KHILONA

by NETRAPAL on March 10, 2007, 06:10:34 PM
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                    EK KHAWAISH THEE EK KHILONA BANOO KHELNE KELIYE
                    BHAGWAAN NE KEE POOREE KHAWAISH APNEE
                    BANYA KHILONA EK  DHARTEE PAR SIRF KHELNE KE LIYE
                    BHOOL GAYA THA KUCH BHAGWAAN BHEE BANANE KE BAD
                    DIL DAL DIYA KHILONE  ME USENE ISE BANANE KE BAD
                    DIL DHADKA KHILONE KAA TO AHASAAS HOOA  KHUDA KO
                    BANAA DEE KE GUDIYA DIL KHILONE A BAHLAANE KE LIYE
                    KHILONA MUSKRAA UTHA, SAATH KISEE KA PANE KE BAD
                    AB EK NANHI SEE KHWAAISH JANMEE DIL ME KHILONE KE
                    AA GAYA EK NANHNA KHILONA EK KHEL HONE KE BAD
                    YAHEE KHEL THA BHAWAAN KA YAHEE SACHAYEE HAI
                    ISEE SE DUNIYA BANYEE USE NAYE KHEL KHELNE KE LIYE
                    EK KHAWAISH THEE KUCH BANOO DIL BAHALAANEKE LIYE..

                     NETRA..
                   
                   
                   
                   
                   
                   

                   
                   
                   
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«Reply #1 on: March 11, 2007, 12:28:14 PM »
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Is it that you will complete it later ?
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«Reply #2 on: March 12, 2007, 07:19:59 PM »
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                    EK KHAWAISH THEE EK KHILONA BANOO KHELNE KELIYE
                    BHAGWAAN NE KEE POOREE KHAWAISH APNEE
                    BANYA KHILONA EK  DHARTEE PAR SIRF KHELNE KE LIYE
                    BHOOL GAYA THA KUCH BHAGWAAN BHEE BANANE KE BAD
                    DIL DAL DIYA KHILONE  ME USENE ISE BANANE KE BAD
                    DIL DHADKA KHILONE KAA TO AHASAAS HOOA  KHUDA KO
                    BANAA DEE KE GUDIYA DIL KHILONE A BAHLAANE KE LIYE
                    KHILONA MUSKRAA UTHA, SAATH KISEE KA PANE KE BAD
                    AB EK NANHI SEE KHWAAISH JANMEE DIL ME KHILONE KE
                    AA GAYA EK NANHNA KHILONA EK KHEL HONE KE BAD
                    YAHEE KHEL THA BHAWAAN KA YAHEE SACHAYEE HAI
                    ISEE SE DUNIYA BANYEE USE NAYE KHEL KHELNE KE LIYE
                    EK KHAWAISH THEE KUCH BANOO DIL BAHALAANEKE LIYE..

                     NETRA..
                   
                   
                   
                   
                   
                   

                   
                   
                   


DUNIA KEE JAGAH KHILONA
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«Reply #3 on: March 13, 2007, 11:39:58 PM »
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I apologize, I think I commented on your poem mistakenly because I think I never commented on it.

Anyways, I gone through it now. This poem is again a nice approach from Mr. Netra and its innovative way of poet for looking at this area of world.
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«Reply #4 on: March 14, 2007, 02:19:23 PM »
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I apologize, I think I commented on your poem mistakenly because I think I never commented on it.

Anyways, I gone through it now. This poem is again a nice approach from Mr. Netra and its innovative way of poet for looking at this area of world.


thanks sir for comments, abhee aap log se bhoot kuch seekhna, naya khiladee hoo is khel ka..................

netra.....
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