main nahi

by komalpreet kaur on August 20, 2009, 06:33:32 AM
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pata nahi kyu par meri kalam tham gae,
unz taan zindagi ch nae pae gam kae,
par samaj na aae ki aaj eh kyun likhan lagya kamb gae.

syad hun dukh nae ene dukhdae ,
ki aaj eh mere hathan ch kamlae.
ki likha kuch samaj nahi,
jo socha usdi ramaj nahi.


aaj mere shabadaan ch koi tapash nahi,
mere harfa vich koi gam nahi.
meriyaan akha ch koi nammi nahi.
main socha ki sayad eh main nahi.
eh mera vazood nahi.

main ki bann rahi haan,
mainu is da pata nahi,
par hun enj lag reha ki main zindagi toh khaffa nahi,


par main mere gama naal bewaffa nahi,
main meri zindagi naal bewafaa nahi,
main us toh milli judai naal bewaffa nahi,
pata nahi mainu kis cheez di saja milli.




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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: August 20, 2009, 07:17:26 AM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Komal preet ji,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #2 on: August 20, 2009, 07:19:59 AM »
thnxs madhuwesh ji
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jaindost
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«Reply #3 on: August 20, 2009, 09:15:44 AM »
good one........
usto mili bewafai to khafa nahi..........
good...
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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2009, 07:08:38 AM »
thnxs jaindost ji
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AVTAR RAYAT
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«Reply #5 on: August 21, 2009, 08:00:16 AM »
:clap:Bahut Hi Dard Hai Aap Ji Di Kalam Vich...Bahut Acchhe,,,PREET JI,,,
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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #6 on: August 21, 2009, 09:54:47 AM »
thnxsss avtar ji
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«Reply #7 on: August 21, 2009, 05:08:21 PM »
Bahut Bahut khoob Komalji..

Bhaut Hi Vadiya Likheya Hai Tussi Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #8 on: August 22, 2009, 12:01:22 AM »
Bahut Khoob Komal Ji
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shab
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«Reply #9 on: August 22, 2009, 01:35:44 AM »
bahut khoob Komal ji
dard bhari hai
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Roja
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«Reply #10 on: August 22, 2009, 02:43:57 AM »
pata nahi kyu par meri kalam tham gae,
unz taan zindagi ch nae pae gam kae,
par samaj na aae ki aaj eh kyun likhan lagya kamb gae.

syad hun dukh nae ene dukhdae ,
ki aaj eh mere hathan ch kamlae.
ki likha kuch samaj nahi,
jo socha usdi ramaj nahi.

aaj mere shabadaan ch koi tapash nahi,
mere harfa vich koi gam nahi.
meriyaan akha ch koi nammi nahi.
main socha ki sayad eh main nahi.
eh mera vazood nahi.

main ki bann rahi haan,
mainu is da pata nahi,
par hun enj lag reha ki main zindagi toh khaffa nahi,

par main mere gama naal bewaffa nahi,
main meri zindagi naal bewafaa nahi,
main us toh milli judai naal bewaffa nahi,
pata nahi mainu kis cheez di saja milli.

Bahut khoob. Very very touchy lines. Keep up  Thumbs UP
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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #11 on: August 22, 2009, 06:15:08 AM »
thnxs khawaish ji ,harish ji ,shabji and roja ji...
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AloneJatt
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«Reply #12 on: August 24, 2009, 11:26:32 AM »
very nice ji.....
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Nadaan Alone
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«Reply #13 on: September 06, 2009, 04:29:06 AM »
acha likha hai dost....thnxx
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komalpreet kaur
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«Reply #14 on: September 06, 2009, 09:51:30 AM »
thnxs alone jatt ji and nadaan ji
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