:: poems by me : any comments r most welcum! ::

by myheart_ursonly on December 09, 2004, 03:04:07 PM
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #60 on: December 12, 2004, 06:25:08 PM »
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bas!! band karo mere forum me ye ladai!!


dono chup


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«Reply #61 on: December 12, 2004, 06:32:17 PM »
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ladayin hi to pyar ka sabab hoti hain.........
ladayin na ho to zindagy dhub hoti hain......
issey hi pyar ka patta chalta hain.......
isi se to mananay ka mauka milta hain..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #62 on: December 12, 2004, 06:51:58 PM »
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very nice deep ji

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smile_deep1
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«Reply #63 on: December 12, 2004, 06:54:43 PM »
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Thanks heart ji...............
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #64 on: December 12, 2004, 07:00:21 PM »
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Quote from: "smile_deep1"
ladayin hi to pyar ka sabab hoti hain.........
ladayin na ho to zindagy dhub hoti hain......
issey hi pyar ka patta chalta hain.......
isi se to mananay ka mauka milta hain..... Usual Smile


awwww so true :wink:
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«Reply #65 on: December 12, 2004, 07:07:37 PM »
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ok bye c ya l8r... i hav vvrk to do... tumhare saath raha to meri poem kabhi poori nahi hogi


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«Reply #66 on: December 13, 2004, 08:05:46 PM »
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Poori bhi to meri kripa se ho rahi hai :twisted: Nai to tujhe pange lene k alava or 1 line likhne k alava kuch aati hi nai hai
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«Reply #67 on: December 13, 2004, 08:52:47 PM »
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Poori bhi to meri kripa se ho rahi hai :twisted: Nai to tujhe pange lene k alava or 1 line likhne k alava kuch aati hi nai hai



 Puzzled !   bejti
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #68 on: December 13, 2004, 10:57:09 PM »
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lol.......bejti kharaab :twisted:
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #69 on: December 14, 2004, 12:04:46 AM »
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stop farting in my thread    :slap:  :slap:  :slap:  :slap:  :slap:


nahi to pachtayegi ladki   :frown:
teri game baja dunga   :mgun:   :mgun:


batooninani@idiotmansi.com
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smile_deep1
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«Reply #70 on: December 14, 2004, 12:09:44 AM »
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lolz................goodgoing
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #71 on: December 14, 2004, 10:54:11 AM »
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by d way ur post is so...........up dat if som1 even farts here,dat won't have any effect on  it..lol :wis  :mrgreen:
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«Reply #72 on: December 14, 2004, 12:32:07 PM »
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****ed up by none other but u  lolz   :swear:
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«Reply #73 on: December 14, 2004, 12:33:46 PM »
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heres another one by me wrote last night



you dont care
by ****(me)


i dont have anything to write
so i am writing with knife

noone seems to hear me
i have cried all my life

my life is lost in pain
i have nothing to gain

now there is a cut in my wrist
and i can feel the pain

with the deep red flow
all my pain will go

end of my sorrowful life
its the only way i can let go

im ending my life now
im able to get rid of it sumhow

perfectred stream is appearing
all my pains are disappearing

i waited for you all life long
but u never seem to hear my song

now its time to say gudbye
coz u dont care if i die





plz comment gud/bad/brickbates/suggestions anything..     .....thnx
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«Reply #74 on: December 14, 2004, 12:47:37 PM »
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its really very nice work **** (you) ................ heart ji
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