:: poems by me : any comments r most welcum! ::

by myheart_ursonly on December 09, 2004, 03:04:07 PM
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Nothing real, Nothing sweet...
Just stand tall on ur feet...
Make promises then break...
True Life... Live it fake...


comments from everyone, gud or bad, r welcome!!!
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«Reply #1 on: December 09, 2004, 04:52:43 PM »
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true life live it fake??? y?? life is not fake... u dont hav to make it fake...

nice poem though..
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #2 on: December 09, 2004, 04:56:09 PM »
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thnx nishita ji!!! thnx for compliments

another poem by me:

pain
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sweet nerves sweet curves
cut them open and feel the pain
watch yourself die
nothing but life you will gain
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #3 on: December 09, 2004, 05:49:36 PM »
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ahan  Usual Smile
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #4 on: December 09, 2004, 06:35:22 PM »
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thnx nishita ji!!! thnx for compliments

another poem by me:

pain
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sweet nerves sweet curves
cut them open and feel the pain
watch yourself die
nothing but life you will gain


awesome!! :evil: i love dat kinda pain...
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Meena
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«Reply #5 on: December 09, 2004, 07:32:00 PM »
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nice!
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #6 on: December 10, 2004, 01:31:12 AM »
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thnx salma, mansi n meena ji
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #7 on: December 10, 2004, 01:32:51 AM »
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thnx nishita ji!!! thnx for compliments

another poem by me:

pain
===
sweet nerves sweet curves
cut them open and feel the pain
watch yourself die
nothing but life you will gain


awesome!! :evil: i love dat kinda pain...




so u like pain mansi ji???  :rolleyes:
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #8 on: December 10, 2004, 01:49:41 AM »
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part d mass i n2 2 n watch d pain swim
though d life is drownin but d mess is now at brim :evil:
sweet nerves....sweet curves...seem 2 be in vain
wen a beautiful body is thr, but d world's makin it insane :twisted:
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #9 on: December 10, 2004, 02:00:44 AM »
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nice mansi ji
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akela
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«Reply #10 on: December 10, 2004, 03:00:52 PM »
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good work guys
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #11 on: December 10, 2004, 06:21:12 PM »
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good work guys



thnx akela ji


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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #12 on: December 10, 2004, 06:24:44 PM »
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ur welcome mr Halal.....oopssss...Mr Bilal... :lol:

juz kidding
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #13 on: December 10, 2004, 06:25:40 PM »
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thanx akela & Chimpu! :queen:
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«Reply #14 on: December 10, 2004, 06:34:02 PM »
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ur welcome mr Halal.....oopssss...Mr Bilal... :lol:

juz kidding



i said thnx to akela ji not u  Puzzled !
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