::Udaas mann mere aaj kuch to likh de::

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«Reply #30 on: October 08, 2005, 05:17:00 PM »
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again bhoot khoob nidhi n all........!!!

nidhi amazing...wasie mujhe shayari nahin likhne aati aur waise aaj mere maan udas nahin hai jab mere maan udas hoga uss din yahan kuch humare alfaz likh denge ..na ki wo shayari hogi but kuch alfaz zaroor likh denge Usual Smile


once agin nice n gr8 all


Thanx a lot Salma for ur lovely appreciating words Usual Smile .Waise to bhagnwan na kare tumhara dil kabhi udaas ho Winking lekin agar kabhi hua to zaroor kuch alfaaz likhna Usual Smile .Thanx again.
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«Reply #31 on: October 08, 2005, 05:30:10 PM »
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Thanx PK Puzzled ! ,Pooja ji and talat .Excellent written PK and talat Usual Smile .

"Udaasi si chhaayi hai aaj phir in ankho me....,
      koi kali murjhai hai aaj phir prem aangan me,
      khilne se pehle hi tumne uski wafaon me kho di,
      wo mohabbat jo is duniya me bohat kam hai milti."
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«Reply #32 on: October 09, 2005, 06:15:09 PM »
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Thanx PK Puzzled ! ,Pooja ji and talat .Excellent written PK and talat Usual Smile .

"Udaasi si chhaayi hai aaj phir in ankho me....,
      koi kali murjhai hai aaj phir prem aangan me,
      khilne se pehle hi tumne uski wafaon me kho di,
      wo mohabbat jo is duniya me bohat kam hai milti."


nice  work  PK,   Nidhi..........&  all Friends,,....

in aankhon mein dekho chayee hue udaasi  kahti hai kya
shahmein  hue  hothon ki  jubaan kahti hai kya
kabhi  tumko yeh jameen sunayengi  meri  mohabbat ki dastan
dekho mere  dil  se tumhare  naam nikli  hue  dua kahti hai kya??
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«Reply #33 on: October 11, 2005, 07:40:32 AM »
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Wah humtum,kya khoob likha hai,and thanx a lot Usual Smile .

"Mohabbat ke diye ham barson se jalaye baithe hain,
      ek arse se teri raah me nigaah lagaaye baithe hain,
      kabhi to teri nazar yun shayad pad jaaye ham par bhi,
      teri mohabbat me khud ko hi mitaaye baithe hain."


Wow ...........Very Nice............ Usual Smile  Waisey Aap sabhi ne bahut achha likha hai....... Carry on friends Usual Smile
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«Reply #34 on: October 11, 2005, 08:22:29 AM »
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Socha na thha kabhi tu itna yaad aayegi,
Pal pal teri yaad mujhe itna tarpaayegi,
Ab to mere iss dil mein sirf yahi khwaab hai,
eik din firse mujhe unn yaadon mein, tu wapis le jaayegi........... Usual Smile
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«Reply #35 on: October 15, 2005, 03:13:05 PM »
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very  nice Natural...........
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«Reply #36 on: October 17, 2005, 09:44:20 AM »
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very  nice Natural...........

Thanxxxxx Waheed Ji.............. Usual Smile
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«Reply #37 on: October 21, 2005, 06:01:24 PM »
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Thanx PK Puzzled ! ,Pooja ji and talat .Excellent written PK and talat Usual Smile .

"Udaasi si chhaayi hai aaj phir in ankho me....,
      koi kali murjhai hai aaj phir prem aangan me,
      khilne se pehle hi tumne uski wafaon me kho di,
      wo mohabbat jo is duniya me bohat kam hai milti."


nice  work  PK,   Nidhi..........&  all Friends,,....

in aankhon mein dekho chayee hue udaasi  kahti hai kya
shahmein  hue  hothon ki  jubaan kahti hai kya
kabhi  tumko yeh jameen sunayengi  meri  mohabbat ki dastan
dekho mere  dil  se tumhare  naam nikli  hue  dua kahti hai kya??


Wow,bohat khob waheed and thanx.

"Jo udaasi aaj teri in ankho me hai...............,
      jab meri ankho me thi,to kya samjhe the tum?
      aaj umed rakhte ho mujhse roshan karun is fiza ko,
      mere bujhte diye ko umeedon se pare rakhe ho tum."
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«Reply #38 on: October 21, 2005, 06:26:18 PM »
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Socha na thha kabhi tu itna yaad aayegi,
Pal pal teri yaad mujhe itna tarpaayegi,
Ab to mere iss dil mein sirf yahi khwaab hai,
eik din firse mujhe unn yaadon mein, tu wapis le jaayegi........... Usual Smile


Beautiful....bohat ache natural and thanz a lot Usual Smile .
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«Reply #39 on: October 22, 2005, 05:20:10 AM »
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Bohot khoob Nidhi...Waheed and Jags ....!!
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«Reply #40 on: October 24, 2005, 07:46:11 PM »
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Thanx PK Puzzled ! ,Pooja ji and talat .Excellent written PK and talat Usual Smile .

"Udaasi si chhaayi hai aaj phir in ankho me....,
      koi kali murjhai hai aaj phir prem aangan me,
      khilne se pehle hi tumne uski wafaon me kho di,
      wo mohabbat jo is duniya me bohat kam hai milti."


nice  work  PK,   Nidhi..........&  all Friends,,....

in aankhon mein dekho chayee hue udaasi  kahti hai kya
shahmein  hue  hothon ki  jubaan kahti hai kya
kabhi  tumko yeh jameen sunayengi  meri  mohabbat ki dastan
dekho mere  dil  se tumhare  naam nikli  hue  dua kahti hai kya??


Wow,bohat khob waheed and thanx.

"Jo udaasi aaj teri in ankho me hai...............,
      jab meri ankho me thi,to kya samjhe the tum?
      aaj umed rakhte ho mujhse roshan karun is fiza ko,
      mere bujhte diye ko umeedon se pare rakhe ho tum."


wow  superbssssssssss   Nidhi......  Thanaxxxxxxxxx  Talat.......

ho  jaaogi  tum  bhi  udaas  meri in  aankhon  mein na  dekho
kya haal  hai mera ,  meri  in sahme  hue  honthon se poocho
fiza  ke  har  dard   hain ismein  chupe  hue  hain
agar  dekhna hai to  mere dil ka diya  jalakar dekho.............
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«Reply #41 on: October 30, 2005, 08:55:34 AM »
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Very Nice Waheed !!!!
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«Reply #42 on: October 30, 2005, 06:22:07 PM »
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Thanx  alot,,,,,,,,,Talat.,,,,,,,,,.........tongue3
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«Reply #43 on: December 06, 2005, 05:22:17 PM »
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Thanx PK Puzzled ! ,Pooja ji and talat .Excellent written PK and talat Usual Smile .

"Udaasi si chhaayi hai aaj phir in ankho me....,
      koi kali murjhai hai aaj phir prem aangan me,
      khilne se pehle hi tumne uski wafaon me kho di,
      wo mohabbat jo is duniya me bohat kam hai milti."


nice  work  PK,   Nidhi..........&  all Friends,,....

in aankhon mein dekho chayee hue udaasi  kahti hai kya
shahmein  hue  hothon ki  jubaan kahti hai kya
kabhi  tumko yeh jameen sunayengi  meri  mohabbat ki dastan
dekho mere  dil  se tumhare  naam nikli  hue  dua kahti hai kya??


Wow,bohat khob waheed and thanx.

"Jo udaasi aaj teri in ankho me hai...............,
      jab meri ankho me thi,to kya samjhe the tum?
      aaj umed rakhte ho mujhse roshan karun is fiza ko,
      mere bujhte diye ko umeedon se pare rakhe ho tum."


wow  superbssssssssss   Nidhi......  Thanaxxxxxxxxx  Talat.......

ho  jaaogi  tum  bhi  udaas  meri in  aankhon  mein na  dekho
kya haal  hai mera ,  meri  in sahme  hue  honthon se poocho
fiza  ke  har  dard   hain ismein  chupe  hue  hain
agar  dekhna hai to  mere dil ka diya  jalakar dekho.............


Thanx Talat Usual Smile n waheed,and excelent reply waheed,bohat hi khoob.

"Tumhare hi dil me to dhadakta meri mohabbat ka diya hai,
      aankho se tumhari hi maine mohabbat ka har jaam piya hai,
      main to tumhari hi ek hissa hun,mujhse kahan kuch chupa hai,
      dil udaas hai tumhara,tabhi to dard bhara nagma maine likha hai."
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«Reply #44 on: December 06, 2005, 06:25:57 PM »
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Thanx PK Puzzled ! ,Pooja ji and talat .Excellent written PK and talat Usual Smile .

"Udaasi si chhaayi hai aaj phir in ankho me....,
      koi kali murjhai hai aaj phir prem aangan me,
      khilne se pehle hi tumne uski wafaon me kho di,
      wo mohabbat jo is duniya me bohat kam hai milti."


nice  work  PK,   Nidhi..........&  all Friends,,....

in aankhon mein dekho chayee hue udaasi  kahti hai kya
shahmein  hue  hothon ki  jubaan kahti hai kya
kabhi  tumko yeh jameen sunayengi  meri  mohabbat ki dastan
dekho mere  dil  se tumhare  naam nikli  hue  dua kahti hai kya??


Wow,bohat khob waheed and thanx.

"Jo udaasi aaj teri in ankho me hai...............,
      jab meri ankho me thi,to kya samjhe the tum?
      aaj umed rakhte ho mujhse roshan karun is fiza ko,
      mere bujhte diye ko umeedon se pare rakhe ho tum."


wow  superbssssssssss   Nidhi......  Thanaxxxxxxxxx  Talat.......

ho  jaaogi  tum  bhi  udaas  meri in  aankhon  mein na  dekho
kya haal  hai mera ,  meri  in sahme  hue  honthon se poocho
fiza  ke  har  dard   hain ismein  chupe  hue  hain
agar  dekhna hai to  mere dil ka diya  jalakar dekho.............


Thanx Talat Usual Smile n waheed,and excelent reply waheed,bohat hi khoob.

"Tumhare hi dil me to dhadakta meri mohabbat ka diya hai,
      aankho se tumhari hi maine mohabbat ka har jaam piya hai,
      main to tumhari hi ek hissa hun,mujhse kahan kuch chupa hai,
      dil udaas hai tumhara,tabhi to dard bhara nagma maine likha hai."


wah    Nidhi.............  superbsssssssssss..............excellent  wordings...

kab mujh ko aiteraaf-e-muhabbat na thaa 'Nidhi'
kab maine ye kaha tha sazaayen mujhe na do.............
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