-Ek Khilona Hi To Hai-

by Meena on June 02, 2005, 05:24:19 PM
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Meena
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Dosto, phir se kuch likha hai, janti hoon ke sab kuch bejood hai par phir bhi likh rahi hoon. mere fans (jo ke hai nahin) sab nirash honge par yeh risk bhi manzoor hai!  :D

Gumon ki raaton me aise hi hum jaghte rahe,
Kabhi duniya se to kabhi khud se hum baghte rahe,
Mudat ke baad neend se mulakat hogi meri,
Ke kabar me aab so chain se sona hi to hai!

Sochte hai aab, ke bohot log milte hai rah-e-guzar me,
Par sirf ek hi shaks bha gaya pehli hi nazar me,
Jante to hai ke woh humare ho nahin sakhte,
Phir kyu talab hai uski, jis se juda hona hi to hai!!

Jazbaato ka is duniya me to vyapaar hota hai,
Mante hai hum  jise apna, dhokebaaz who yaar bhi hota hai,
Kyu soch rahi hai itna bazar-e-duniya ke bare me,
Tu bhi to yaha, “Meena”, ek khilona hi to hai!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #1 on: June 02, 2005, 05:39:30 PM »
hmmmmmmmm...........meena  .............bahot  khoob.............very  nice.........
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2005, 05:47:41 PM »
thank u........waheed.......................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :D
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Aryaan
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«Reply #3 on: June 02, 2005, 05:56:42 PM »
hmm sach kaha Meena aap ne.. iss baar waqei aap ne apne fans ko bohat niraash kiya hai.... sad5 ...

Arey itni khubsoorti se alfaaz piroye hain, aur abhi bhi aap apni takhleeq se mutmain nahi hain?... Bohat hi khubsoorat likha hai Meena....
mere aur Waheed ke ilawa doosre bhi bohat pasand karein ge...
likhiti rahiye ga!!!
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HumTum
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«Reply #4 on: June 02, 2005, 11:05:42 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Dosto, phir se kuch likha hai, janti hoon ke sab kuch bejood hai par phir bhi likh rahi hoon. mere fans (jo ke hai nahin) sab nirash honge par yeh risk bhi manzoor hai!  :D

Gumon ki raaton me aise hi hum jaghte rahe,
Kabhi duniya se to kabhi khud se hum baghte rahe,
Mudat ke baad neend se mulakat hogi meri,
Ke kabar me aab so chain se sona hi to hai!

Sochte hai aab, ke bohot log milte hai rah-e-guzar me,
Par sirf ek hi shaks bha gaya pehli hi nazar me,
Jante to hai ke woh humare ho nahin sakhte,
Phir kyu talab hai uski, jis se juda hona hi to hai!!

Jazbaato ka is duniya me to vyapaar hota hai,
Mante hai hum  jise apna, dhokebaaz who yaar bhi hota hai,
Kyu soch rahi hai itna bazar-e-duniya ke bare me,
Tu bhi to yaha, “Meena”, ek khilona hi to hai!


waah !! bhoot khoob likha hai ....... Mohrtma !!!  

Hum kuch yun likheygey iss pe !!

kuch zakhm zaraa bhar jaane do, kuch dard bhi kamtar hone do
tum shauq se daaman phailaanaa, ashkoN ko tou gohar hone do

'e! jaan-e-jigar merii jaaN par, phir mashq-e-sitam tum kar lenaa
kuch raat zaraa Dhal jaane do, kuch haal tou behtar hone do

itnaa tou raham kar do mujhpar, mat khiiNcho abhii dil se khanjar
mehsoos zaraa tum dil ko mire, kuch garmi-e-khanjar hone do

"tum qaabil-e-ulfat ho hi nahiiN", ye talKh haqiiqat hai 'HumTum'
tum paar jigar ke apne ab, ye lafzoN ke nashtar hone do !!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #5 on: June 03, 2005, 12:18:44 AM »
Nice reply HumTum.................................
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #6 on: June 03, 2005, 12:56:14 AM »
Meena sister buhat khoob kai likha hai aap ney dil hi chura liya aap ney
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vikas2210
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«Reply #7 on: June 03, 2005, 06:12:21 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Dosto, phir se kuch likha hai, janti hoon ke sab kuch bejood hai par phir bhi likh rahi hoon. mere fans (jo ke hai nahin) sab nirash honge par yeh risk bhi manzoor hai!  :D

Gumon ki raaton me aise hi hum jaghte rahe,
Kabhi duniya se to kabhi khud se hum baghte rahe,
Mudat ke baad neend se mulakat hogi meri,
Ke kabar me aab so chain se sona hi to hai!

Sochte hai aab, ke bohot log milte hai rah-e-guzar me,
Par sirf ek hi shaks bha gaya pehli hi nazar me,
Jante to hai ke woh humare ho nahin sakhte,
Phir kyu talab hai uski, jis se juda hona hi to hai!!

Jazbaato ka is duniya me to vyapaar hota hai,
Mante hai hum  jise apna, dhokebaaz who yaar bhi hota hai,
Kyu soch rahi hai itna bazar-e-duniya ke bare me,
Tu bhi to yaha, “Meena”, ek khilona hi to hai!


meena ji bahut kboob likha hai aapne.

Mudat ke baad neend se mulakat hogi meri,
Ke kabar me aab so chain se sona hi to hai!


................................................. .....................

kabar bhi kaha chain
whan bhi teri yaad sataaygi.
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #8 on: June 03, 2005, 06:34:36 AM »
"Jazbaato ka is duniya me to vyapaar hota hai,
Mante hai hum jise apna, dhokebaaz who yaar bhi hota hai, "......wah kya baat hai meena ji......amazing but those lines r killer!!!
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Tosha
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«Reply #9 on: June 03, 2005, 10:51:19 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "Meena"
Dosto, phir se kuch likha hai, janti hoon ke sab kuch bejood hai par phir bhi likh rahi hoon. mere fans (jo ke hai nahin) sab nirash honge par yeh risk bhi manzoor hai!  :D

Gumon ki raaton me aise hi hum jaghte rahe,
Kabhi duniya se to kabhi khud se hum baghte rahe,
Mudat ke baad neend se mulakat hogi meri,
Ke kabar me aab so chain se sona hi to hai!

Sochte hai aab, ke bohot log milte hai rah-e-guzar me,
Par sirf ek hi shaks bha gaya pehli hi nazar me,
Jante to hai ke woh humare ho nahin sakhte,
Phir kyu talab hai uski, jis se juda hona hi to hai!!

Jazbaato ka is duniya me to vyapaar hota hai,
Mante hai hum  jise apna, dhokebaaz who yaar bhi hota hai,
Kyu soch rahi hai itna bazar-e-duniya ke bare me,
Tu bhi to yaha, “Meena”, ek khilona hi to hai!


waah !! bhoot khoob likha hai ....... Mohrtma !!!  

Hum kuch yun likheygey iss pe !!

kuch zakhm zaraa bhar jaane do, kuch dard bhi kamtar hone do
tum shauq se daaman phailaanaa, ashkoN ko tou gohar hone do

'e! jaan-e-jigar merii jaaN par, phir mashq-e-sitam tum kar lenaa
kuch raat zaraa Dhal jaane do, kuch haal tou behtar hone do

itnaa tou raham kar do mujhpar, mat khiiNcho abhii dil se khanjar
mehsoos zaraa tum dil ko mire, kuch garmi-e-khanjar hone do

"tum qaabil-e-ulfat ho hi nahiiN", ye talKh haqiiqat hai 'HumTum'
tum paar jigar ke apne ab, ye lafzoN ke nashtar hone do !!


dil is kadar khol ke rakh diya hai 'meena'
ke yeh aakhe na chate hue bhi naam ho gai
...
hazir jawab ho tum HumTum
magar yeh dil hai tumne jeeta
...
kuch main bhi yaha kahe dun
is dil main bhi ek armaan hai
chahat ke azooba hai tum ek misal ho
ek aakhon ko wo ek nazar main jo bhagaya
kasoor-e-deewane dil ka kya
na pasakungi usse to kya yeh dil khelona ho gaya
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Meena
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«Reply #10 on: June 03, 2005, 02:59:30 PM »
bohot bohot shukriya  aryaan, humtum, naveed, vikas, isha aur toshu!

 :D
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thycreator
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«Reply #11 on: June 03, 2005, 03:08:44 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "Meena"
Dosto, phir se kuch likha hai, janti hoon ke sab kuch bejood hai par phir bhi likh rahi hoon. mere fans (jo ke hai nahin) sab nirash honge par yeh risk bhi manzoor hai!  :D

Gumon ki raaton me aise hi hum jaghte rahe,
Kabhi duniya se to kabhi khud se hum baghte rahe,
Mudat ke baad neend se mulakat hogi meri,
Ke kabar me aab so chain se sona hi to hai!

Sochte hai aab, ke bohot log milte hai rah-e-guzar me,
Par sirf ek hi shaks bha gaya pehli hi nazar me,
Jante to hai ke woh humare ho nahin sakhte,
Phir kyu talab hai uski, jis se juda hona hi to hai!!

Jazbaato ka is duniya me to vyapaar hota hai,
Mante hai hum  jise apna, dhokebaaz who yaar bhi hota hai,
Kyu soch rahi hai itna bazar-e-duniya ke bare me,
Tu bhi to yaha, “Meena”, ek khilona hi to hai!


waah !! bhoot khoob likha hai ....... Mohrtma !!!  

Hum kuch yun likheygey iss pe !!

kuch zakhm zaraa bhar jaane do, kuch dard bhi kamtar hone do
tum shauq se daaman phailaanaa, ashkoN ko tou gohar hone do

'e! jaan-e-jigar merii jaaN par, phir mashq-e-sitam tum kar lenaa
kuch raat zaraa Dhal jaane do, kuch haal tou behtar hone do

itnaa tou raham kar do mujhpar, mat khiiNcho abhii dil se khanjar
mehsoos zaraa tum dil ko mire, kuch garmi-e-khanjar hone do

"tum qaabil-e-ulfat ho hi nahiiN", ye talKh haqiiqat hai 'HumTum'
tum paar jigar ke apne ab, ye lafzoN ke nashtar hone do !!


Kya bat hai yaar.............meena ji....apne bahut hi khubsurat likha........aur HumTum ji.............apke liye kya kahe.....shabd nahi hai mere pas.......too gud both of you....

Iss dunia mein aakar bhi hum, kya iski haqeekat ko samjhe,
Kya samjhe hum har ek insaa ko, kya uski tabiyat ko samjhe,

Hairan khuda bhi toh hoga, dekhta hoga jab bhi wo hame,
Kya sikhlaya usne humko, kya uski nasihat hum samjhe..
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pandit
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«Reply #12 on: June 03, 2005, 03:16:04 PM »
nice meena ji............................................... .............
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Meena
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«Reply #13 on: June 03, 2005, 03:43:03 PM »
thank u creator and pandit!! gud one creator!!!!!!!!

 :D
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #14 on: June 03, 2005, 06:56:06 PM »
wonderful   thy...............bahot  accha  likha aap  ne..........
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