:: poems by me : any comments r most welcum! ::

by myheart_ursonly on December 09, 2004, 03:04:07 PM
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«Reply #120 on: December 19, 2004, 08:01:31 PM »
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okay ab ja..... raat ko comment kar dunga
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«Reply #121 on: December 20, 2004, 01:57:07 AM »
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..............bye
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«Reply #122 on: December 20, 2004, 12:40:02 PM »
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heart jo poem u wrote for her................... was too good.............
kabil-e-tariff...................
 Usual Smile
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«Reply #123 on: December 20, 2004, 12:45:01 PM »
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heart jo poem you wrote for her................... was too good.............
kabil-e-tariff...................
 Usual Smile


"unconditional love"
by me(****)



she slowly whispers in my ears
that life was so harsh for her
her voice broke into tears
she was stupid enuf to trust him

she gave all her heart, her unconditional love
only to be hurt in return
she saw a promise in his eyes
a promise dying so badly

she felt so lonely
felt the pain inside
her love was cheating on her
still she locked her pain inside

tears came down day n nite
her life was living hell
she was losing her only love
kept waiting for sumone who'll never come

but now she has found someone
her dream guy, her love
i hope shes gonna trust him even more...
but god! why i am crying writing this?

wishing her a sweet love life

for a girl true at heart,
for mansi.

love,
heart(****)


plz plz plz comment






thnx a lot deeep  
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«Reply #124 on: December 20, 2004, 12:49:04 PM »
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where wer u frm past 2 dayyyyyyyyyz?Huh??
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smile_deep1
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«Reply #125 on: December 20, 2004, 01:05:08 PM »
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well...................

2 din se main kolkata main hi hun...................

trying to live,
trying to die.
trying to give,
trying to cry.
all my trying,
went  to vain........
left me with smile,
smile with  my pain.

 Usual Smile
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«Reply #126 on: December 20, 2004, 02:01:14 PM »
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well...................

2 din se main kolkata main hi hun...................

trying to live,
trying to die.
trying to give,
trying to cry.
all my trying,
went  to vain........
left me with smile,
smile with  my pain.

 Usual Smile



thnx for coming again...
tell me ur sorrows
tell me ur pain
i'd giv u my strength
our lov's no less
u alwaz made me smile
every lil while
tears r end of life so smile..... lol..... thnx 4 reading these stupid lines
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smile_deep1
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«Reply #127 on: December 20, 2004, 02:03:03 PM »
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ur each word is always welcome with smile........
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #128 on: December 20, 2004, 02:18:26 PM »
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achcha?Huh?Huh???


i hate you  :evil:


ab bhi?Huh??? welcome with smile?Huh??
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«Reply #129 on: December 20, 2004, 02:29:17 PM »
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ya ab bhi...................

coz atleast kuch to aap sochtey ho humarey bare main........... its better than u think nothing of someone.......................
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«Reply #130 on: December 20, 2004, 02:33:35 PM »
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ya ab bhi...................

coz atleast kuch to aap sochtey ho humarey bare main........... its better than u think nothing of someone.......................
lol....... k........
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«Reply #131 on: December 20, 2004, 02:45:02 PM »
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hey heart wanna play pool in yahoo pool?
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #132 on: December 20, 2004, 02:48:03 PM »
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i dunno how to playit....... waise i play only pool'em up..... expert!!!!!! but never played oon yahoo sad5
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«Reply #133 on: December 20, 2004, 02:49:15 PM »
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u temmmmme how 2 doit...... wait i go to yahoo games n try.......
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«Reply #134 on: December 20, 2004, 02:49:43 PM »
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sikhna hain?
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