::Udaas mann mere aaj kuch to likh de::

by nidhi_yadein on September 05, 2005, 05:16:12 PM
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"Udaas mann mere aaj kuch to likh de,
 kalam na uthaai itne din jaane kis dar se,

 seene me dard hai jise ujaagar karti hun,
 haal-e-dil alfaazon me jab bayan karti hun,

 waqt ke saath meri duniya badal si gayi,
 par tere liye jo ehsaas hain,sab wahin hain,

 ek din tumse keh dena hai mujhe sab kuch,
 barson kiya kitna pyaar tujhse batana hai,

 tune jaane kya samajh ke mujhe tanhaai di,
 tujhe teri is galti ka ehsaas to karaana hai,

 jahan chaho dhoond lo,bohat badi hai duniya,
 jo mil jaaye mujhsa pyaar karne wala kahin,

 mud ke na tujhe kabhi dekhoongi phir main,
 ye vada hai mera,vaade apne todti nahi main,

 aaj tak tumne sirf jhaanka hai meri nazron me,
 kyun kabhi lekin nazar na milaa sake tum,

 tumhe lagta thha main shayad samjhi nahi,
 ye na samjhe,ab itni bhi nasamajh nahi main,

 kyun katraate hi aise,mujhse door rehte ho,
 kaise kahun,kitna mujhe tum tadpaate ho,

 aisa nahi ki mera pyaar ho do pal ka,
 ye zindagi guzaarna chahti hun tumhare saath,

 ek dost,ek hamsafar banke teri,
 thhaamna chahti hun main tumhara haath,

 kyun is ankahe khamosh rishte ko naam nahi dete tum,
 kyun mere is ektarfaa pyar ko "pyaar" me nahi badalte tum."
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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2005, 05:25:54 PM »
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wow nidhi... nice  nice kuddiye.. esp the last lines!! dil ko chu gayi.... keep it up kuddiye!!

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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2005, 05:26:08 PM »
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simply wonderfull Nidhi sis.......just love it..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2005, 05:29:31 PM »
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Nidhi ji

.......

mashallah kya khoob likha hai ........   pehley kabhi likha tha .. pesh e nazar hai ...


tumhaari yaad ki shamen jo ham jalaate rahe
andhere dard ke ghir ghir ke dil mein aate rahe

tire Khayaal se roshan the mere qurb-o-javaar
sitaare raat bhar aankhoN mein jagmagaate rahe

shab-e-firaaq bitaane ko kuchh to karnaa tha
hisaab un ki inaayaat ka lagaate rahe

shikastah ho hi gaya sheesha chot kha kha kar
Ghazab kiya ki jo patthar se dil lagaate rage !!!

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«Reply #4 on: September 05, 2005, 05:31:07 PM »
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thanx a lot meena sis and nikki sis Usual Smile .....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2005, 05:36:54 PM »
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Wah humtum,kya khoob likha hai,and thanx a lot Usual Smile .

"Mohabbat ke diye ham barson se jalaye baithe hain,
      ek arse se teri raah me nigaah lagaaye baithe hain,
      kabhi to teri nazar yun shayad pad jaaye ham par bhi,
      teri mohabbat me khud ko hi mitaaye baithe hain."
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«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2005, 05:42:02 PM »
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waah waah nidhi ji ......

zakhm hara hai ab bhe dil pe tere teer ka
sir haazir hai phir bhee intezaar-e-shamshir ka
ho chaahnewala koi to mazaa aa jata hai
warna maqsad kyaa hai dil ki taamir ka !!!
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«Reply #7 on: September 05, 2005, 05:44:33 PM »
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wow aaj to mehfile shayari hai...sabhi mahan shayar aaj ek saath...kya khoob likh rahe hain....carry on all...too gud sis..
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«Reply #8 on: September 05, 2005, 06:02:30 PM »
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humtum.......u r superbbb :thumb: and thanx nikki sis and humtum,aap bhi kuch likhiye na nikki sis Usual Smile .

"Wo teer jo nazron se chalaata thha mujhpe,
      unki badaulat ab nigaah na uthaa paati hoon,
      nazron me chupa ke teri mohabbat ko hamesha,
      mujhe yunhi zindagi bhar ab jeena hai."
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«Reply #9 on: September 05, 2005, 06:16:13 PM »
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hummmmm  nice one !!!

ek lamhe ka safar khatm hua
bas wo hotey hi sahar khatm hua

khoon e dil, khoon e jigar khatm hua
bas kalam ka wo hunar khatm hua

gham e duniya hi to sarmaaya hai
kya karoonga ye agar khatm hua

dam thaa itna hi mere seeney mein
bas main pahunchaa tere dar, khatm hua !!  
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«Reply #10 on: September 05, 2005, 06:27:08 PM »
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again very nice humtum.

"Yun na tujhe apni zindagi se main jaane dungi,
       ab na tujhe khud ko main aur sataane dungi,

       kya samajh ke har baar dil ko thokar maarte ho,
       ab na dil ko tere paeron tale kabhi aane dungi,

       meri mohabbat jo tumhare mazaak ka dariya hai,
       taras jaoge tum pyaar ko,aise main tumhe tarsa dungi."
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«Reply #11 on: September 05, 2005, 10:16:30 PM »
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waah waah .... bahoot khoob !!!!

Main dil pe jabr karunga tujhay bhula dunga
Maruga khud bhi tujhay bhe kari saza dunga

Wafa karunga kisi sogwar chehre se
Purani qabr per katba naya saja dunga

Isi Khayal say guzri hai sham-e-dard aksar
Ke dard had se badhega to muskura dunga !!!!
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«Reply #12 on: September 06, 2005, 05:44:57 AM »
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glasses2 Wah!!! kya likha hai Nidhu sad5 aur Humtum Usual Smile vo last wale do poems bohat hi ache the glasses2 Ye hui naa baat glasses2


Teri tarah meri annkhon mein bhi dard tha kabhi,
Teri muskan ki tarah meri muskan bhi kho gayi thi kahin,
mere aankhon mein dekh... tujhe bhi ek inshaan nazaar aayegi,
Nafrat se waar kiya tha usnne bhi mere dilko kabhi,
Aaj ek Umar beet chuka hai...us tute-dile-daastan ki Aab,
ae dost........Teri tarah meri mohaabat bhi Nilaam hui thi,
Yahin Kabhi....................................!!!


{Just wrote it down......lolzz, U sweethearts know I dnt write well glasses2 }
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«Reply #13 on: September 06, 2005, 05:01:31 PM »
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Wah humtum,bohat khoob and PK tumne bhi booohhhhaaaattttt accha likha hai,thats so nice really Usual Smile .Thanx 2 both of u.

"Barson guzar gaye par dil use bhulaa nahi paaya,
      koshish ki maine,lekin har pal wo bohat yaad aaya,
      khamosh ho gaye lab,ye ankhein suni ho gayin,
      ek kissa banke ye zindagaani hai reh gayi........."
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«Reply #14 on: September 06, 2005, 05:23:51 PM »
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:lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  :lol: Very sweet yaar..very sweet!!!
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