay Hi Humko Azmaya Hai
Neend Ati Nahi Hai Raatoo Mai
Teri Yaado Ne Kyun Sayata Hai
Meri Chahat Ko Koi Kuch Bhi Kahe
Meri Chahat To Ek Nageena Hai
Daad Deney Ko To Sabhi Hain Yahan
Wo Nahi Dil Mai Jo Samaya Hai
Aaj Ashkoo Ki Roshnayi Se
Is Ghazal Ko Bhi Kya Sajaya Hai
Chalo Samjha Hi Letey Hain Dil Ko
Woh Nahi Uska Tasawwur To Dil Mai Aya Hai
Likhna Chahu To Kya Nahi Likh Sakta
Mainay Khud Khudko Hi Chupaya Hai
Aj Fursat Mili To Likh Dala
Soke "Hussain" Ko Jagaya Hai

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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2010, 09:36:07 AM »
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Bahot achhi lagi aapki ye pehli ghazal Alam ji. Agli ghazal ka intezar hai.
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2010, 10:31:37 AM »
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Wow very beautiful gazal Bored ji,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2010, 02:51:58 PM »
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Bahot achhi lagi aapki ye pehli ghazal Alam ji. Agli ghazal ka intezar hai.
SHukriya Zarra Nawazi Ka Riyaz Sahab
Insha Allah Bahut Jald Doosri GHazal Lekar Haazir Ho Jaoonga Apki Khidmat Mai:)
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«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2010, 02:52:36 PM »
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Wow very beautiful gazal Bored ji,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Shukriya Sis  Passand Karne Ka
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«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2010, 03:18:24 PM »
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Bahut Khub Alam Ji Padhkar Bahut Hi Accha Laga
Aage Bhi Hume Aapki Nai Gazal Ka Intzar Rahega


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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2010, 03:18:58 PM »
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Shukriya Bhai Passand Karne Ka

Alam JI Ye Bhai Nahi Bahan Hai
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2010, 03:25:18 PM »
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Bahut Khub Alam Ji Padhkar Bahut Hi Accha Laga
Aage Bhi Hume Aapki Nai Gazal Ka Intzar Rahega


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Shukriya Rishi Bhai Zarra Nawazi Ka Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2010, 03:27:31 PM »
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Alam JI Ye Bhai Nahi Bahan Hai

Sorry Bhai I Didn't Know Dat I Edited Ma Post Thanks:)
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«Reply #9 on: January 22, 2010, 03:28:25 PM »
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Sorry Bhai I Didn't Know Dat I Edited Ma Post Thanks:)

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«Reply #10 on: January 23, 2010, 07:53:28 PM »
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Bahut Hi Khubsurat Gazal Likhi hai padhkar ye nahi lagta ki ye aapki  first gazal hai maze huve shayar ki tarah likhi hai
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«Reply #11 on: January 23, 2010, 08:01:37 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Alam Ji.. Bahoot Khoob .. Keep writing ...
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Bahut Hi Khubsurat Gazal Likhi hai padhkar ye nahi lagta ki ye aapki  first gazal hai maze huve shayar ki tarah likhi hai
Bahut Shukriya
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«Reply #14 on: January 25, 2010, 11:27:35 PM »
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bahut khoob janab bored sahab....behtreen peshkash....yeh aaghaz hai to INSHAALLAH AAP AAGEY HUMAIN ISS TARH KI AUR BHI GHAZAL SEY RU- BARU KARAIN GEY


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