:: poems by me : any comments r most welcum! ::

by myheart_ursonly on December 09, 2004, 03:04:07 PM

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Delicate_Doll

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«Reply #15 on: December 10, 2004, 06:37:39 PM »

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thnx salma, mansi n meena ji

oyeeeee to ye kya hai,
jo aap ke quote mein hai ..halal.oops bilal...lolzzzz

chasma lago chasmish :lol:


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #16 on: December 10, 2004, 06:39:53 PM »

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thanx akela & Chimpu! :queen:

:tounge: :yuck: :tounge:


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Re: FAITH - POEM BY ME - any comments r most welcome!!!!

«Reply #17 on: December 10, 2004, 11:01:40 PM »

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

Nothing real, Nothing sweet...
Just stand tall on ur feet...
Make promises then break...
True Life... Live it fake...

comments from everyone, gud or bad, r welcome!!!

Very deep and very True!!!!!
In simple words
in your simple four lines!!!!
this is a real life, YES, Very true!!!


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #18 on: December 10, 2004, 11:30:08 PM »

im really glad to c ur comment pooj...

its my first poem

thnx a lot for appreciation


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #19 on: December 11, 2004, 01:01:37 AM »

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im really glad to c ur comment pooj...

its my first poem

thnx a lot for appreciation

Zada nai uchhalne ka Chimpu! glasses2

1st poem but posted 2nd time :twisted:

hehe haahaa hoho :evil:


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #20 on: December 11, 2004, 01:12:09 AM »

2nd time??? Shocked

ye tum kya keh rahi ho maansi :?

abhui tumhara hua hai ke abhi hona hai?

:mrgreen:


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #21 on: December 11, 2004, 01:32:01 AM »

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2nd time??? Shocked

ye tum kya keh rahi ho maansi :?

abhui tumhara hua hai ke abhi hona hai?

:mrgreen:

kya hona hai ?
neways glasses2

nthn real.....nthn sweet
poisoned tongues though taste sweet
make life hell...so better u delete
:wink: lol.......dun laugh ok! :evil:


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #22 on: December 11, 2004, 01:52:07 AM »

Quote from: "Mansi_d_archi"

Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"

2nd time??? Shocked

ye tum kya keh rahi ho maansi :?

abhui tumhara hua hai ke abhi hona hai?

:mrgreen:

kya hona hai ?
neways glasses2

nthn real.....nthn sweet
poisoned tongues though taste sweet
make life hell...so better you delete
:wink: lol.......dun laugh ok! :evil:

kya hona hai?? pagal dimag ka ilaz :twisted: :evil: :twisted:


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #23 on: December 11, 2004, 02:21:10 AM »

dimaak to sahi hai aapka???theek nai lagte kuch andaaz
kya raat ko khaate ho chup-chup kar kuch khaas
jo bata rahe ho anjaane mein apen hi kuch raaj
vaise zaroorat nai,koi sunne ko nai hai aaj
chal chal kahi or ja,karle moorakh kuch dhang k kaaj :twisted:


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #24 on: December 11, 2004, 02:32:09 AM »

lol


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smile_deep1

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«Reply #25 on: December 11, 2004, 02:53:02 AM »

lol................. good work


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #26 on: December 11, 2004, 05:37:09 PM »

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lol................. good work

lol indeed.. anyways, thnx deep :oops:


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #27 on: December 11, 2004, 05:38:07 PM »

here is another poem by me. hope u all find this one nice too :oops:


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myheart_ursonly

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«Reply #28 on: December 11, 2004, 05:44:43 PM »

dedicated to my only luv, my life - my sister

"silent tear"

this little "heart" made a wish once
to have a sister like you

but this "heart" never knew
as people like you are very few

you are now mine forever
holding me heartily very near

i just want you to see
that without you, i wont be

dont leave me alone stay near
no one else can hear my silent tear

with luv

any comments r most vvelcome... gud or bad... anything...


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Mansi_d_archi

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«Reply #29 on: December 11, 2004, 06:27:09 PM »

wow! yeh to mast likha tha Chimpu ,kaha se maara? Puzzled !

:wink:

dont leave me alone stay near
no one else can hear my silent tear

2nd line was 2 emotional tongue3

won't it b li'l better if u put it like......dun leave me alone,stay near
as widout u no more pain i can bear
as u r always thr 2 listen 2 my silent tear
no1 was,no1 is n no1 cud b like u sis dear :twisted: