Galati bar bar na kar...Geet...

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Itni sanjidgi se ya tou pyar na kar,
ya phir merri judai se inkar na kar,

ek hi khata pe maafi mangta rehta hai,
koi afsos na rakh ya galati bar bar na kar,

majburi ki duhaiya terri sunti hu main,
bus tu merri mhbt ka naam bekar na kar,

jab rehta hai tu apne logo k sath,
tou merri zindgi ko tu giriftaar na kar,

haqiqat kuch aesi hi hogi apni,
tu hasrato ko merre liye bekrar na kar,

juda rahengi hamesha terri merri raahe,
bewajah raaho pe merra intezar na kar.........





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«Reply #1 on: March 01, 2011, 11:06:48 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2011, 02:53:05 PM »
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wah wah geet kya gahri baat hai.... dis se daad......

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«Reply #3 on: March 01, 2011, 03:03:34 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2011, 05:32:37 PM »
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bahot khoob geet ji.........

badi hi dilchasp peshkash he apki......wese muje apne jo pic use ki he wo bahot aachi lagi.poetry ki humraj he pic........mindblowing post geet ji......maja aa gaya ji....

few lines..........

ikraar na kar inkaar na kar
faisla ho jo bhi tu ijhaar na kar

ji lene de hume u hi khwabo me
jaga kar nind se jina bekaar na kar




 
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«Reply #5 on: March 01, 2011, 05:34:12 PM »
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nice hai geetji.......

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«Reply #6 on: March 01, 2011, 07:53:51 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob meri di..
Khubsoorat likha hai..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: March 01, 2011, 10:07:44 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: March 01, 2011, 10:09:24 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya rahim,romeo ji,tamanna ji,utkarsh ji aur manjumann ji....

Utkarsh ji bahut khoon alfaz likhe hai shukriya ji...
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«Reply #9 on: March 01, 2011, 10:18:19 PM »
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itni sanjidgi se ya to pyar na kar
ya fir meri judai se inkaar na kar !
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Geet sahiba--mai iss line me bahut confuse hu sad5sad5
yakeen se kah sakta hu aaj--mere paas Akal ka bahut Abhaw hai.
aapki kai kalaamo me kai baar confuse ho jata hu.
ufff bahut achhi hai aapki post Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: March 01, 2011, 10:39:02 PM »
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itni sanjidgi se ya to pyar na kar
ya fir meri judai se inkaar na kar !
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Geet sahiba--mai iss line me bahut confuse hu sad5sad5
yakeen se kah sakta hu aaj--mere paas Akal ka bahut Abhaw hai.
aapki kai kalaamo me kai baar confuse ho jata hu.
ufff bahut achhi hai aapki post Usual Smile

nirala ji merri poori kavita mein apko ek khalish si lag rahi hogi main is lines se ye kehna chah rahi hu ki yu tou tu apna pyar bahut snjidgi se nibhata hai phir merri judai se inkar kyun karta hai.matlab use merra pyar bhi chahiye aur majburiyo k kaaran judai bhi hai aur use is baat se aetraaz bhi rehta haijab ki majburi usi ki taraf se hai...har haalat use apne haq mein chahiye...umeed hai aap smjh gye honge waise apko isse behtar line smjh aaye tou bataiyega main change kar dungi...
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«Reply #11 on: March 01, 2011, 10:47:42 PM »
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Geet aapka sukriya bahut saara. aapko hamesha Takleef deta hun uss baat ke liye forgive kijiyega.
lekin sirf wah wah karke kya faida hoga bina samjhe.
aur haan me itna dimaag nhi rakhta ki isse achhi line btau..ye lines bhot achhi hai.Usual Smile
mere alawa sabi ko samjh aa gai thi:)
hehe m such a fool Usual Smile
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thanx again
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«Reply #12 on: March 01, 2011, 10:56:26 PM »
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Geet aapka sukriya bahut saara. aapko hamesha Takleef deta hun uss baat ke liye forgive kijiyega.
lekin sirf wah wah karke kya faida hoga bina samjhe.
aur haan me itna dimaag nhi rakhta ki isse achhi line btau..ye lines bhot achhi hai.Usual Smile
mere alawa sabi ko samjh aa gai thi:)
hehe m such a fool Usual Smile
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thanx again
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aesa na kahiye nirala ji apki badaulat mujhe apni galatiyo ko sudharna ka mauka milta hai...yu hi sath dete rahiye...take care...
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«Reply #13 on: March 01, 2011, 11:07:29 PM »
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wo to apne siwa sabke saath hota hai
khud girta khud hi uthta hai

kisi ke girne se pahle hi
woh uske saamne hota hai
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khus rahiye  dear--take care
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«Reply #14 on: March 01, 2011, 11:25:48 PM »
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Shukriya shihab ji n nice lines nirala ji...
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