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Raaz kee baat ko yun lab pe naa laanaa achchhaa
kuchh khazaano ko zamaane se bachaanaa achchhaa
jo hayaa chehare kee yun raaz e mohabbat kah de
phir to rukhsaar ko parde me chhupaanaa achchhaa
jaan jaayegaa jahaaN dekhnaa ik din humko
apnee funkaaree nahee khud se bataanaa achchhaa
chal ke aaye hain badee door se bas tere liy
mil ke tujhse hee hai ab lout ke jaanaa achchhaa
toot kar rabt kahaaN bante hain pahle jaise
rishtaa har ek jatan se hai nibhaanaa achchhaa
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«Reply #2 on: September 20, 2011, 03:37:17 PM » |
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Suresh jee!
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«Reply #4 on: September 20, 2011, 04:59:16 PM » |
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Bahut khoob Mamta ji
Bahut dino ke bad shirkat ki apne.
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«Reply #5 on: September 20, 2011, 09:30:33 PM » |
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Mamta jee, Kya baat hai.. Teesra shaer sabse kareeb raha..  Khush rahiye..! |
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«Reply #7 on: September 21, 2011, 04:10:56 AM » |
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bahut khub mamtaji..
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«Reply #8 on: September 21, 2011, 05:20:29 AM » |
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Mamta Ji,
Bahut dino baad aapka kalaam padhne
ko mila...achchha hai...
Daad kubool farmaayen..
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«Reply #9 on: September 22, 2011, 03:40:46 AM » |
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Parwaaz jee! sabse pahle aap kaa is baat kaa shukriyaa adaa karooNgee keh aap kee tahreer se mujhe ahsaas huaa keh yahaa humaare kalaamkee gairhaaziri ko mahsoos karne waale log bhee hain...yaqeenan is shikaayat ne dil ko kis qadar taskeen bakhshee hai...kahanaa zarooree naheeN....ab koshish karoongee keh ghaayab naa rahaa karooN.....
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«Reply #10 on: September 22, 2011, 03:43:34 AM » |
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mkv jee ! achchha lagaa jaan kar keh humaaree yo par shirkat kee kamee ko aap ne mahsoos kiyaa...warnaa yo net kee is duniyaa mai sab kuchh rasmi tour par hee nibhaayaa jaataa hai.......
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«Reply #11 on: September 23, 2011, 07:02:10 AM » |
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«Reply #12 on: September 23, 2011, 08:05:34 AM » |
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Jee Satish jee! sach me dinoN kaa qaafilaa guzar gayaa or hum but bane rahe............jo zindagee hosh me aayee to kalam chalne lagee........housla afzai kaa behad shukriyaa......
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«Reply #13 on: September 23, 2011, 08:06:39 AM » |
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Behad shukriyaa Mann jee!
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«Reply #14 on: September 24, 2011, 12:05:01 PM » |
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Zarrah nawaazee kaa behad shukriyaa Rahim jee!
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