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by samnoj on February 01, 2013, 11:14:54 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 02, 2013, 07:25:49 AM »
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itni bebaak tareef ki hai aapne meri samnoj ji ke padhte padhte pet me bal pad gaye.
thanx for reposting it and dedicating it to me.
its 1 of ur best poetry
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«Reply #16 on: February 02, 2013, 07:39:29 AM »
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samjh sako to samjho sarfitra ji and samnoj ji..... hamari khamoshi hi sab keh jati hai...

is trah se khamosh nahi rahte..kch to likhna padega
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«Reply #17 on: February 02, 2013, 07:43:01 AM »
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itni bebaak tareef ki hai aapne meri samnoj ji ke padhte padhte pet me bal pad gaye.
thanx for reposting it and dedicating it to me.
its 1 of ur best poetry


ye galat baat hai yar, aise thori na hota hai..aapko jawab dena padega..do line me hi sahi lekin jawab do
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«Reply #18 on: February 02, 2013, 07:47:04 AM »
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do mahine tak na dhoi gayi ho wo sari ho tum
bina strike liye hi runout ho jaye wo khilari ho tum
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«Reply #19 on: February 02, 2013, 07:53:45 AM »
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I hate Khamoshi--
itni sundar aur lambi jbaan di h uparwale ne
uska use kro
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«Reply #20 on: February 03, 2013, 05:05:05 AM »
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aankhon ka faila kaajal ho tum
barsaat ke baad ka ganda kichad ho tum
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«Reply #21 on: February 03, 2013, 05:07:31 AM »
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I hate Khamoshi--
itni sundar aur lambi jbaan di h uparwale ne
uska use kro
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mujhe majahiya likhna nahin aata sarfira
thodi si help kar do na 
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«Reply #22 on: February 03, 2013, 11:27:47 AM »
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mujhe majahiya likhna nahin aata sarfira
thodi si help kar do na 
chlo help krte hain--
bhinbhinate makhiyon se bhri kachre se aati Booo ho tum
bhikhariyon ke baaloN me rengti Jooo ho tum
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«Reply #23 on: February 03, 2013, 11:33:01 AM »
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Sarfira jee hame bhi mazakiyaa shaayarii sikhaa do
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«Reply #24 on: February 03, 2013, 11:43:59 AM »
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ab to Manoj sir hi sikhaenge hum sbko Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: February 03, 2013, 11:47:47 AM »
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ab to Manoj sir hi sikhaenge hum sbko Usual Smile
Manoj sir kahaa ho aaap.
Sikhaaaa dijiye hame kuch
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«Reply #26 on: February 03, 2013, 12:10:02 PM »
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chlo help krte hain--
bhinbhinate makhiyon se bhri kachre se aati Booo ho tum
bhikhariyon ke baaloN me rengti Jooo ho tum
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wahhh wahhh sarfira ji thakyou very much.
kuch aur bhi kahiye na samnoj ki tareef me... ye to bahot hi kum kaha hai aapne wo to bade mahaan insaan hain.. tongue3
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«Reply #27 on: February 03, 2013, 12:10:59 PM »
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sare members se request hai ke wo aayen aur apne andaaz me samnoj ki tareef karen par wo tareef kuch alag hutkar honi chahiye....
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«Reply #28 on: February 03, 2013, 12:22:29 PM »
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wahhh wahhh sarfira ji thakyou very much.
kuch aur bhi kahiye na samnoj ki tareef me... ye to bahot hi kum kaha hai aapne wo to bade mahaan insaan hain.. tongue3

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ye aapki tareef thi ya Sam Sirji ki pta nhi
par aapko to khud hi unki tareef krni hogi--
dekhie unhone aapki kitni tareef kari hai tongue3
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«Reply #29 on: February 03, 2013, 12:25:24 PM »
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galat hai na ye to sarfira ji help maine mangi thi aapse aur aap to meri hi tareef kar gaye sad5 katttiiiiiiiii
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