::Udaas mann mere aaj kuch to likh de::

by nidhi_yadein on September 05, 2005, 05:16:12 PM
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«Reply #60 on: March 04, 2006, 05:11:37 PM »
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Thanx sonu ji n Talat.Very nice sonu,and Talat,bohat khoob.
PK u too have written a good one :lol: ,haan tumhari bday pe beer hi bhej deti hun Puzzled ! ,Amity ka address de zara Winking .

"Udaas mann mere aaj kuch to likh de,
      shabdon ki kami aaj tu padne na de,
      bohat kuch dabaa rakha hai tune is dil me,
      aaj wo pyaar k raaz ujaagar tu kar de."
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«Reply #61 on: March 04, 2006, 05:42:40 PM »
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wonderful   Talat...........Sonu,.............Nidhi....sabhi  logon  ne  bahot accha likha......

Udaas  mann mere  too  udaas  rahta hai
harsrat dilon mein chupaye kyon chup rahhta hai
jo  aaye  tere  labon  pe  sab kuch  woh  kah de
kyon bheegi palkon ko barish ka naam deta hai.....
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«Reply #62 on: March 04, 2006, 05:51:01 PM »
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Thanx waheed aur tumne bhi bohat khoob likha.

"Udaas mann mera na jaane kya kya kehta hai,
      ye dekh nahi pata,dil mera jo jo sehta hai,
      chahta hai bohat kuch batana kisi ko yeh,
      par dil ke kehne pe har baar chup hi reh jaata hai."
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«Reply #63 on: March 04, 2006, 06:00:14 PM »
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Thanxxxx  Nidhi.........   tumne  bhi  bahot accha likha....   nice  again    Nidhi......

Udaas  mann  mere  kyon  itna khamosh rahta hai
jhuki  hue  nigahon  mein raj  chupaye  rahta hai
hai jo tere dil mein jo bhi tamanna aaj  too kah de
kyon  aahen  bhar  ker khud ko udaas karta hai....
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«Reply #64 on: March 04, 2006, 06:53:01 PM »
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Thanxxxx  Nidhi.........   tumne  bhi  bahot accha likha....   nice  again    Nidhi......

Udaas  mann  mere  kyon  itna khamosh rahta hai
jhuki  hue  nigahon  mein raj  chupaye  rahta hai
hai jo tere dil mein jo bhi tamanna aaj  too kah de
kyon  aahen  bhar  ker khud ko udaas karta hai....
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«Reply #65 on: March 05, 2006, 05:40:22 AM »
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pk ji... nidhi... talat... waheed... sabbney bahut hi acha likha hai every good everybody....

mizaaz aapka har hadd taq pasand thaa
humey teri har adaa par nazam thaa
jubaan par tera kahna pyar se
teri aankhoon main meri baatoon ka jo asar thaa
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«Reply #66 on: March 06, 2006, 09:57:10 AM »
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gr8 all..aaj sachi muchi im very much upset


issliye ye topic pe likh ka yaad aagaya


Udas maan mera kuch likh de
Ye laptop ko koi plz ON kar de
ya toh phir jaldi theek ho jaye mere laptop
koi aachi khaasi dua de de sad5 :cry:
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«Reply #67 on: March 06, 2006, 02:23:37 PM »
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very  nice  Sonu  Mom.........Salma......tumne  bhi accha likha......

Udaas mann mere  kyon  aisi  baatein karta hai
tujhe  har  khusi  mili phir bhi kyon udaas rahta hai
ho jaayegi  tumahari  har ek  tamanna  poori
mere  paas  rahkar  bhi kyon  juda  juda sa rahta hai......
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«Reply #68 on: March 06, 2006, 03:00:54 PM »
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Thanks Nidhi..Waheed...Sonu....bohot achcha likha hai sab ne..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #69 on: March 07, 2006, 04:08:28 AM »
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thanks waheed.... wonderful....

u r welcome talat ji... app bahut acha likhti hia
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«Reply #70 on: March 10, 2006, 06:03:11 PM »
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Thanxxxxx  Talat........  Sonu mom........  ur  welcome :lol:

Udaas mann  mere  aaj koi  aisa  geet suna de
jo ashk aankhon mein hai usse  dariya  bana  de
hai kyon itna  ghum  chupa tere  is dil mein  
apne  lafzon  ek   baar  mujhe    rula   de.........
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«Reply #71 on: March 12, 2006, 06:19:41 AM »
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u r welcome muna... bahut khoob....

ajj keya gaow mey sab geet khaye khu gaye
dil key etney tukdey huye key sab kuch bhul gaye
ajj ju chupey they gum dil me vo ahkhu sey nir ben key bhey gaye
humarey lafzo ko pero ker logoo ney afsane bena daley
likh ker un lafzo ko ganey bena daley.




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Thanxxxxx  Talat........  Sonu mom........  ur  welcome :lol:

Udaas mann  mere  aaj koi  aisa  geet suna de
jo ashk aankhon mein hai usse  dariya  bana  de
hai kyon itna  ghum  chupa tere  is dil mein  
apne  lafzon  ek   baar  mujhe    rula   de.........
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«Reply #72 on: March 19, 2006, 05:58:30 AM »
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you r welcome muna... bahut khoob....

ajj keya gaow mey sab geet khaye khu gaye
dil key etney tukdey huye key sab kuch bhul gaye
ajj ju chupey they gum dil me vo ahkhu sey nir ben key bhey gaye
humarey lafzo ko pero ker logoo ney afsane bena daley
likh ker un lafzo ko ganey bena daley.




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Thanxxxxx  Talat........  Sonu mom........  ur  welcome :lol:

Udaas mann  mere  aaj koi  aisa  geet suna de
jo ashk aankhon mein hai usse  dariya  bana  de
hai kyon itna  ghum  chupa tere  is dil mein  
apne  lafzon  ek   baar  mujhe    rula   de.........


ur  welcome    mom........  very  nice  again......

Udaas  mann  mere  kyon   aisi  baat  karta hai
kyon  tere  har  lafz  mein itna dard  bhara rahta hai
yeh  jamana  tujhe  hansne  nahi  dega  kabhi
phir  kyon  gairon  se  itni  ummeed  rakhta hai.........
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«Reply #73 on: March 22, 2006, 10:46:03 PM »
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THANKS BABO... WONDERFUL...

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you r welcome muna... bahut khoob....

ajj keya gaow mey sab geet khaye khu gaye
dil key etney tukdey huye key sab kuch bhul gaye
ajj ju chupey they gum dil me vo ahkhu sey nir ben key bhey gaye
humarey lafzo ko pero ker logoo ney afsane bena daley
likh ker un lafzo ko ganey bena daley.




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Thanxxxxx  Talat........  Sonu mom........  ur  welcome :lol:

Udaas mann  mere  aaj koi  aisa  geet suna de
jo ashk aankhon mein hai usse  dariya  bana  de
hai kyon itna  ghum  chupa tere  is dil mein  
apne  lafzon  ek   baar  mujhe    rula   de.........


ur  welcome    mom........  very  nice  again......

Udaas  mann  mere  kyon   aisi  baat  karta hai
kyon  tere  har  lafz  mein itna dard  bhara rahta hai
yeh  jamana  tujhe  hansne  nahi  dega  kabhi
phir  kyon  gairon  se  itni  ummeed  rakhta hai.........
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