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meri gareebi ne mujhe tadpaya tha
tabhi rishwat ka rasta maine apnaya tha
tu he bta iss mai meri kya galati thi
meri ma k ankho se jab ansu nikla tha
ponchne ko use mujhe SAAF kapda na mila tha
phate hue hathoon se jab mai maa ke ASHK tak nah phonch paya tha
tabhi rishwat ka rasta maine apnaya tha
tu he bta iss mai meri kya galati thi
aabu k joddon me dard bohot thi
bistar se utarna chahte the
par pass unke ek lakdi tak na thi
imandari ki kamayi se mai jab ek lakdi tak na kharid paya tha
tabhi rishwat ka rasta maine apnaya tha
tu he bta iss mai meri kya galati thi
behen meri mayiuusi me doobi ja rahi thi
shadi ki umar uski beeti ja rahi thi
dahej to door jab mai aye mehmano ko chaye tak na pelaya paya tha
tabhi rishwat ka rasta maine apnaya tha
tu he bta iss mai meri kya galati thi
maine aapna sukh kabhi na chaha tha
phati hui bnyaan mai aftoon ko guzara tha
ghissi hui chapal ko najane kitna or ghisaya tha
par mathe pe mere kabhi ek SHIKAND TAK NA LAYA THA
par toot gaya tha mai
ghar-valo ka ye hal na dekh saka tha mai
tabhi rishwat ka rasta maine apnaya tha
tu he bta iss mai meri kya galati thi
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«Reply #1 on: June 30, 2012, 08:34:37 AM » |
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kabhee kabhee muflisee aadmee ko ghalat raaste par chalaa detee hai
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«Reply #2 on: June 30, 2012, 08:49:28 AM » |
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bilkul sahi kaha aapne saini sir !!
maine to ek koshish kari thi un logon ki taraf se likhne ki jo rishwat lete hain !!
umeed hai pasand ayi ho !
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«Reply #4 on: June 30, 2012, 12:34:32 PM » |
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bahut khoob roy ji....ye unke liya hai jo halaton k karan na chahte huye bhi rishtwa lene par majbur ho jaate hai....
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«Reply #5 on: June 30, 2012, 12:51:07 PM » |
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«Reply #6 on: June 30, 2012, 12:51:53 PM » |
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shukriya nikhar g  |
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«Reply #7 on: June 30, 2012, 03:36:15 PM » |
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Dil khol ke likha hai aapne.
Galat ya sahee, ye khud ke jameer par hai.
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«Reply #8 on: June 30, 2012, 05:51:27 PM » |
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Dil khol ke likha hai aapne.
Galat ya sahee, ye khud ke jameer par hai.
shukriya mukesh g or kaha aapne bhi bilkull sahi hai ! |
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«Reply #10 on: June 30, 2012, 10:56:34 PM » |
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«Reply #11 on: July 01, 2012, 03:53:38 AM » |
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Beautiful creation , Roy saheb . Dheron daad aur 1 really deserving Rau .
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«Reply #12 on: July 01, 2012, 07:48:21 AM » |
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«Reply #14 on: July 01, 2012, 07:51:25 AM » |
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Beautiful creation , Roy saheb . Dheron daad aur 1 really deserving Rau .
booohoot boohhooot shukriya hasan g !! aap jaise diggaj se rau lena bohot badi baat hai |
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on eTI community..
