Baat se baat niklegi...manju

by manjum on June 17, 2011, 05:32:51 PM
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Zuban se jab bhi niklegi bas ik fariyad niklegi.
Ye dil jab bhi tatologe tumhari yad niklegi.

Na yun khamosh baitho tum hamara dil dhadakta hai,
Kuch tum kaho kuchh ham kahe baat se baat niklegi.

Meri sanse, meri dhadkan, zahan main bas rahi yaden,
Kabhi kuchh dena chahenge yahi saugat niklegi.

Wo pal jab sochte hain dil ki dhadkan thamne lagti hai,
Teri yadon main royenge bas aise raat niklegi.

Khuda ke waste kahdo tumhe ham yad hain ab bhi,
Tamnna mere dil ki kya yun hi barbad niklegi.

Manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: June 17, 2011, 05:47:02 PM »
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Zuban se jab bhi niklegi bas ik fariyad niklegi.
Ye dil jab bhi tatologe tumhari yad niklegi.

Na yun khamosh baitho tum hamara dil dhadakta hai,
Kuch tum kaho kuchh ham kahe baat se baat niklegi.

Meri sanse, meri dhadkan, zahan main bas rahi yaden,
Kabhi kuchh dena chahenge yahi saugat niklegi.

Wo pal jab sochte hain dil ki dhadkan thamne lagti hai,
Teri yadon main royenge bas aise raat niklegi.

Khuda ke waste kahdo tumhe ham yad hain ab bhi,
Tamnna mere dil ki kya yun hi barbad niklegi.

Manju "mann"


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Lajawaab!!!!Har Ek Sher Kuch kehta Hua..

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«Reply #2 on: June 17, 2011, 05:52:03 PM »
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manjum ji,

Bahut bahut mubaarakbaad ek achchhee ghazal
par yoon to pooree ghazal hee nayaab hai
par matle ka jawaab naheen.

Dili daad qubool karen.

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«Reply #3 on: June 17, 2011, 07:18:08 PM »
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bht bht khoob di...
sply 3rd & last one...
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«Reply #4 on: June 17, 2011, 08:52:48 PM »
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haaye…manju ji…
kya kahen aapke is aah ko…
hey “queen of pain” ye nagma to lajawaab se bhi barhkar hai…
humare jese betuke daad nahi de skte is nagme ko…
bas ye kahenje

ghatnewale wali sabi ghatnao me srf or srf uparwale ki marzi hoti hai…aur wo bhale ke lie hota hai…
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so be happy alwej…

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«Reply #5 on: June 17, 2011, 09:32:09 PM »
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bahoot hisadhe hue andaaz me apni baat bakhoobi rakhi hai aapne.......behad umda....dad kabool karen manjum ji  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 18, 2011, 09:20:37 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji..... bas aap sab ki duayen hain ki kuch kah pate hain....

sath rahiega...
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«Reply #7 on: June 18, 2011, 09:22:52 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya satishji....

aap jaise umda shayaron se itne ache comnt aur daad mil jaye to aur likhne ka hausla milta rahta hai....

sath rahiega...
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«Reply #8 on: June 18, 2011, 09:27:30 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya priya...

yun hi sath rahna....
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«Reply #9 on: June 18, 2011, 09:29:59 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya niralaji....

hamne ek note book banai hui hai aapke diye namo ko likh kar rakhne ke lie....
hame uparwale par bharosa hai....
bahut bahut shukriya pasand karne aur ek naya naam dene ke lie...
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bahut bahut shukriya bekararji....
yun sath rahiega....
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«Reply #11 on: June 18, 2011, 11:00:04 AM »
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notebook kyun !!!!?Huh?
aur humne kab koi naam dia aapko …bataiye jara……
bahut bahut shukriya niralaji....

hamne ek note book banai hui hai aapke diye namo ko likh kar rakhne ke lie....
hame uparwale par bharosa hai....
bahut bahut shukriya pasand karne aur ek naya naam dene ke lie...
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«Reply #12 on: June 18, 2011, 12:02:52 PM »
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are niralaji... yahi naam
dard ki devi...
queen of pain...
mallika e dard....
aur bhi hai bahut sare....
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«Reply #13 on: June 18, 2011, 12:27:16 PM »
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ooohh!!!!!
are niralaji... yahi naam
dard ki devi...
queen of pain...
mallika e dard....
aur bhi hai bahut sare....
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«Reply #14 on: June 18, 2011, 02:26:20 PM »
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Zuban se jab bhi niklegi bas ik fariyad niklegi.
Ye dil jab bhi tatologe tumhari yad niklegi.

Na yun khamosh baitho tum hamara dil dhadakta hai,
Kuch tum kaho kuchh ham kahe baat se baat niklegi.

Meri sanse, meri dhadkan, zahan main bas rahi yaden,
Kabhi kuchh dena chahenge yahi saugat niklegi.

Wo pal jab sochte hain dil ki dhadkan thamne lagti hai,
Teri yadon main royenge bas aise raat niklegi.

Khuda ke waste kahdo tumhe ham yad hain ab bhi,
Tamnna mere dil ki kya yun hi barbad niklegi.

Manju "mann"



good one manjum ji Applause Applause Applause
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