~Laut aya~ by Rahim

by dead heart on August 10, 2010, 03:20:26 AM
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Woh toh bewaffai main bhi wafa na kar saka 'Rahim',
Laut aya zindagi main meri; usse thukrane kay baad..!

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: August 10, 2010, 03:38:35 AM »
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Nice Bohat Khoob Janaab Rahim Saheb...

Aankhon Ka Rang Baat Ka Lahja Badal Gaya
Woh Shaqsh Ek Shaam Mein Kitna Badal Gaya.

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«Reply #2 on: August 10, 2010, 03:58:05 AM »
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Shukriya jee..

Bahaut achi sharing ki hai apne..!
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«Reply #3 on: August 10, 2010, 05:01:14 AM »
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Woh toh bewaffai main bhi wafa na kar saka 'Rahim',
Laut aya zindagi main meri; usse thukrane kay baad..!

~Rahim~

Nice One..... Rahim Ji ! Bahut khoob !
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«Reply #4 on: August 10, 2010, 05:06:53 PM »
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Shukriya Naresh jee.!
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«Reply #5 on: August 10, 2010, 06:36:02 PM »
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lovely lines rahim ji..... Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #6 on: August 11, 2010, 01:02:59 AM »
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Shukriya Thinkhattk jee..!
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«Reply #7 on: August 11, 2010, 02:17:45 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Rahim bhai,excellent creation,beautiful sharing by Hum Dum ji. icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause love4 :love9:love u Rahim bhai.God bless u.tke c.
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«Reply #8 on: August 11, 2010, 04:01:02 PM »
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Nice Bohat Khoob Janaab Rahim Saheb...

Aankhon Ka Rang Baat Ka Lahja Badal Gaya
Woh Shaqsh Ek Shaam Mein Kitna Badal Gaya.

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bahut khoob humdum ji
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«Reply #9 on: August 11, 2010, 06:07:17 PM »
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Shukriya Madhu di.!
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