:: poems by me : any comments r most welcum! ::

by myheart_ursonly on December 09, 2004, 03:04:07 PM
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«Reply #180 on: December 25, 2004, 08:39:35 PM »
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simple hai

siti maar k dekh

aa jayegi screen pe
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«Reply #181 on: December 26, 2004, 06:23:51 AM »
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poem nai mil rai yaar delete hogi mujhse  sad5


teri chat archieve me hogi
email kar diyo ya offliner chipka diyo ek
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«Reply #182 on: December 26, 2004, 11:56:40 AM »
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poem nai mil rai yaar delete hogi mujhse  sad5


teri chat archieve me hogi
email kar diyo ya offliner chipka diyo ek


 Shocked  Shocked  Shocked  Shocked

ab main chipkaungi to meri poem hogi na wo!!Chal likh deti hu  tere liye :wink:
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«Reply #183 on: December 26, 2004, 01:28:35 PM »
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no thnx! i got it forwarded back frm my sis's email
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #184 on: December 26, 2004, 01:29:05 PM »
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"last beautiful day"


dreaming of you, seems so sweet
waiting for the day, we will meet
with every morning, a bright sunshine
i feel that your lips are kissing mine

whenever i am down
you always care for me
whenever i have a frown
you are always here for me

all i ever wanted
was someone like you
and it's true that you love me
and i love you too

so honey promise me this night
promise me we'd never fight
when i would die, i would say
this was my life's last beautiful day


plz comment +/-/!
it wont take much time...
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«Reply #185 on: December 27, 2004, 12:02:55 AM »
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hell all regular readers

ye poem likhne me mujhe 1 minute bhi nahi laga... but i still wanna post it... jo bhi hai... after all tis here

the poem is so simple

"you forgot"




"i remember"


i remember,

i loved you.
you loved me.
we loved each other.


i remeber,

i kissed and hugged you.
you kissed and hugged me.
we kissed and hugged each other.


i remember,

i was worried about you.
you were worried about me.
we were worried about each other.



i remember,

i used to cry for you.
you used to cry for me.
we used to cry for each other.

i remember,

i promised to marry you.
you promised to marry me.
we promised to marry each other.


i remember,
you forgot.



+/-/! plz comment  :arrow:



beautifulwork................. seriously............. sorry forlate comments........... gr8 work
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«Reply #186 on: December 27, 2004, 12:05:09 AM »
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"last beautiful day"


dreaming of you, seems so sweet
waiting for the day, we will meet
with every morning, a bright sunshine
i feel that your lips are kissing mine

whenever i am down
you always care for me
whenever i have a frown
you are always here for me

all i ever wanted
was someone like you
and it's true that you love me
and i love you too

so honey promise me this night
promise me we'd never fight
when i would die, i would say
this was my life's last beautiful day


plz comment +/-/!
it wont take much time...


wellkya bolun................ very cool............. touching............ well if there is someone u have written this for............ she is really lucky.......... swear a beautiful poem............ direct  heart ke dil se............ hmmmmmmmmmmmmm...................
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #187 on: December 27, 2004, 01:15:45 AM »
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thnx deep
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nikki
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«Reply #188 on: December 27, 2004, 01:23:44 AM »
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very nice Heart ...too good.
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #189 on: December 27, 2004, 02:30:22 AM »
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ohhhhhh thank you so much!!!!!!

ur commenting 4 d first time for my poem(s)!!!


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«Reply #190 on: December 27, 2004, 11:25:38 PM »
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Hello all readers. My new work is here. Dedicated to the one above, God.
Hope you all will find it worth reading.

"Never Miss a Shot"
:: amit / verma_amit_4u@yahoo.com ::

I go to a lonely place
so unknown,
silence staring at me.
Tears start rolling down my cheek,
I shout very loud
hoping to find a way out.
Nobody can hear me.
Lips drying,
words crying,
hands praying,
I look above-
are you really there?
An answer resounds,
so clear.
An arrow pierces deep
inside my heart,
saying your game is over.
I love you, my boy,
but how weak you are!
I sit down,
screaming and yelling,
gasping for breath.
I can feel it,
my end is near,
staring from above,
where I can see you winking
with a smile,
saying,
"I never miss a shot".


plz comment  Usual Smile |  sad5  |  :!:
it wont take much time...
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #191 on: December 28, 2004, 05:49:03 AM »
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"last beautiful day"


dreaming of you, seems so sweet
waiting for the day, we will meet
with every morning, a bright sunshine
i feel that your lips are kissing mine

whenever i am down
you always care for me
whenever i have a frown
you are always here for me

all i ever wanted
was someone like you
and it's true that you love me
and i love you too

so honey promise me this night
promise me we'd never fight
when i would die, i would say
this was my life's last beautiful day


plz comment +/-/!
it wont take much time...


coollllll! I knew it'd get nice response
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«Reply #192 on: December 28, 2004, 05:52:06 AM »
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Hello all readers. My new work is here. Dedicated to the one above, God.
Hope you all will find it worth reading.

"Never Miss a Shot"
:: amit / verma_amit_4u@yahoo.com ::

I go to a lonely place
so unknown,
silence staring at me.
Tears start rolling down my cheek,
I shout very loud
hoping to find a way out.
Nobody can hear me.
Lips drying,
words crying,
hands praying,
I look above-
are you really there?
An answer resounds,
so clear.
An arrow pierces deep
inside my heart,
saying your game is over.
I love you, my boy,
but how weak you are!
I sit down,
screaming and yelling,
gasping for breath.
I can feel it,
my end is near,
staring from above,
where I can see you winking
with a smile,
saying,
"I never miss a shot".

aaawwwwwwS.O.M.E!!
dis1 is my fav u knw!U've started makin master-pieces Chimpu! lol simplly sexy!


plz comment  Usual Smile |  sad5  |  :!:
it wont take much time...
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«Reply #193 on: December 28, 2004, 01:05:48 PM »
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Hello all readers. My new work is here. Dedicated to the one above, God.
Hope you all will find it worth reading.

"Never Miss a Shot"
:: amit / verma_amit_4u@yahoo.com ::

I go to a lonely place
so unknown,
silence staring at me.
Tears start rolling down my cheek,
I shout very loud
hoping to find a way out.
Nobody can hear me.
Lips drying,
words crying,
hands praying,
I look above-
are you really there?
An answer resounds,
so clear.
An arrow pierces deep
inside my heart,
saying your game is over.
I love you, my boy,
but how weak you are!
I sit down,
screaming and yelling,
gasping for breath.
I can feel it,
my end is near,
staring from above,
where I can see you winking
with a smile,
saying,
"I never miss a shot".



plz comment  Usual Smile |  sad5  |  :!:
it wont take much time...


too good heart................. wellwritten.............. awesome............. i need to learn lot from u
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #194 on: December 28, 2004, 01:31:01 PM »
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coollllll! I knew it'd get nice response



thnx
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