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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #30 on: December 11, 2004, 06:40:58 PM »

Quote from: "Mansi_d_archi"

wow! yeh to mast likha tha Chimpu ,kaha se maara? Puzzled !

:wink:

dont leave me alone stay near
no one else can hear my silent tear

2nd line was 2 emotional tongue3

won't it b li'l better if you put it like......dun leave me alone,stay near
as widout you no more pain i can bear
as you r always thr 2 listen 2 my silent tear
no1 was,no1 is n no1 cud b like you sis dear :twisted:

thnx mansi :oops: :oops: :oops:

:dance:

maine apne dimag se likha hai kahin se maara nahi hai, tabhi to mishteks hain sad5


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«Reply #31 on: December 11, 2004, 06:44:17 PM »

but anyvvays, thnx for comments

i always luv ur suggestions :oops:

:dance:


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«Reply #32 on: December 11, 2004, 07:43:55 PM »

ye baat hai! thanx :wink:

wid u i want every moment 2 freeze
coz widout u it feels like im under fallin trees
......in some way inspired by my recent lines in "do pal ka tha..." freeze,squeeze,please...lol

suggest me more rhymin word ,needed 2 continue my poem thr :evil:


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«Reply #33 on: December 11, 2004, 09:43:45 PM »

freeze :o squeeze :oops: please please please

thik hai itni baar please kaha to kuch vvords bata deta hun

breeze, cheese, ease, bees, tease, trees, sneeze, knees, disease

kaafi hain???

:beerchug:


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«Reply #34 on: December 11, 2004, 09:44:59 PM »

ab mujhe thanku bolna mat bhulna

:dance:


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #35 on: December 12, 2004, 12:37:33 AM »

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

ab mujhe thanku bolna mat bhulna

:dance:

ok Thanxxxxxxx!

Lekin maine zada please-please nai bola tha Puzzled !


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«Reply #36 on: December 12, 2004, 01:57:47 AM »

Quote from: "Mansi_d_archi"

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

ab mujhe thanku bolna mat bhulna

:dance:

ok Thanxxxxxxx!

Lekin maine zada please-please nai bola tha Puzzled !

ohhhhhhhkay!!!! :twisted: :evil: :twisted:


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #37 on: December 12, 2004, 02:34:16 AM »

ok Chimpu! Dun make faces n continue writin ur **** :twisted:

lemme continue ur poem...dun mind ...lol.I LUV 2 INTERFERE IN UR STUFF :evil:
U knw i sat down n wrote it specially 4 u dat 2 wid pencil,rubber n a diary in my hand Puzzled !

Sweet nerves....sweet curves
Cut 'em open & c d bloody nerves
Feel d pain & nthn else but life u'll gain!

Lukin down...selfish ,proudy soul
always aiming at acheiving pitty goals
Fake life,make aims....let d aims take a stroll
Fake ppl....4 'em d world's like a shoppin mall
Yearning 2 buy ppl & sell 'em as a pretty doll

Sweet nerves.....sweet curves
Nothin 2 society there life serves!~


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«Reply #38 on: December 12, 2004, 02:44:29 AM »

thnx for ur effort mansi... i wrote an another poem... i'll post it tomorrow. my back is aching badly dear. i must sleep now. g'nite bye

thnx again

:kiss:


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #39 on: December 12, 2004, 02:47:53 AM »

bye..gud nite glasses2

even im goin now....really 2 late :cry:


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«Reply #40 on: December 12, 2004, 02:57:16 AM »

okAy bye. c ya Puzzled !


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #41 on: December 12, 2004, 03:00:35 AM »

byeeee :?


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«Reply #42 on: December 12, 2004, 02:06:48 PM »

another poem dedicated to my

:kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:

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«Reply #43 on: December 12, 2004, 02:10:42 PM »

dreams are true
sweet dreams are few

you miss me
and i miss you

there's much to argue
and fight about

but nothing much
to write about

each other doesnt matter
how much we hurt

for our luv is so strong
we will never part

with luv

please leave ur comments... gud/bad/suggestions any...

:dance:


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #44 on: December 12, 2004, 02:35:24 PM »

sweet!


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