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Khole Kitaab
Dopehar
Lafz Lafz
Sulagh Rahi Hai ...
Har Shaam
Udaas Badan
Bistar Ki Chaadar Lapete
Siisak Rahi Hai ...
Kis Iraade Se
Hawaa
Intezar Ke Darwaaze Pe
Subha-Shaam
Dastak De Rahi Hai ...
Jab Ki
Be-Matlab
Saaye Ke Bharam MeN
Makaan Ki
DiiwaaroN Se Dhankii
Akele
Zindagi Ki SaanseN
Rozaanaa
Dam ToDh Rahi Hai ... !
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2011, 07:18:30 AM » |
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ufffffffffff.........
naresh ji behad kamsin shabd likhe he apne.........dil me gudgudi ho gayi ji..........
Har Shaam
Udaas Badan
Bistar Ki Chaadar Lapete
Siisak Rahi Hai ...
Kis Iraade Se
Hawaa
Intezar Ke Darwaaze Pe
Subha-Shaam
Dastak De Rahi Hai ...
kya khana janab.........bast no words for this mast poetry.....
daad he sahab
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2011, 07:32:52 AM » |
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ufff bahut hi kamsin words use kiye hain aapne Ansumali ji.
ufff bahut gazab hai uff.
kya mast kikha hai aapne sachhi me.
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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2011, 08:43:48 AM » |
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«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2011, 12:11:47 PM » |
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ufffffffffff.........
naresh ji behad kamsin shabd likhe he apne.........dil me gudgudi ho gayi ji..........
Har Shaam
Udaas Badan
Bistar Ki Chaadar Lapete
Siisak Rahi Hai ...
Kis Iraade Se
Hawaa
Intezar Ke Darwaaze Pe
Subha-Shaam
Dastak De Rahi Hai ...
kya khana janab.........bast no words for this mast poetry.....
daad he sahab
Aapki NawaazishoN kaa bahut bahut shukriya ... aise hi saath nibhaate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... ! duaaon ke saath ... ! |
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«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2011, 05:08:07 PM » |
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Bahut Khub Naresh Ji U Hi Likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye
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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2011, 05:14:55 PM » |
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Khole Kitaab
Dopehar
Lafz Lafz
Sulagh Rahi Hai ...
Har Shaam
Udaas Badan
Bistar Ki Chaadar Lapete
Siisak Rahi Hai ...
Kis Iraade Se
Hawaa
Intezar Ke Darwaaze Pe
Subha-Shaam
Dastak De Rahi Hai ...
Jab Ki
Be-Matlab
Saaye Ke Bharam MeN
Makaan Ki
DiiwaaroN Se Dhankii
Akele
Zindagi Ki SaanseN
Rozaanaa
Dam ToDh Rahi Hai ... !
GOOD..!!! |
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2011, 09:57:19 PM » |
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ufff bahut hi kamsin words use kiye hain aapne Ansumali ji.
ufff bahut gazab hai uff.
kya mast kikha hai aapne sachhi me.
Nirala Ji .. aapka iss kadar koshish ko saraahane ka aur hausla afzaai kaa bahut bahut shukriya .. khush rahen ..! duaaoN ke saath .. ! |
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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2011, 03:59:28 AM » |
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«Reply #10 on: January 23, 2011, 05:58:21 AM » |
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Bahut Khub Naresh Ji U Hi Likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye
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Bahut bahut shukriya .. Rishi Ji ! aise hi aate rahiye ... khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath ... ! |
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«Reply #11 on: January 23, 2011, 07:04:44 AM » |
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Shukriya ... aap sab ke saath kaa !
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«Reply #12 on: January 23, 2011, 02:11:52 PM » |
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GOOD..!!!
Shukriya ...Adil Ji ! aapki hausla afzaai kaa ! |
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«Reply #13 on: January 24, 2011, 03:01:17 AM » |
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Naresh Jee Aadaab!
Aapki kavitaa behad khoob rahi..
Zindagi ka antarik chitaran bahut khoob kiya hai aapne..
Daad kabool kijiye.....
Likhate rahiye....
Khuda Hafez  Shukriya ... Sameer Ji ! aapki pasandegi aor dilee daad kaa ! khush rahen ... ! duaaon ke saath ... ! |
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«Reply #14 on: January 24, 2011, 09:42:49 AM » |
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Shukriya ... aap sabke saath kaa !
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