Adawat ' Parwaaz

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Aadaab To All My dear friends...


YeH just instantly likhi kalaam hai, yahaaN hi baithe baithe bus khayaal rawaN ho rahe the so likh diye.. Ummid hai aapko pasaNd aaye..




Mere sabr ka aur intehaan naa le
Aa bhi jaa aye jaan meri jaan naa le






ChaaNd taaroN ki nahi hai chahat mujhko
Milti  hai tere hi  aane se raahat mujhko

Chahtaa huN maiN tujh ko hii bus tujh ko
Maar  daa le  naa meri yeH  aadat mujhko

Tha gilaa mujhe tujhi se hi mere hum dum
Naa rahi phir kisi se koi shikayat mujhko 

Hai mujhko toH jannatul firdose ki chahat
Dekhe kia milta hai inaam e ebadat mujhko

YouN ruthe haiN milkar bhi na milne waale
Aur kahte hai ParwaaZ nahi adaawat mujhko





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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2013, 09:56:16 PM »
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Waah waah janaab bahut hi khoob.
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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2013, 11:03:41 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2013, 11:43:55 PM »
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Wah Wah Parwaaz Jee! Bahi Khubsurat Ghazal Kahi Hai Aap Ne!!

Hai mujhko toH jannatul firdose ki chahat
Dekhe kia milta hai inaam e ebadat mujhko

YouN ruthe haiN milkar bhi na milne waale
Aur kahte hai ParwaaZ nahi adaawat mujhko

Yeh Ashaar Mujhe Behad Pasand Aaye!!!


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«Reply #4 on: April 12, 2013, 01:43:47 AM »
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Adaab PARWAAZ Saheb.......!


Buht KHobsurat Kalam likha aap ne parh k buht acha laga, meri taraf se Dili daad qabool kijeye,,,

Umeed hai aap iss bazm e sukhan ko mazeed apne kalam se sajain gay


Sada Khush raheye


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«Reply #5 on: April 12, 2013, 06:44:03 AM »
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Kya baat hai Parwaaz bhai

bahut umda likha hai aapne..

Hai mujhko toH jannatul firdose ki chahat
Dekhe kia milta hai inaam e ebadat mujhko

YouN ruthe haiN milkar bhi na milne waale
Aur kahte hai ParwaaZ nahi adaawat mujhko

ye ashaar to behad khoob rahe.
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«Reply #6 on: April 12, 2013, 07:35:44 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: April 12, 2013, 07:50:19 AM »
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bohut bohut bohut umda kalaam waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhh parwaaz sahab ek rau apka banta hai
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«Reply #8 on: April 12, 2013, 08:09:18 AM »
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KYAA BAAT KYAA BAAT
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«Reply #9 on: April 12, 2013, 08:46:27 AM »
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ChaaNd taaroN ki nahi hai chahat mujhko
Milti  hai tere hi  aane se raahat mujhko

Hai mujhko toH jannatul firdose ki chahat
Dekhe kia milta hai inaam e ebadat mujhko

YouN ruthe haiN milkar bhi na milne waale
Aur kahte hai ParwaaZ nahi adaawat mujhko

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Bahut   khubsurat   ghazal  likhi  hai , Parwaaz  ssaheb.
Parh  kar  bahut  maza  aaya . Khas  taur  se  ye  ashaar
bahut  ache  lage . Bhai  jaldi  mein  likhe  kalaam mein
jab  mashaallah  yeh  zor  hai  to  mehnat se likhi ghazal
ki  kya  baat  hogi .  Khuda  aapke  qalam  mein  zor  aur
khayalon  mein  wusat  banaye  rakhe .  Amin . Bahut bahut
mubarakbaad  aur  dherojn  daad.
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«Reply #10 on: April 12, 2013, 08:55:11 AM »
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Kya baat hai parwaaz ji.Aapki ghazal padhkar mujhe bahut jyaada khushi hui. Bahut bahut mubarak ki aapki kalam chalne lag gayi hai masha allah. aise hi likhte rahiye.  kisi ek sher ki tareef nahi kar sakti kyunki har ek sher khoob hai. bahut achchi ghazal hai. aapko dil se mubarak ho.
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«Reply #11 on: April 12, 2013, 09:08:16 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: April 12, 2013, 10:56:47 AM »
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Bro....
kamaal hai ji
instant writing n posting m alg hi mza hai Usual Smile
ese kalaam me ek freshness hoti hai Jo
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bhai hum chahenge ki aapko ese khyal aate rahen Usual Smile
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Hai mujhko toH jannatul firdose ki chahat
Dekhe kia milta hai inaam e ebadat mujhko
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ye ashaar kuch hatkar hai...
ye iss ghazal ka umdaa sher h Jo iss ghazal ka lgta hi nhi Usual Smile

humari daad aur mubarakbaad kubul Karen
khus then
mast rahen

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«Reply #13 on: April 12, 2013, 12:55:26 PM »
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Waah waah janaab bahut hi khoob.


Ifteqaar Sahaab Aadaab..!


Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab, is purkhulus hoNsla afzai ke liye aage bhi apna
saath banaye rakhiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye..

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
KhudaHafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: April 12, 2013, 12:58:13 PM »
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bahut khoob


Ravi Jee Aadaab!


Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab... aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye..
Aate rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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