woh wakt aur tha

by samnoj on May 09, 2007, 01:05:03 PM
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Woh zamana aur the jab hum hanste the
Woh tarana aur the jab hum gungunate the  

Woh manzile aur thi jis ki talash thi
Woh raste aur the jis per chalte the  

Woh khawishiye aur thi jis ki chah thi
Woh sapne aur the jis ko bunte the  

Woh riste aur the jo apne sath the
Woh log aur the jo apne khaas the  

na woh mousam loutega, na wo zamana
phir kis intezarr me baitha hai dil diwana

koi shayed aa jaye bhule se hi lout ker
khula rakha hai is dil ke aashiyane ka der
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«Reply #1 on: August 01, 2007, 01:09:51 PM »
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acha likha ha samnoj ji
akhir line aur khubsurat ho sakti thi lekin ab bhi achi hai
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«Reply #2 on: August 17, 2007, 10:02:11 AM »
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shukriya sahiba ji

aapki hidayat per amal karne ki koshish zaroor karege
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«Reply #3 on: August 25, 2007, 09:07:15 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Samnoj !
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2007, 10:59:47 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: September 01, 2007, 03:56:21 PM »
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talet g ny bilkul sahi kaha Usual Smile bohat khoob.... bohat acha likhty hain ap... wasy sub badel gaya zamana ,tarana,mosem lakin nai bedli to bus 1 ye drawni pic ..

koi  mjhy btay ga k sub kitny arsy sy ye image dakh rahy hain Huh?  sad5
ary koi to samjhy bhai samnoj ko k achy shair bacho ko khoof zda nai kerty sad5
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«Reply #6 on: September 03, 2007, 04:46:57 AM »
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bahoot khoob samnoj..
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«Reply #7 on: September 05, 2007, 07:39:27 AM »
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thanx Dipika aur waffa

to tum mere siggi ke peeche hi pad gaye . . .bahut logo ne koshish ki ise badalne ki ab aap bhi ker lo...

in sab ko to ab is pic ki aadat ho gayi hai aap bhi ye aadat daal hi lo
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«Reply #8 on: September 18, 2007, 08:48:35 AM »
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Waah Waah... Bahut hi khoob likha hai Samnoj...

A Try From My Side :[/u]

Woh waqt bhi aur tha, jo aa kar chala gaya,
Yaad aaya aaj phir, aur rula kar chala gaya...

Khol gaya zanzeerein, ruke hue tufaano ki,
Soye hue armaano ko, jaga kar chala gaya...

Baithe hai bejaano se, bus isi soch mein hum,
Kaise Woh hosh humare, udda kar chala gaya...
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«Reply #9 on: September 18, 2007, 02:02:13 PM »
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bahoot khoob Sam!!!

Shikha, hamesha ki tarah lajawab!!! bahoot acha likha hai!!!
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«Reply #10 on: September 18, 2007, 04:08:27 PM »
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Thanks Pooja di... Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: September 25, 2007, 07:01:11 AM »
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thanx shikha n pooja ji

bahut hi acha likha hai shikha
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«Reply #12 on: September 26, 2007, 12:38:36 PM »
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Bohot khoob sam .. nice reply shikha di..

Koi tumse pooche kaun hoon main
tum keh dena koi khaas nahi
ek dost hai kacha pakka sa
ek jhoot hai aada sacha sa
jazbon ko dhaanpe ek parda
bus ek bahaana acha sa
jeewan ka aisa saathi hai
jo duur na hoke, paas nahi
koi tumse pooche kaun hoon main
tum keh dena koi khaas nahi..
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«Reply #13 on: September 26, 2007, 12:44:30 PM »
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Sam, Shikha, Sanya

Marvellous =D> =D> =D>

Teeno ke naam "S" se shuru aur teeno ki shayari behtareen :D
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«Reply #14 on: September 26, 2007, 02:17:55 PM »
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I agree with Raj ji...

Bahut khoob... Bahut umda likha hai aapne Sam,
Good 1 Shikha ji and Sanya yours also too good to read.
Keep up friends...  Usual Smile
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