:: poems by me : any comments r most welcum! ::

by myheart_ursonly on December 09, 2004, 03:04:07 PM
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«Reply #150 on: December 21, 2004, 07:02:37 PM »
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dedicated to my only luv, my life - my sister

"silent tear"

this little "heart" made a wish once
to have a sister like you

but this "heart" never knew
as people like you are very few

you are now mine forever
holding me heartily very near

i just want you to see
that without you, i wont be

dont leave me alone stay near
no one else can hear my silent tear


with luv


any comments r most vvelcome... gud or bad... anything...


Very touching!!!! very nice Heart!!!!
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«Reply #151 on: December 21, 2004, 07:04:00 PM »
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heres another one by me wrote last night



you dont care
by ****(me)


i dont have anything to write
so i am writing with knife

noone seems to hear me
i have cried all my life

my life is lost in pain
i have nothing to gain

now there is a cut in my wrist
and i can feel the pain

with the deep red flow
all my pain will go

end of my sorrowful life
its the only way i can let go

im ending my life now
im able to get rid of it sumhow

perfectred stream is appearing
all my pains are disappearing

i waited for you all life long
but you never seem to hear my song

now its time to say gudbye
coz you dont care if i die





plz comment gud/bad/brickbates/suggestions anything..     .....thnx


Very good!!!!
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #152 on: December 21, 2004, 07:43:30 PM »
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thnx talat jabeen
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #153 on: December 23, 2004, 02:26:40 PM »
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"illusion"


nowhere to start, nowhere to end
hurt deep inside needs to be mend.

humans ultimately, burned into ash
sparing their time earning big cash.

cry for one thing, try for another
earth is a place for fools to gather.

eyes shut forever, nothing to see
this is real life and this would be.


plz comment  +/-/!
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #154 on: December 23, 2004, 06:56:18 PM »
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no comments  :evil:

 :?:  sad5
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«Reply #155 on: December 23, 2004, 07:28:49 PM »
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"illusion"


nowhere to start, nowhere to end
hurt deep inside needs to be mend.

humans ultimately, burned into ash
sparing their time earning big cash.

cry for one thing, try for another
earth is a place for fools to gather.

eyes shut forever, nothing to see
this is real life and this would be.


plz comment  +/-/!


B+ glasses2 EXELLENTTTTTTTT..need more? :wink: lol
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #156 on: December 23, 2004, 07:40:05 PM »
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no thnx Puzzled !
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KaMaL
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«Reply #157 on: December 23, 2004, 07:47:59 PM »
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"illusion"


nowhere to start, nowhere to end
hurt deep inside needs to be mend.

humans ultimately, burned into ash
sparing their time earning big cash.

cry for one thing, try for another
earth is a place for fools to gather.

eyes shut forever, nothing to see
this is real life and this would be.


plz comment  +/-/!



(+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++..infinity)
Toooooo Good might...The truth...
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #158 on: December 23, 2004, 07:53:08 PM »
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thnx kamal


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Talat
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«Reply #159 on: December 23, 2004, 09:23:28 PM »
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"illusion"


nowhere to start, nowhere to end
hurt deep inside needs to be mend.

humans ultimately, burned into ash
sparing their time earning big cash.

cry for one thing, try for another
earth is a place for fools to gather.

eyes shut forever, nothing to see
this is real life and this would be.


plz comment  +/-/!


Very Good!! Heart..keep it up!!!!
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«Reply #160 on: December 23, 2004, 09:26:38 PM »
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"illusion"


nowhere to start, nowhere to end
hurt deep inside needs to be mend.

humans ultimately, burned into ash
sparing their time earning big cash.

cry for one thing, try for another
earth is a place for fools to gather.

eyes shut forever, nothing to see
this is real life and this would be.


plz comment  +/-/!


Very Good!! Heart..keep it up!!!!


thnx talat!! n yes, i'll keep writing

aaj deep nahi aayee  :evil:
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«Reply #161 on: December 24, 2004, 01:04:29 AM »
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well sach bolun to.............. its awesome........ kasam se............ i wish i cud write poemslike u .............  i swear.......... i really wish so.........
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«Reply #162 on: December 24, 2004, 01:11:06 AM »
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itni tareef nahi karte ki hajam hi na ho  :shhh:

agar sach bol rahi hai to thank u dil se...
chal tune swear kiya hai to maan gaya

dil se thank you!
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«Reply #163 on: December 24, 2004, 01:13:22 AM »
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abhi dil se diya ................ to generally kaha se dete ho?
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«Reply #164 on: December 24, 2004, 03:41:35 AM »
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abhi dil se diya ................ to generally kaha se dete ho?


:mrgreen: bevkuf ladki. kya kahan se deta hun?  :oops:
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