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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #75 on: December 14, 2004, 01:07:38 PM »

thnx a lot deep ji


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smile_deep1

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«Reply #76 on: December 14, 2004, 01:08:40 PM »

welcome heart


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«Reply #77 on: December 14, 2004, 01:54:00 PM »

Hello
You worte very nicely. Your a good writer .


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«Reply #78 on: December 14, 2004, 02:10:19 PM »

gr8 Heart! But........neways,ur poem is nice :wink:


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #79 on: December 14, 2004, 02:11:33 PM »

thnx noughtynihal!!!

thnx for appreciation glasses2


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«Reply #80 on: December 14, 2004, 02:12:51 PM »

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gr8 Heart! But........neways,ur poem is nice :wink:

thnx mansi!! u knw wht i always luv to c ur comment... n deep too...


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«Reply #81 on: December 14, 2004, 02:29:37 PM »

Oh leally? glasses2

thanx Chimpu! I also luv 2 c ur comments,rather ur replies :wink: Now read my suggestions...d reason y iam not really agreed by ur thots

dun cut d flesh,rather cut d bloody mess
cut d messy pain, accumulatin inside ur brain

dun fight wid those unshed tears
they r d result of hidden fears

dun expect from some1 so much
take life's ups n downs as such

n if u still wish 2 cut d flesh
im always here wid a blow ready 2 fetch.....lol...lol :wink:


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #82 on: December 14, 2004, 02:37:02 PM »

gr8 dear.

"dun expect from some1 so much "

it cant b controlled. it happens its not done. they r d expectations tht led to tears


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«Reply #83 on: December 14, 2004, 02:44:50 PM »

yeh u r true Chimpu! But u can always start it afresh,once u r acknowledged wid d bloody ,stinkin facts about love!U must...U MUST..U MUST

remind urself all along d way
dat dis isn't all true wat they say

remind ur soul not 2 have dat dream
coz d layer u r seeing may not be cream

dun ever pour out ur heart,dun always let it scream
coz d one u r missin was not flowin in d same stream


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #84 on: December 15, 2004, 03:32:11 AM »

mansi... i'l write sumthing tomorrow. cant now. bye.

Puzzled !


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«Reply #85 on: December 15, 2004, 12:26:37 PM »

thanks heart............ and both of u wrote really good yaar........... i dont have much suggestions...................

just wanna say.............
life is really a beautiful thing..............just live each moment to fullest.......... dont count the sad one........... just cherish the cool ones..... sad one can be a teacher who helps in taking better dicision but not a partener to lead the life with.................. always remember this........ and always keep smiling ............ yeh to kabhi mat bhoolna......... coz tumhari pehli wali pic main u was smiling and u looked cute there........ samjhay janab...................

deep


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«Reply #86 on: December 15, 2004, 04:05:40 PM »

Quote from: "smile_deep1"

thanks heart............ and both of you wrote really good yaar........... i dont have much suggestions...................

just wanna say.............
life is really a beautiful thing..............just live each moment to fullest.......... dont count the sad one........... just cherish the cool ones..... sad one can be a teacher who helps in taking better dicision but not a partener to lead the life with.................. always remember this........ and always keep smiling ............ yeh to kabhi mat bhoolna......... coz tumhari pehli wali pic main you was smiling and you looked cute there........ samjhay janab...................

deep

:oops: wht if sumone's life is so ****ed up tht he cant even smile?? anyways, i dont wanna argue on this. u r rite but i cant help myself upon all this... but anyways, im trying to change myself to a better happier one glasses2

bye thnx for suggestions. i m not living life as i wanted, life is making me spend my time like this....


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«Reply #87 on: December 15, 2004, 05:32:48 PM »

TYPICAL GONE CASE!!

u shud better knw hw 2 handle life,otherwise ur not worth it!


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«Reply #88 on: December 15, 2004, 08:55:50 PM »

Quote from: "Mansi_d_archi"

TYPICAL GONE CASE!!

you shud better knw hw 2 handle life,otherwise ur not worth it!

yeah im trying dear. thnx.


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«Reply #89 on: December 17, 2004, 02:55:25 AM »

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