~*~ Waqt lag jata bahaut hai ~*~ by Rahim

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Kayi baar suna hai ‘zindagi chalte rehne ka naam hai’,
Tajurbe se jana paisa hi insaan ko dor’rata bahaut hai..

Shaksiyat aur kirdar chahe dhool se saje hue ho,
Insaan toh apne jisme ko bas sanwarta bahaut hai..

Jab dard urooj par ponch behta hai ankhon se meri,
Khuda bhi badalon se pani barsata bahaut hai..

Meri tarha sabhi ko chahiye ek pyaar karne wala dil,
Bas woh dil tak ponchne main waqt lag jata bahaut hai..

Badi mushkil se milte hai wafa nibhane wale dost yahan,
Nadan mager insaan hai jo rishton ko gawata bahaut hai..

Usse bhoolna chaha toh jaise zakhmon pe parda hogaya,
Zindagi ko jeene ki ek nayi umeed liye jeeta hai dil aj kal,
Par dekho ‘Khamosh’ ki dunia main phir bhi san’natta bahaut hai..

Ae Khuda tera shukar hai mager ek meethi si shikayat hai tujse,
Ek hamsafar kay liye tu mujhe tarsata bahaut hai..

Usse lagta hai dhoor jakar usne kam kar diye sitam apne,
Khayalon main aa kar mere aj bhi mujhe woh rulata bahaut hai..

Kuch zyada likh gaya aj toh maafi chahta hoon doston,
Bas yeh nadan sa dil hai ‘Khamosh’ ka jo likhwata bahaut hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2011, 03:23:43 PM »
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kya baat hai rahimji... kin shabdon main tarif karun...  bahut khub....

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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2011, 06:14:33 PM »
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waah dost…
kamaal ke theame par alag alag sach likh dala…
umda behad umda…

ek bat kahni he mujhe
““
aye dost--apni nagmo ko pesh karne me
hame tu, tadpaata bahut hai

tere nagmo ki kare kya tareef hum
kabhi kadwi sachai to kabhi dil ki zazbato se, tu hame rulaata bahut hai
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khus raho dost
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«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2011, 06:35:26 PM »
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bht bht khoob rahim...
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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2011, 06:44:03 PM »
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kya baat hai rahimji... kin shabdon main tarif karun...  bahut khub....

 Applause Applause Applause
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Manjum jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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waah dost…
kamaal ke theame par alag alag sach likh dala…
umda behad umda…

ek bat kahni he mujhe
““
aye dost--apni nagmo ko pesh karne me
hame tu, tadpaata bahut hai

tere nagmo ki kare kya tareef hum
kabhi kadwi sachai to kabhi dil ki zazbato se, tu hame rulaata bahut hai
””
khus raho dost
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Nirala dost..
apki shikayat jayaz hai aur koshish karunga
kay jaldi likhoun..
Aur rulane wali baat ko ek compliment samaj rakhunga..
Khush rahiye..!
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bht bht khoob rahim...

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Priya di..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2011, 07:35:54 PM »
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waah waah waah.. Kya baat hai Bhai... Bahoot Khoob Likha hai jaise Dil Ke ehsaaso ko sabdo mein Utaar diya ho,,, bahoot lajawaab Bhai !!
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«Reply #8 on: April 08, 2011, 07:39:20 PM »
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waah waah waah.. Kya baat hai Bhai... Bahoot Khoob Likha hai jaise Dil Ke ehsaaso ko sabdo mein Utaar diya ho,,, bahoot lajawaab Bhai !!
Haan di bas lavson ko ehsaason main hi uttarta rehta hoon..
Bahaut bahaut shukriya apka..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: April 08, 2011, 09:49:58 PM »
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mast mast poem Rahim-bhai..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ae Khuda tera shukar hai mager ek meethi si shikayat hai tujse,
Ek hamsafar kay liye tu mujhe tarsata bahaut hai............
................................................. ...........................................mast lines hain.....



Kayi baar suna hai ‘zindagi chalte rehne ka naam hai’,
Tajurbe se jana paisa hi insaan ko dor’rata bahaut hai..

Shaksiyat aur kirdar chahe dhool se saje hue ho,
Insaan toh apne jisme ko bas sanwarta bahaut hai..

Jab dard urooj par ponch behta hai ankhon se meri,
Khuda bhi badalon se pani barsata bahaut hai..

Meri tarha sabhi ko chahiye ek pyaar karne wala dil,
Bas woh dil tak ponchne main waqt lag jata bahaut hai..

Badi mushkil se milte hai wafa nibhane wale dost yahan,
Nadan mager insaan hai jo rishton ko gawata bahaut hai..

Usse bhoolna chaha toh jaise zakhmon pe parda hogaya,
Zindagi ko jeene ki ek nayi umeed liye jeeta hai dil aj kal,
Par dekho ‘Khamosh’ ki dunia main phir bhi san’natta bahaut hai..

Ae Khuda tera shukar hai mager ek meethi si shikayat hai tujse,
Ek hamsafar kay liye tu mujhe tarsata bahaut hai..

Usse lagta hai dhoor jakar usne kam kar diye sitam apne,
Khayalon main aa kar mere aj bhi mujhe woh rulata bahaut hai..

Kuch zyada likh gaya aj toh maafi chahta hoon doston,
Bas yeh nadan sa dil hai ‘Khamosh’ ka jo likhwata bahaut hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #10 on: April 09, 2011, 07:44:21 AM »
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Kayi baar suna hai ‘zindagi chalte rehne ka naam hai’,
Tajurbe se jana paisa hi insaan ko dor’rata bahaut hai..

Shaksiyat aur kirdar chahe dhool se saje hue ho,
Insaan toh apne jisme ko bas sanwarta bahaut hai..

Jab dard urooj par ponch behta hai ankhon se meri,
Khuda bhi badalon se pani barsata bahaut hai..

Meri tarha sabhi ko chahiye ek pyaar karne wala dil,
Bas woh dil tak ponchne main waqt lag jata bahaut hai..

Badi mushkil se milte hai wafa nibhane wale dost yahan,
Nadan mager insaan hai jo rishton ko gawata bahaut hai..

Usse bhoolna chaha toh jaise zakhmon pe parda hogaya,
Zindagi ko jeene ki ek nayi umeed liye jeeta hai dil aj kal,
Par dekho ‘Khamosh’ ki dunia main phir bhi san’natta bahaut hai..

Ae Khuda tera shukar hai mager ek meethi si shikayat hai tujse,
Ek hamsafar kay liye tu mujhe tarsata bahaut hai..

Usse lagta hai dhoor jakar usne kam kar diye sitam apne,
Khayalon main aa kar mere aj bhi mujhe woh rulata bahaut hai..

Kuch zyada likh gaya aj toh maafi chahta hoon doston,
Bas yeh nadan sa dil hai ‘Khamosh’ ka jo likhwata bahaut hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Rahim Ji .. EhsaasoN ko bahut asardaar dhang se pesh kiya hai aapne ... behad umdaa soch ke likhe khayaal pasand aaye hume .. tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #11 on: April 09, 2011, 08:51:18 AM »
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mast mast poem Rahim-bhai..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ae Khuda tera shukar hai mager ek meethi si shikayat hai tujse,
Ek hamsafar kay liye tu mujhe tarsata bahaut hai............
................................................. ...........................................mast lines hain.....



Teh teh dil se shukriya Koyal di..
Yeh shaer likhte waqt soch raha tha kay kahin log
isse galat na samjhe..
Acha laga jankar kay apne iske sai mayne samjhe..
Khush rahiye..!
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Rahim Ji .. EhsaasoN ko bahut asardaar dhang se pesh kiya hai aapne ... behad umdaa soch ke likhe khayaal pasand aaye hume .. tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Naresh bhai..
Hamesha saath dene kay liye teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #13 on: April 09, 2011, 01:00:40 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob mere Dost!!!

Huemsha Ki Tarah Aapki kalam Sach Hi likhti hai..

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Kayi baar suna hai ‘zindagi chalte rehne ka naam hai’,
Tajurbe se jana paisa hi insaan ko dor’rata bahaut hai..

Shaksiyat aur kirdar chahe dhool se saje hue ho,
Insaan toh apne jisme ko bas sanwarta bahaut hai..

Jab dard urooj par ponch behta hai ankhon se meri,
Khuda bhi badalon se pani barsata bahaut hai..

Meri tarha sabhi ko chahiye ek pyaar karne wala dil,
Bas woh dil tak ponchne main waqt lag jata bahaut hai..

Badi mushkil se milte hai wafa nibhane wale dost yahan,
Nadan mager insaan hai jo rishton ko gawata bahaut hai..

Usse bhoolna chaha toh jaise zakhmon pe parda hogaya,
Zindagi ko jeene ki ek nayi umeed liye jeeta hai dil aj kal,
Par dekho ‘Khamosh’ ki dunia main phir bhi san’natta bahaut hai..

Ae Khuda tera shukar hai mager ek meethi si shikayat hai tujse,
Ek hamsafar kay liye tu mujhe tarsata bahaut hai..

Usse lagta hai dhoor jakar usne kam kar diye sitam apne,
Khayalon main aa kar mere aj bhi mujhe woh rulata bahaut hai..

Kuch zyada likh gaya aj toh maafi chahta hoon doston,
Bas yeh nadan sa dil hai ‘Khamosh’ ka jo likhwata bahaut hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

 andaaz-e-bayaan apne mokhtasar karle sheba,
samajhne wale ishaare bahut dooor se dekhte hain..!
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