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« Reply #15 on: December 10, 2004, 08:07:39 AM »
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
thnx salma, mansi n meena ji



oyeeeee to ye kya hai,
jo  aap ke quote mein hai  ..halal.oops bilal...lolzzzz

chasma lago chasmish :lol:
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b]Khuda Ke pass ek wada kar aaye,
Jaldi marne ka faisla kar aaye,
Meri Pheli aur Akhir Mohabbat aap hi ho 'Jaan'
Janat Mein saath rehna ka wada kar aaye.[/b]



Agr Dunya k Azmat ko Gawara kardya hota
Najane ktne sajdo k Qazara karlya hota.
tumari bewafai m yuhi tadapkar marte Nhi,
Agar milne se phle IstiQara karlya hota.

Is duniya mein sab kuchh bikta hai,
phir judai hi rishwat kyun nahi leti,
Marta nahi hai koi kisi se juda hokar,
Bus yaadein hi hai jo jeene nahi deti.

Mohabbat ke imtehan mein humne apni jaan ki bazi lagayi,
wafa ke badle mein humne  bewafayi inaam mein hai paayi.

Kya Sunayein Kisi Ko Raaz-e-Dil,
Dard Bhi Badhta Hai Sunane Se.

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« Reply #16 on: December 10, 2004, 08:09:53 AM »
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thanx akela & Chimpu! :queen:



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« Reply #17 on: December 10, 2004, 12:31:40 PM »
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Nothing real, Nothing sweet...
Just stand tall on ur feet...
Make promises then break...
True Life... Live it fake...


comments from everyone, gud or bad, r welcome!!!


Very deep and very True!!!!!
In simple words
in your simple four lines!!!!
this is a real life, YES, Very true!!!
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« Reply #18 on: December 10, 2004, 01:00:08 PM »
im really glad to c ur comment pooj...

its my first poem

thnx a lot for appreciation
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« Reply #19 on: December 10, 2004, 02:31:37 PM »
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im really glad to c ur comment pooj...

its my first poem

thnx a lot for appreciation


Zada nai uchhalne ka Chimpu! glasses2

1st poem but posted 2nd time :twisted:

hehe haahaa hoho :evil:
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« Reply #20 on: December 10, 2004, 02:42:09 PM »
2nd time???  Shocked


ye tum kya keh rahi ho maansi    :?


abhui tumhara hua hai ke abhi hona hai?


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« Reply #21 on: December 10, 2004, 03:02:01 PM »
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2nd time???  Shocked


ye tum kya keh rahi ho maansi    :?


abhui tumhara hua hai ke abhi hona hai?


 :mrgreen:


kya hona hai ?
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nthn real.....nthn sweet
poisoned tongues though taste sweet
make life hell...so better u delete
 :wink: lol.......dun laugh ok! :evil:
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« Reply #22 on: December 10, 2004, 03:22:07 PM »
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Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
2nd time???  Shocked


ye tum kya keh rahi ho maansi    :?


abhui tumhara hua hai ke abhi hona hai?


 :mrgreen:


kya hona hai ?
neways glasses2

nthn real.....nthn sweet
poisoned tongues though taste sweet
make life hell...so better you delete
 :wink: lol.......dun laugh ok! :evil:



kya hona hai?? pagal dimag ka ilaz    :twisted:  :evil:  :twisted:
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« Reply #23 on: December 10, 2004, 03:51:10 PM »
dimaak to sahi hai aapka???theek nai lagte kuch andaaz
kya raat ko khaate ho chup-chup kar kuch khaas
jo bata rahe ho anjaane mein apen hi kuch raaj
vaise zaroorat nai,koi sunne ko nai hai aaj
chal chal kahi or ja,karle moorakh kuch dhang k kaaj :twisted:
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« Reply #24 on: December 10, 2004, 04:02:09 PM »
Shocked    lol
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« Reply #25 on: December 10, 2004, 04:23:02 PM »
lol................. good work
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« Reply #26 on: December 11, 2004, 07:07:09 AM »
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lol................. good work



lol indeed..   anyways, thnx deep    :oops:
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« Reply #27 on: December 11, 2004, 07:08:07 AM »
here is another poem by me. hope u all find this one nice too    :oops:
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« Reply #28 on: December 11, 2004, 07:14:43 AM »
dedicated to my only luv, my life - my sister

"silent tear"

this little "heart" made a wish once
to have a sister like you

but this "heart" never knew
as people like you are very few

you are now mine forever
holding me heartily very near

i just want you to see
that without you, i wont be

dont leave me alone stay near
no one else can hear my silent tear


with luv


any comments r most vvelcome... gud or bad... anything...
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« Reply #29 on: December 11, 2004, 07:57:09 AM »
wow! yeh to mast likha tha Chimpu ,kaha se maara? Puzzled !  :wink:


dont leave me alone stay near
no one else can hear my silent tear

2nd line was 2 emotional tongue3
won't it b li'l better if u put it like......dun leave me alone,stay near
as widout u  no more pain i can bear
as u r always thr 2 listen 2 my silent tear
no1 was,no1 is n no1 cud b like u sis dear :twisted:
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