Woh Aadmi Acha Zaroor Tha "Khwaish"

by khwaish on April 16, 2011, 02:10:53 PM
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                 Zindagi Mein Waqt Par Kuch Aisi Bhi Ban Aayi
          Lamhon Ne Khata Ki Aur Sadiyon Ne Saza paayi



kabhi kabhi Hum Apni Zindagi mein Aisi Bhi Khata Kar baithe Hai.
Jiski Saza Humein Umar Bhar Milti hai..
Koi insaan Iss Duniya mein Apne Aap Mein Mukamaal nahi Hota
Kuch Kamiyan, Kuch Nadaaniyan Har
Insaan kar Baithha hai..Issi Soch Par Kuch Likh Raha Hoon




Yeh  Raaz kaun Jaane Kiska Kasoor Tha
Woh Halaat Kamzor The Yaa main Magroor tha

Jo Apne Sab khaas the Woh Aaj paas Bhi Nahi!!!
Faaslon mein paas The par dil Se Woh Door Tha

Shukar Hai ke Neend Se Aankh To khuli Apni!!!
varna Har Khwaab Pehle Hi Tootkar Chakna-Choor Tha

Kuch Palon Ko Thaamkar Sambhaal Leta Gar Mere Bas mein Hota!!!
Par Insaan To Insaan Hi Hai, Waqt Ke Haathon Majboor Tha

Uski Kismat Ne Usse Bahut Badnaam Kiya
  Varna Woh Aadmi Acha zaroor Tha!!!!

Mohabbat,Rishte-Naate sab Khilone Hai Jazbaat Ke Bazaar mein!!!
Aaj Jiski keemat Kuch bhi nahi Kal sabke Liye Woh Ahle-huzoor Tha..

"Khwaish" Ko Jisne Thaama Tha Har Mushkil mein!!!
Aaj jab dekha usse To Uski Aankhon Mein Bhi Guroor Tha..

                        "Khwaish"
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«Reply #1 on: April 16, 2011, 02:35:18 PM »
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waah janaab…
kya hakikat kah gaye aap…
aapki iss umda soch se samna ho gaya warna
ab talak to mai bhi kuch magroor tha…
kuch meh ka nasha to kuch mohabt ka bhi suroor tha…

behad khubsurati se sachchai bayan karti iss post ko hazaaro daad…
khus rahiye
sukriya
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«Reply #2 on: April 16, 2011, 02:41:22 PM »
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                 Zindagi Mein Waqt Par Kuch Aisi Bhi Ban Aayi
          Lamhon Ne Khata Ki Aur Sadiyon Ne Saza paayi



kabhi kabhi Hum Apni Zindagi mein Aisi Bhi Khata Kar baithe Hai.
Jiski Saza Humein Umar Bhar Milti hai..
Koi insaan Iss Duniya mein Apne Aap Mein Mukamaal nahi Hota
Kuch Kamiyan, Kuch Nadaaniyan Har
Insaan kar Baithha hai..Issi Soch Par Kuch Likh Raha Hoon




Yeh  Raaz kaun Jaane Kiska Kasoor Tha
Woh Halaat Kamzor The Yaa main Magroor tha

Jo Apne Sab khaas the Woh Aaj paas Bhi Nahi!!!
Faaslon mein paas The par dil Se Woh Door Tha

Shukar Hai ke Neend Se Aankh To khuli Apni!!!
varna Har Khwaab Pehle Hi Tootkar Chakna-Choor Tha

Kuch Palon Ko Thaamkar Sabhaal Leta Gar Mere Bas mein Hota!!!
Par Insaan To Insaan Hi Hai, Waqt Ke Haathon Majboor Tha

Uski Kismat Ne Usse Bahut Badnaam Kiya
"Khwaish" varna Woh Aadmi Acha zaroor Tha!!!!

Mohabbat,Rishte-Naate sab Khilone Hai Jazbaat Ke Bazaar mein!!!
Aaj Jiski keemat Kuch bhi nahi Kal sabke Liye Woh Ahle-huzoor Tha..

"Khwaish" Ko Jisne Thaama Tha Har Mushkil mein!!!
Aaj jab dekha usse To Uski Aankhon Mein Bhi Guroor Tha..

                        "Khwaish"


nice
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«Reply #3 on: April 16, 2011, 03:06:13 PM »
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"Uski ankhon main guroor tha"
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Wah Wah Wah..
Dost kamal ka likha hai..Zindagi ki sachayian pesh kar di..!
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: April 16, 2011, 03:16:58 PM »
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wah wah kaya khoob lekha hai , padte padte kho hi gaya tha main. Bhaut khob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: April 16, 2011, 04:47:47 PM »
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                 Zindagi Mein Waqt Par Kuch Aisi Bhi Ban Aayi
          Lamhon Ne Khata Ki Aur Sadiyon Ne Saza paayi



kabhi kabhi Hum Apni Zindagi mein Aisi Bhi Khata Kar baithe Hai.
Jiski Saza Humein Umar Bhar Milti hai..
Koi insaan Iss Duniya mein Apne Aap Mein Mukamaal nahi Hota
Kuch Kamiyan, Kuch Nadaaniyan Har
Insaan kar Baithha hai..Issi Soch Par Kuch Likh Raha Hoon




Yeh  Raaz kaun Jaane Kiska Kasoor Tha
Woh Halaat Kamzor The Yaa main Magroor tha

Jo Apne Sab khaas the Woh Aaj paas Bhi Nahi!!!
Faaslon mein paas The par dil Se Woh Door Tha

Shukar Hai ke Neend Se Aankh To khuli Apni!!!
varna Har Khwaab Pehle Hi Tootkar Chakna-Choor Tha

Kuch Palon Ko Thaamkar Sabhaal Leta Gar Mere Bas mein Hota!!!
Par Insaan To Insaan Hi Hai, Waqt Ke Haathon Majboor Tha

Uski Kismat Ne Usse Bahut Badnaam Kiya
"Khwaish" varna Woh Aadmi Acha zaroor Tha!!!!

Mohabbat,Rishte-Naate sab Khilone Hai Jazbaat Ke Bazaar mein!!!
Aaj Jiski keemat Kuch bhi nahi Kal sabke Liye Woh Ahle-huzoor Tha..

"Khwaish" Ko Jisne Thaama Tha Har Mushkil mein!!!
Aaj jab dekha usse To Uski Aankhon Mein Bhi Guroor Tha..

                        "Khwaish"


Merre zehen vich kuch gallan chal raiya si per lafz sath nhi de rahe si tuadi is peshkash ne merre lafza nu zubaan de diti bahut shukriya sachai aur zindgi touu bhari es peshkash nu likhan layi..
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«Reply #6 on: April 16, 2011, 05:32:30 PM »
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kya baat hai khwaishji... ati sundar.... kya khub likha hai
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«Reply #7 on: April 16, 2011, 06:24:55 PM »
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waah janaab…
kya hakikat kah gaye aap…
aapki iss umda soch se samna ho gaya warna
ab talak to mai bhi kuch magroor tha…
kuch meh ka nasha to kuch mohabt ka bhi suroor tha…

behad khubsurati se sachchai bayan karti iss post ko hazaaro daad…
khus rahiye
sukriya

Killbill Ji Aapka Behad se Bhi Zyaada Shukriya Jo Aapne Iss Kalaam Ko itna Pasand Farmaya..Bas Kuch Haqeeqi Baatein Thi jinhe Lafz Dena Chaahta Tha, Aapne Pasand Kiya Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya..

Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega Dost!!! icon_flower

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«Reply #8 on: April 16, 2011, 06:36:08 PM »
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bht bht khoob khwaish ji...
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«Reply #9 on: April 16, 2011, 08:22:49 PM »
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nice

Thankyou!!!
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«Reply #10 on: April 16, 2011, 08:42:32 PM »
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Bahut umdaa khayaalaat pesh kiye haiN aapne kalaam meN ... Khwaish Ji !

tamaam tehreer apna asar chhoDhti hai zehn par ... bahut khoob !!
tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

yunhi likhte rahiye ... khush raheN ... !!!

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #11 on: April 17, 2011, 10:20:07 AM »
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                 Zindagi Mein Waqt Par Kuch Aisi Bhi Ban Aayi
          Lamhon Ne Khata Ki Aur Sadiyon Ne Saza paayi



kabhi kabhi Hum Apni Zindagi mein Aisi Bhi Khata Kar baithe Hai.
Jiski Saza Humein Umar Bhar Milti hai..
Koi insaan Iss Duniya mein Apne Aap Mein Mukamaal nahi Hota
Kuch Kamiyan, Kuch Nadaaniyan Har
Insaan kar Baithha hai..Issi Soch Par Kuch Likh Raha Hoon




Yeh  Raaz kaun Jaane Kiska Kasoor Tha
Woh Halaat Kamzor The Yaa main Magroor tha

Jo Apne Sab khaas the Woh Aaj paas Bhi Nahi!!!
Faaslon mein paas The par dil Se Woh Door Tha

Shukar Hai ke Neend Se Aankh To khuli Apni!!!
varna Har Khwaab Pehle Hi Tootkar Chakna-Choor Tha

Kuch Palon Ko Thaamkar Sabhaal Leta Gar Mere Bas mein Hota!!!
Par Insaan To Insaan Hi Hai, Waqt Ke Haathon Majboor Tha

Uski Kismat Ne Usse Bahut Badnaam Kiya
"Khwaish" varna Woh Aadmi Acha zaroor Tha!!!!

Mohabbat,Rishte-Naate sab Khilone Hai Jazbaat Ke Bazaar mein!!!
Aaj Jiski keemat Kuch bhi nahi Kal sabke Liye Woh Ahle-huzoor Tha..

"Khwaish" Ko Jisne Thaama Tha Har Mushkil mein!!!
Aaj jab dekha usse To Uski Aankhon Mein Bhi Guroor Tha..

                        "Khwaish"


wow wah wah wah... kaya baat hai ek ek shabd kaya kamaal ka likha hai khwaish....
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«Reply #12 on: April 17, 2011, 02:08:54 PM »
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"Uski ankhon main guroor tha"
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Wah Wah Wah..
Dost kamal ka likha hai..Zindagi ki sachayian pesh kar di..!
Khush rahiye..!

Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya Dost!!!!

Humesha Saath Dete Rahiyega Dost.. icon_flower

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«Reply #13 on: April 18, 2011, 12:30:20 PM »
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kya bat he khwaish ji........hamesha ki tarah ye bhi bahot hi aachi peshkash he ..........bahot khoob..........ese hi likhtey rahiye......
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«Reply #14 on: April 18, 2011, 06:20:51 PM »
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wah wah kaya khoob lekha hai , padte padte kho hi gaya tha main. Bhaut khob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut bahut Shukriya Sanjeev Ji.. icon_flower
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