:: poems by me : any comments r most welcum! ::

by myheart_ursonly on December 09, 2004, 03:04:07 PM
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #105 on: December 17, 2004, 04:18:12 PM »
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tujhe teri izzat ka khyaal ni hai?mujhe q kahaa itni stinkin poem padhne ko.bol to raha tha mujhpe poem likega :cry: or bada comment kya likhu,tu hi bata.rona-dhona tera band hona ni hai :cry:

neways keh hi deti hu....lovely..again :wink: lol..lol..lol..lol
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«Reply #106 on: December 17, 2004, 05:20:10 PM »
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tujhe teri izzat ka khyaal ni hai?mujhe q kahaa itni stinkin poem padhne ko.bol to raha tha mujhpe poem likega :cry: or bada comment kya likhu,tu hi bata.rona-dhona tera band hona ni hai :cry:

neways keh hi deti hu....lovely..again :wink: lol..lol..lol..lol



:kiss:
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«Reply #107 on: December 17, 2004, 05:21:24 PM »
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thnx masi

ab ke baar pakka tere wali hi post karunga

abhi adhoori hai naa  Puzzled !

:kiss:
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KaMaL
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«Reply #108 on: December 17, 2004, 07:31:23 PM »
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Your welcome Heart ji.... Usual Smile
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #109 on: December 17, 2004, 09:32:40 PM »
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Your welcome Heart ji.... Usual Smile



thnx.......... kamal.............
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«Reply #110 on: December 18, 2004, 03:43:51 PM »
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hey heart i just saw all ur poems n i think it was too good do keep creating i really liked all of them
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #111 on: December 18, 2004, 04:17:40 PM »
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thnx shweta u r sure the coolest!
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #112 on: December 19, 2004, 09:10:39 AM »
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"unconditional love"
by me(****)



she slowly whispers in my ears
that life was so harsh for her
her voice broke into tears
she was stupid enuf to trust him

she gave all her heart, her unconditional love
only to be hurt in return
she saw a promise in his eyes
a promise dying so badly

she felt so lonely
felt the pain inside
her love was cheating on her
still she locked her pain inside

tears came down day n nite
her life was living hell
she was losing her only love
kept waiting for sumone who'll never come

but now she has found someone
her dream guy, her love
i hope shes gonna trust him even more...
but god! why i am crying writing this?

wishing her a sweet love life

for a girl true at heart,
for mansi.

love,
heart(****)


plz plz plz comment
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #113 on: December 19, 2004, 11:31:00 AM »
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awww thx buddy!Its really really awesome.
really surprised 2 c d poem...its so true n senti!! sad5 Now i'll trywritin 1 4 u :wink:

\`\If you love someone set them free. If they return to you put several 8 inch blades in their head. If they return again... RUN !!/`/~
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #114 on: December 19, 2004, 01:09:05 PM »
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awww thx buddy!Its really really awesome.
really surprised 2 c d poem...its so true n senti!! sad5 Now i'll trywritin 1 4 you :wink:

\`\If you love someone set them free. If they return to you put several 8 inch blades in their head. If they return again... RUN !!/`/~


thank you masi






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Talat
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«Reply #115 on: December 19, 2004, 07:19:43 PM »
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"unconditional love"
by me(****)



she slowly whispers in my ears
that life was so harsh for her
her voice broke into tears
she was stupid enuf to trust him

she gave all her heart, her unconditional love
only to be hurt in return
she saw a promise in his eyes
a promise dying so badly

she felt so lonely
felt the pain inside
her love was cheating on her
still she locked her pain inside

tears came down day n nite
her life was living hell
she was losing her only love
kept waiting for sumone who'll never come

but now she has found someone
her dream guy, her love
i hope shes gonna trust him even more...
but god! why i am crying writing this?

wishing her a sweet love life

for a girl true at heart,
for mansi.

love,
heart(****)


plz plz plz comment


Wow Too good buddy!!!! Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #116 on: December 19, 2004, 07:26:30 PM »
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thnx galat  
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #117 on: December 19, 2004, 07:32:05 PM »
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ok im gonna start d poem directly on my thread...DOST NAHI TO ZINDAGI NAHI...dedicated 2 my frn ,Chimpu...i.e. Mr.heart :wink: plz comment or make it better....mayb i' won't b able 2 writ,much but will jus make an effort 2day glasses2
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«Reply #118 on: December 19, 2004, 07:51:48 PM »
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ok im gonna start d poem directly on my thread...DOST NAHI TO ZINDAGI NAHI...dedicated 2 my frn ,Chimpu...i.e. Mr.heart :wink: plz comment or make it better....mayb i' won't b able 2 writ,much but will jus make an effort 2day glasses2


sure everyone will comment but i wont..........

after all u r not listening wht im saying.......... i m asking u to study... n u wriiting all this stuff? very bad masi
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #119 on: December 19, 2004, 07:59:00 PM »
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i j us posted it sad5 ,ok im goin finally!cya glasses2

DOST NAHI TO ZINDAGI NAHI
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