::Udaas mann mere aaj kuch to likh de::

by nidhi_yadein on September 05, 2005, 05:16:12 PM
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«Reply #45 on: December 07, 2005, 03:18:48 PM »
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nice all

Udaas maan mere aaj kuch likhne Do...
Ghum ki iss andhere mein dhoobne Do...
Thak Gaye hum apni azmaish dete dete...
Ab Maut ka intezar mujhe karne Do...
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«Reply #46 on: December 07, 2005, 04:29:12 PM »
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nice nidhi, waheed and salma
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«Reply #47 on: December 12, 2005, 01:09:32 PM »
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nice all

Udaas maan mere aaj kuch likhne Do...
Ghum ki iss andhere mein dhoobne Do...
Thak Gaye hum apni azmaish dete dete...
Ab Maut ka intezar mujhe karne Do...


Thanxxxxxxxxx   Pooja  sis.........      very  nice  Salma......


Udaas  mann mere  aisa  kyon sonchta hai
ghum  to  sabhi ko hai  too  kyon  rota hai
jindagi to  ek  diya  jaane  kab bujh jaaye
kyon  too  maut  ka  intizaar  karta hai.............
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«Reply #48 on: December 13, 2005, 04:10:27 AM »
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sabney bhut he acha likha hai

waheed... salma, nidhi, talat, and other friends very nice keep it up the good work with u r nice and wonderful smiles Usual Smile
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«Reply #49 on: December 20, 2005, 01:06:30 PM »
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Thanks pooja je...waheed..n soun....!!!


will rply nxt time..abhi blank hai ...!! :oops:
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«Reply #50 on: December 20, 2005, 08:30:41 PM »
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u r most welcome salma...

Peeda key pervat per chadena
Aah hoo ka sanso mey rukna
Karuna key sager ki leyhro ko ahkhoo key tet tak seemat rakhna
Beda kathin huta hai ehsey jevan ko jevan kheyna…
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«Reply #51 on: January 05, 2006, 12:38:35 PM »
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Thanx PK Puzzled ! ,Pooja ji and talat .Excellent written PK and talat Usual Smile .

"Udaasi si chhaayi hai aaj phir in ankho me....,
      koi kali murjhai hai aaj phir prem aangan me,
      khilne se pehle hi tumne uski wafaon me kho di,
      wo mohabbat jo is duniya me bohat kam hai milti."


nice  work  PK,   Nidhi..........&  all Friends,,....

in aankhon mein dekho chayee hue udaasi  kahti hai kya
shahmein  hue  hothon ki  jubaan kahti hai kya
kabhi  tumko yeh jameen sunayengi  meri  mohabbat ki dastan
dekho mere  dil  se tumhare  naam nikli  hue  dua kahti hai kya??


Wow,bohat khob waheed and thanx.

"Jo udaasi aaj teri in ankho me hai...............,
      jab meri ankho me thi,to kya samjhe the tum?
      aaj umed rakhte ho mujhse roshan karun is fiza ko,
      mere bujhte diye ko umeedon se pare rakhe ho tum."


wow  superbssssssssss   Nidhi......  Thanaxxxxxxxxx  Talat.......

ho  jaaogi  tum  bhi  udaas  meri in  aankhon  mein na  dekho
kya haal  hai mera ,  meri  in sahme  hue  honthon se poocho
fiza  ke  har  dard   hain ismein  chupe  hue  hain
agar  dekhna hai to  mere dil ka diya  jalakar dekho.............


Thanx Talat Usual Smile n waheed,and excelent reply waheed,bohat hi khoob.

"Tumhare hi dil me to dhadakta meri mohabbat ka diya hai,
      aankho se tumhari hi maine mohabbat ka har jaam piya hai,
      main to tumhari hi ek hissa hun,mujhse kahan kuch chupa hai,
      dil udaas hai tumhara,tabhi to dard bhara nagma maine likha hai."



 :D   Wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kya likha hai tune yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Afterall meri jese fatichar shayer Puzzled !  ki Superb dost jo hai glasses2 lol ab aakar kuch naaya aur likh sad5
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«Reply #52 on: January 05, 2006, 12:59:55 PM »
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very  nice  Sonu...............bahot khoob...........
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«Reply #53 on: January 08, 2006, 04:33:15 AM »
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shurkya waheed...

Nazar shanaaz tha kyaa kaam kar gaya woh bhi
Zabaan ka dard tha baaton se bhar gaya woh bhi
Hum ne unhen dil-o jaan se chaha...Apna banaya...
Gairon ki tarhan dhoka de ke chala gaya woh bhi...
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«Reply #54 on: January 10, 2006, 02:37:23 PM »
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ur  welcome  Sonu................again  excellent  ...

Admi Tut Ta Hai Kaise Tumhe Kya Maloom
Tumne Dekha Hi Nahi Dard Ka Lamha Koi..........
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«Reply #55 on: January 11, 2006, 05:29:55 AM »
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thanks muna.... nice waheed...

humney dard key lamey ko deykha nahi mehsoos keya hai,
admmi tutetta hai keysey humso puchu humey apni ahkho sey deykha hai...
dil key tukdey keysye hutey hai humsey pcuhu humey us dard ko saha hia...
hum to vo shaks hai jisney khon key ahsoon peya hai...
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«Reply #56 on: January 16, 2006, 06:10:48 PM »
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Thanx sonu,waheed and excellent work by both of u.And thanx PK Usual Smile ,haan likhti hun kuch Puzzled ! .

"Udaas mann mere aaj kuch to likh de,
      ulfat bhari hi sahi,koi raah to pakad le,
      na reh payega tu is tarah akelepan me,
      bhula de use,zindagi ki dor pakad le."
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«Reply #57 on: January 17, 2006, 03:18:37 AM »
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thanks nidhi... wonderful...

garmi hasratein nakaam se jal jatein hain
hum to charaghon ki tarha shaam se jal jatein hain
jab bhi ata hai tera naam mere naam ke saath
jaanai kyoon loag mere naam se jal jatein hain!!!!!!
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«Reply #58 on: March 03, 2006, 12:42:57 PM »
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Udaas maan mere aaj kuch likh de, Puzzled !
Sapne tere kabhi nahi pure honge.. sad5
Tu jhooti umeed par jeena chod de, glasses2
Ae Nidhi jaldi aakar mujhe BEER de..! :lol:
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«Reply #59 on: March 04, 2006, 10:32:01 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Nidhi....bohot achcha likha hai..... Usual Smile Good one by PK Sweetie and all !!!

Udaas mann mere aaj kuch to likh de
Wo jo sadiyon se humrah chalta tha tere
Jo aankhon se samajh jaata tha har baat
Bin uske kaise phail gaye hain andhere
Har pal pe tere naam likh kar wo apna
Khizaan bana gaya hai jeevan ki baharen !!
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