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by samnoj on February 01, 2013, 04:44:54 PM
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ye poem HEER ke naam

kisi charsi bewde ki batli ho tum
kya bimar ho bahut patli ho tum

barso pahle hua bahut bada kasoor ho tum
ped pe latka hua khajoor ho tum

bin badal ke jaise barkha ho tum
khadi banto hai jis se wo charkha ho tum

kitni tareef karu ke kya ho tum
ek hi kafi hai wo jhatka ho tum

be wakoof ho bilkul anadi ho tum
bina ghode ki gaadi ho tum

puri amawas ki shaam ho tum
bilkul choosa hua aam ho tum

galat disha me nikli bijli ho tum
kabhi na mitne wali khujli ho tum

jise koi nahi dekhte wo cinema ho tum
bina nade ka phisalta paijama ho tum

saare din padosiyo ko satati ho tum
gadho ki kya kami hai jo gati ho tum

adhmare ko maarti poora ho tum
kabhi na baje wo tamboora ho tum
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«Reply #1 on: February 01, 2013, 06:52:12 PM »
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haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa  haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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«Reply #2 on: February 01, 2013, 07:44:15 PM »
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Waah samnoj saahab aapne kamaal kar diyaaaaa. Sorry heer maiN tum par hansaa. Par ye sab tum par nahii hansaa thaa balki es shaayarii ne hansaya tha jo samnoj bhaai ne likhii hai. Sorry again
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«Reply #3 on: February 01, 2013, 07:47:28 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: February 01, 2013, 08:45:19 PM »
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ye poem HEER ke naam

kisi charsi bewde ki batli ho tum
kya bimar ho bahut patli ho tum

barso pahle hua bahut bada kasoor ho tum
ped pe latka hua khajoor ho tum

bin badal ke jaise barkha ho tum
khadi banto hai jis se wo charkha ho tum

kitni tareef karu ke kya ho tum
ek hi kafi hai wo jhatka ho tum

be wakoof ho bilkul anadi ho tum
bina ghode ki gaadi ho tum

puri amawas ki shaam ho tum
bilkul choosa hua aam ho tum

galat disha me nikli bijli ho tum
kabhi na mitne wali khujli ho tum

jise koi nahi dekhte wo cinema ho tum
bina nade ka phisalta paijama ho tum

saare din padosiyo ko satati ho tum
gadho ki kya kami hai jo gati ho tum

adhmare ko maarti poora ho tum
kabhi na baje wo tamboora ho tum
hehehehehe
mast mast super mast tongue3

wese Samnoj sirji
Heer ne ka jawaab aaega bs taiyaar rahiega

tongue3
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«Reply #5 on: February 01, 2013, 11:03:51 PM »
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ye poem HEER ke naam

kisi charsi bewde ki batli ho tum
kya bimar ho bahut patli ho tum

barso pahle hua bahut bada kasoor ho tum
ped pe latka hua khajoor ho tum

bin badal ke jaise barkha ho tum
khadi banto hai jis se wo charkha ho tum

kitni tareef karu ke kya ho tum
ek hi kafi hai wo jhatka ho tum

be wakoof ho bilkul anadi ho tum
bina ghode ki gaadi ho tum

puri amawas ki shaam ho tum
bilkul choosa hua aam ho tum

galat disha me nikli bijli ho tum
kabhi na mitne wali khujli ho tum

jise koi nahi dekhte wo cinema ho tum
bina nade ka phisalta paijama ho tum

saare din padosiyo ko satati ho tum
gadho ki kya kami hai jo gati ho tum

adhmare ko maarti poora ho tum
kabhi na baje wo tamboora ho tum

ek hi kaafi hai.. wo jhatkaa ho tum...

kyaa  hi khoob ...

waah ..............


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«Reply #6 on: February 02, 2013, 07:08:37 AM »
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 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))maja aa gaya bhai
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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2013, 08:08:15 AM »
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thanx saini ji
thanx masoom ji..aap itna has rahe ho..heer se bachke rahna

thanx suman ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 02, 2013, 08:10:43 AM »
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thanx sarfira ji..jawab ka hi to intezar hai..

Thanx janumanu ji

thanx nandbahu jii
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«Reply #9 on: February 02, 2013, 10:10:00 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: February 02, 2013, 11:19:51 AM »
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kya hua heer ji,. Hum to jawab ke intezar me baithe the..aap to aise hi chal diye
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«Reply #11 on: February 02, 2013, 12:18:11 PM »
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aap bina jawab die nhi ja skte Heer -
self respect bhi koi chij hoti h tongue3
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«Reply #12 on: February 02, 2013, 12:22:00 PM »
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sahi kaha sarfira ji
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«Reply #13 on: February 02, 2013, 12:40:35 PM »
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naakoN chne chbwa degi
dharti se uthwa degi
na kahunga ab mai bhi kuch
Heer madam deewaroN me chunwa degi
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«Reply #14 on: February 02, 2013, 12:53:18 PM »
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samjh sako to samjho sarfitra ji and samnoj ji..... hamari khamoshi hi sab keh jati hai...
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