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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #135 on: December 20, 2004, 02:54:22 PM »

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smile_deep1

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«Reply #136 on: December 20, 2004, 03:02:01 PM »

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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #137 on: December 20, 2004, 03:04:28 PM »

k......


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #138 on: December 20, 2004, 06:08:01 PM »

dedicated to my mumma......

"can i call you god?"

mumma when i am crying with my fears
you come to me and dry my tears
you are a person of amazing grace
for you, there is sure a special place

to hurt a person like you, so nice
i'll surely think twice.... or thrice...
when i am sad and life's so bore
i see ur smile and sadness is no more

sometimes i hurt you, i know
but the hurt inside, you'll never show
you never want your boy cry this bad
bcoz i am the dream you once had

i dont mind you never gave me a sis
i've found aksh(akshita) as a heaven's bliss
when someone says, there is no relation of blood
right that time, my eyes begin to flood

for me, always, with special effort
you are always here to do my comfort...
through my times even or odd
tell me mumma, can i call u god???

plz comment....... ur comments r important to keep myself going......


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #139 on: December 20, 2004, 06:27:57 PM »

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

dedicated to my mumma......

to hurt a person like you, so nice
i'll surely think twice.... or thrice...
when i am sad and life's so bore
i see ur smile and sadness is no more

amazing!!

wud have been better if u had not written dat 'twice-thrice' thingy..lol

if some1 hurts some1 like u,so true at heart's core
i'd have him dragged 2 ur feat,my blood wud become so sour
when i am sad and life's so bore
i see ur smile and sadness is no more


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smile_deep1

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«Reply #140 on: December 20, 2004, 06:34:53 PM »

kasam se................. its wonderful heart


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #141 on: December 20, 2004, 07:11:28 PM »

Quote from: "Mansi_d_archi"

dedicated to my mumma......

to hurt a person like you, so nice
i'll surely think twice.... or thrice...
when i am sad and life's so bore
i see ur smile and sadness is no more

amazing!!

wud have been better if you had not written dat 'twice-thrice' thingy..lol

if some1 hurts some1 like you,so true at heart's core
i'd have him dragged 2 ur feat,my blood wud become so sour
when i am sad and life's so bore
i see ur smile and sadness is no more

nice suggestions i liked them masi........ n thnx for ur comment

i wasnt thinking much when iwas writing it////// just wrote wht came to my bloody head......... lol

thnx


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #142 on: December 20, 2004, 07:14:48 PM »

Quote from: "smile_deep1"

kasam se................. its wonderful heart

sachchi mein??? kasam se!!!!!!!!!! :kiss:

thnx deep....... it feels so good when sumone appreciates my native creations..... feels amazing!!!!!!!

thnx for ur comments......

i dont want anyone and everyone to comment....... though i ask to.....
kamal, talat, meena, pooja n more..... comment too
i luv to read them too........

but u2 r regular!!!! n my sis of course..... who commentss thru email n offliners........

thnx a lot


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #143 on: December 20, 2004, 07:18:32 PM »

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

Quote from: "Mansi_d_archi"

dedicated to my mumma......

to hurt a person like you, so nice
i'll surely think twice.... or thrice...
when i am sad and life's so bore
i see ur smile and sadness is no more

amazing!!

wud have been better if you had not written dat 'twice-thrice' thingy..lol

if some1 hurts some1 like you,so true at heart's core
i'd have him dragged 2 ur feat,my blood wud become so sour
when i am sad and life's so bore
i see ur smile and sadness is no more

nice suggestions i liked them masi........ n thnx for ur comment

i wasnt thinking much when iwas writing it////// just wrote wht came to my bloody head......... lol

thnx

well i knw...rather ev'1 knws....lol :sleep:


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #144 on: December 20, 2004, 07:22:38 PM »

gadhi! mere thread me bak bak karke tujhe tinde milte hain.........lol Puzzled !


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Talat

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«Reply #145 on: December 20, 2004, 09:49:27 PM »

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

dedicated to my mumma......

"can i call you god?"

mumma when i am crying with my fears
you come to me and dry my tears
you are a person of amazing grace
for you, there is sure a special place

to hurt a person like you, so nice
i'll surely think twice.... or thrice...
when i am sad and life's so bore
i see ur smile and sadness is no more

sometimes i hurt you, i know
but the hurt inside, you'll never show
you never want your boy cry this bad
bcoz i am the dream you once had

i dont mind you never gave me a sis
i've found aksh(akshita) as a heaven's bliss
when someone says, there is no relation of blood
right that time, my eyes begin to flood

for me, always, with special effort
you are always here to do my comfort...
through my times even or odd
tell me mumma, can i call you god???

plz comment....... ur comments r important to keep myself going......

Its very touching heart!!!! really too good...... Really nice!!!!!!!


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #146 on: December 20, 2004, 09:55:36 PM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

dedicated to my mumma......

"can i call you god?"

mumma when i am crying with my fears
you come to me and dry my tears
you are a person of amazing grace
for you, there is sure a special place

to hurt a person like you, so nice
i'll surely think twice.... or thrice...
when i am sad and life's so bore
i see ur smile and sadness is no more

sometimes i hurt you, i know
but the hurt inside, you'll never show
you never want your boy cry this bad
bcoz i am the dream you once had

i dont mind you never gave me a sis
i've found aksh(akshita) as a heaven's bliss
when someone says, there is no relation of blood
right that time, my eyes begin to flood

for me, always, with special effort
you are always here to do my comfort...
through my times even or odd
tell me mumma, can i call you god???

plz comment....... ur comments r important to keep myself going......

Its very touching heart!!!! really too good...... Really nice!!!!!!!

thnx talat....... thnx a lot for giving time to comment........


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Tosha

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«Reply #147 on: December 20, 2004, 10:18:47 PM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

dedicated to my mumma......

"can i call you god?"

mumma when i am crying with my fears
you come to me and dry my tears
you are a person of amazing grace
for you, there is sure a special place

to hurt a person like you, so nice
i'll surely think twice.... or thrice...
when i am sad and life's so bore
i see ur smile and sadness is no more

sometimes i hurt you, i know
but the hurt inside, you'll never show
you never want your boy cry this bad
bcoz i am the dream you once had

i dont mind you never gave me a sis
i've found aksh(akshita) as a heaven's bliss
when someone says, there is no relation of blood
right that time, my eyes begin to flood

for me, always, with special effort
you are always here to do my comfort...
through my times even or odd
tell me mumma, can i call you god???

plz comment....... ur comments r important to keep myself going......

Its very touching heart!!!! really too good...... Really nice!!!!!!!

ji aap bhi accha kahete hai
aap ne dil chuya hai


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #148 on: December 20, 2004, 10:23:16 PM »

Quote from: "Tosha"

Quote from: "Talat"

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

dedicated to my mumma......

"can i call you god?"

mumma when i am crying with my fears
you come to me and dry my tears
you are a person of amazing grace
for you, there is sure a special place

to hurt a person like you, so nice
i'll surely think twice.... or thrice...
when i am sad and life's so bore
i see ur smile and sadness is no more

sometimes i hurt you, i know
but the hurt inside, you'll never show
you never want your boy cry this bad
bcoz i am the dream you once had

i dont mind you never gave me a sis
i've found aksh(akshita) as a heaven's bliss
when someone says, there is no relation of blood
right that time, my eyes begin to flood

for me, always, with special effort
you are always here to do my comfort...
through my times even or odd
tell me mumma, can i call you god???

plz comment....... ur comments r important to keep myself going......

Its very touching heart!!!! really too good...... Really nice!!!!!!!

ji aap bhi accha kahete hai
aap ne dil chuya hai

thnx tosha.... ur comments r always welcum


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #149 on: December 21, 2004, 12:39:39 PM »

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