:: poems by me : any comments r most welcum! ::

by myheart_ursonly on December 09, 2004, 03:04:07 PM
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«Reply #165 on: December 24, 2004, 03:43:39 AM »
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abhi dil se diya ................ to generally kaha se dete ho?


:mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

kahan se deta hun ... ye to tujhe bhi pata hai mujhe bhi ... lol
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«Reply #166 on: December 24, 2004, 01:05:58 PM »
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well mujhay nahin patta tabhi to poocha......... well as u said u know............. to plz mujhay bata dena.......... ok........... lol
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«Reply #167 on: December 24, 2004, 01:54:49 PM »
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maine to tumhein bata diya subah hi :wink:
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #168 on: December 24, 2004, 05:21:14 PM »
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hell all regular readers

ye poem likhne me mujhe 1 minute bhi nahi laga... but i still wanna post it... jo bhi hai... after all tis here

the poem is so simple

"you forgot"




"i remember"


i remember,

i loved you.
you loved me.
we loved each other.


i remeber,

i kissed and hugged you.
you kissed and hugged me.
we kissed and hugged each other.


i remember,

i was worried about you.
you were worried about me.
we were worried about each other.



i remember,

i used to cry for you.
you used to cry for me.
we used to cry for each other.

i remember,

i promised to marry you.
you promised to marry me.
we promised to marry each other.


i remember,
you forgot.



+/-/! plz comment  :arrow:
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #169 on: December 24, 2004, 05:35:11 PM »
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wow......but i'll always rem!! glasses2 U write so marvellos Chimpu...seriously in hindi also u jus break d ice by unique kinda thots.. :wink:

But dis 1 was li'l funny tho..lol but v gud Usual Smile
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #170 on: December 24, 2004, 05:43:19 PM »
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oh so sweet my heroine




 :wink:
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Talat
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«Reply #171 on: December 24, 2004, 08:46:21 PM »
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hell all regular readers

ye poem likhne me mujhe 1 minute bhi nahi laga... but i still wanna post it... jo bhi hai... after all tis here

the poem is so simple

"you forgot"




"i remember"


i remember,

i loved you.
you loved me.
we loved each other.


i remeber,

i kissed and hugged you.
you kissed and hugged me.
we kissed and hugged each other.


i remember,

i was worried about you.
you were worried about me.
we were worried about each other.



i remember,

i used to cry for you.
you used to cry for me.
we used to cry for each other.

i remember,

i promised to marry you.
you promised to marry me.
we promised to marry each other.


i remember,
you forgot.



+/-/! plz comment  :arrow:


Very Sweet!!!
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #172 on: December 24, 2004, 08:53:21 PM »
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thnx talat ji
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #173 on: December 25, 2004, 01:30:11 PM »
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need not comment if u dont find it gud enuf  :wink:


"aansu"

reh reh ke poochte hain aankh ke aansuon se
tum kyun bewafa nahi mere sanam ki tarah
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«Reply #174 on: December 25, 2004, 02:02:02 PM »
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need not comment if you dont find it gud enuf  :wink:


"aansu"

reh reh ke poochte hain aankh ke aansuon se
tum kyun bewafa nahi mere sanam ki tarah


v well written

reh reh ke girte hain lavz jo kahe the kabhi hontho se
baraste hain dil pe bhaari wo lamhe is tareh
ki pal pal wo pal lagte hai beete kal se

zinda hai yaad mujhmein uski kehta hu har pal se
jee raha hu jaante hue ki wo waade uske man se gye dhal se
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #175 on: December 25, 2004, 05:47:26 PM »
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thnx
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #176 on: December 25, 2004, 05:48:32 PM »
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well written mansi too


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«Reply #177 on: December 25, 2004, 08:09:50 PM »
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well written mansi too




 :oops: thanx Chimpu!!
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«Reply #178 on: December 25, 2004, 08:23:23 PM »
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tumhe pata hai maine apni pehli love poem likhi hai (i mean +ve)

i'l post it tomorrow

okay?
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«Reply #179 on: December 25, 2004, 08:30:51 PM »
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pm me,wanna talk right now!N how did  u make dat whistling smiley? Shocked
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