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«Reply #90 on: December 17, 2004, 02:59:39 AM » |
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very touchy.................. direct dil se
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«Reply #91 on: December 17, 2004, 03:08:40 AM » |
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very touchy.................. direct dil se thnx :kiss: |
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«Reply #92 on: December 17, 2004, 03:19:06 AM » |
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lovely
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«Reply #93 on: December 17, 2004, 03:20:05 AM » |
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heres another one by me wrote last night
you dont care
by ****(me)
i dont have anything to write
so i am writing with knife
noone seems to hear me
i have cried all my life
my life is lost in pain
i have nothing to gain
now there is a cut in my wrist
and i can feel the pain
with the deep red flow
all my pain will go
end of my sorrowful life
its the only way i can let go
im ending my life now
im able to get rid of it sumhow
perfectred stream is appearing
all my pains are disappearing
i waited for you all life long
but you never seem to hear my song
now its time to say gudbye
coz you dont care if i die
well yaar aap tu shair ho gaye aab apni shairi ko combine ker k book launch kerne ki socho...................reallly bohat khoobsurat hai..................atna dard real mein hai tumhari life mein ya dil k jazbaat hai yeh..........Gr8 and Excellent |
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #94 on: December 17, 2004, 03:20:05 AM » |
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lovely thnx :kiss: waise mujhe pata hi tha i m lovely |
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #95 on: December 17, 2004, 03:22:21 AM » |
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heres another one by me wrote last night
you dont care
by ****(me)
i dont have anything to write
so i am writing with knife
noone seems to hear me
i have cried all my life
my life is lost in pain
i have nothing to gain
now there is a cut in my wrist
and i can feel the pain
with the deep red flow
all my pain will go
end of my sorrowful life
its the only way i can let go
im ending my life now
im able to get rid of it sumhow
perfectred stream is appearing
all my pains are disappearing
i waited for you all life long
but you never seem to hear my song
now its time to say gudbye
coz you dont care if i die
well yaar aap tu shair ho gaye aab apni shairi ko combine ker k book launch kerne ki socho...................reallly bohat khoobsurat hai..................atna dard real mein hai tumhari life mein ya dil k jazbaat hai yeh..........Gr8 and Excellent thnx love ... a lot |
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smile_deep1
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«Reply #96 on: December 17, 2004, 03:29:15 AM » |
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u r heartly welcom heart
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #97 on: December 17, 2004, 03:36:27 AM » |
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you r heartly welcom heart u too u too :kiss: |
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«Reply #98 on: December 17, 2004, 06:34:42 AM » |
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dedicated to my only luv, my life - my sister
this little "heart" made a wish once
to have a sister like you
but this "heart" never knew
as people like you are very few
you are now mine forever
holding me heartily very near
i just want you to see
that without you, i wont be
dont leave me alone stay near
no one else can hear my silent tear
with luv
any comments r most vvelcome... gud or bad... anything... Thats Great Heart..Awsome...Really touching...aye... |
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«Reply #99 on: December 17, 2004, 09:59:28 AM » |
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dedicated to my only luv, my life - my sister
this little "heart" made a wish once
to have a sister like you
but this "heart" never knew
as people like you are very few
you are now mine forever
holding me heartily very near
i just want you to see
that without you, i wont be
dont leave me alone stay near
no one else can hear my silent tear
with luv
any comments r most vvelcome... gud or bad... anything... Thats Great Heart..Awsome...Really touching...aye... thnx KaMaL for ur comments... |
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«Reply #100 on: December 17, 2004, 10:09:29 AM » |
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thanks heart............ and both of you wrote really good yaar........... i dont have much suggestions...................
just wanna say.............
life is really a beautiful thing..............just live each moment to fullest.......... dont count the sad one........... just cherish the cool ones..... sad one can be a teacher who helps in taking better dicision but not a partener to lead the life with.................. always remember this........ and always keep smiling ............ yeh to kabhi mat bhoolna......... coz tumhari pehli wali pic main you was smiling and you looked cute there........ samjhay janab...................
deep thnx again deep  |
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«Reply #101 on: December 17, 2004, 11:29:46 AM » |
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here is my next poem hope you will like it
dedicated to my x
i hate you
you always said "i love you"
you always told me that you care
and the time when i needed you
you were never here
i hate you
dont u feel pain inside
how can you forget me
remember when i said you will be my bride
the days when you dreamt of me
i hate you
maybe all you promised me
was just a big lie
it was you who never missed me
you left me alone to die
i hate you
...bcoz ...you always said "i love you"
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«Reply #102 on: December 17, 2004, 11:59:05 AM » |
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no doubt she was unlucky gal........................... its honour to be ur friend heart............. truely
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«Reply #103 on: December 17, 2004, 12:03:32 PM » |
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thnx deep!!! my pleasure to hav u as a friend. u r very nice person
btw, thnx for comments
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«Reply #104 on: December 17, 2004, 12:05:54 PM » |
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u r always welcome heart  |
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