----- /// Hum kuch na kuch likh lete the /// -----

by klaskar on May 31, 2010, 08:39:13 PM
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jab tum mere saath thi hum mohabbat pe likh lete the,
tumhaari judai me hum tumhaare ghum me likh lete the,
ab na to tum mere saath ho na hi meri kalam meri hai,
kal tak tumhari yaadein thi to unhi pe likh lete the,

wo kuch haseen pal jo humne bitaayein hain saath mein,
wo kuch haseen khwaab jo hote the hamare din raat mein,
kya ise achcha kahun ya kahun bura soch raha hoon main,
yahi to kuch baatein thi jinhe soch ke hum likh lete the,

jane kyun tumhe bhul chuke hain tab bhi yaad karte hain,
aur jab tum humein yaad aati ho to bhulna chahte hain,
tumhaare jaane se tumhe bhulaake kalam se chahat ki thi,
tumhaare har andaaz ko soch kuch na kuch likh lete the,

ab to lagta hai kalam ko bhi kuch narazgi ho gai hai humse,
tumhaare chale jaane se kalam ko bhi nafrat ho gai hai humse,
ab tanha raaton ko khamoshi se tanhaayion me guzaar lete hain,
warna pehle ghum bhulaane ke liye hum kuch likh lete the...



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«Reply #1 on: May 31, 2010, 09:19:13 PM »
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Applause Applause Bahaut khoob Dost!
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«Reply #2 on: May 31, 2010, 09:51:57 PM »
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Wah wah Kapil i bahut baddiya.bahut dard bhari kavita pesh kiya aapne.great creation.excellent Hats off to you! Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2010, 12:08:17 AM »
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Kapilji bahut khoob!!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2010, 03:42:06 AM »
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Waah Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Kapil ji.. Bahoot Bahoot Umda !
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«Reply #5 on: June 01, 2010, 05:05:56 AM »
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   Kuch na kuch nahi aap bahut kuch likh lete hain or achha hi likhte hain. Waise Kapil ji aakhir kya baat hai aaj to aapki likhawat-sajawat(presentation) me kuch change sa lag raha hai ,jaise renovation kara liya ho. Giggle  Par ye achha change hai so Keep it up. Aur mere majaak ka plz bura mat maniyega,main aise hi sab baatein lightly lekar likhti hoon.Nothing is serious. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: June 01, 2010, 06:03:44 AM »
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Bahot khoob Kapil ji. Bahot achhi poem likhi hai.
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«Reply #7 on: June 01, 2010, 06:53:00 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI        KAPIL JI......


TUM THE HUM THE  KHUSHI THI GUM THE
MILJUL KAR BAANT LIYA KARTE THE
HAR LAMHA HUM SATH SATH JEEYA KARTE THE
HAR BEETE LAMHON KO HUM KAID KIYA KARTE THE
ITNE KHUSH THE KI APNI YAADON KE KITABON MEIN
"HUM KUCH NA KUCH LIKH LETE THE"
AB TOH NA TUM HO NA HI KUCH LIKNE KO UTHTA HAI MERA HAATH
NA HI TERA SAATH HAI MUJHKO NA HI KALAM KA HAI MUJHKO SAATH..
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«Reply #8 on: June 01, 2010, 12:15:05 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: June 01, 2010, 12:43:55 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Kapilji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: June 01, 2010, 11:27:20 PM »
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Very Very Gud !!!!!!!!!

"KAMAL " Xpersion !!!!!!!!!!!

Relly suprb work .......

From: Ek DOst...............
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«Reply #11 on: June 02, 2010, 01:31:50 AM »
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bahut hi khoob lagi aap ki yeh rachna Kalaskar Ji ... Hum Kucn na Kuch likh lete they ... bahut hi badiya likha aap ney...

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«Reply #12 on: June 03, 2010, 01:14:18 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai...!!!

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«Reply #13 on: June 03, 2010, 01:14:56 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Wah wah Kapil i bahut baddiya.bahut dard bhari kavita pesh kiya aapne.great creation.excellent Hats off to you! Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: June 03, 2010, 01:15:25 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Mamta ji...!!!

Kapilji bahut khoob!!!
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