Dedicated To My Lovely Nation "INDIA"

by Matrix Guy on December 22, 2010, 05:08:33 AM
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Dear all members this is just not a poetry……shayad ye mere dil ka frustration he jo in words me nikla he………aaj aap sabhi se ek request he meri ………………mene jo likha he wo apko pasand aye na aye wo aur baat he but aaj jo hamare desh me ho raha he (har tarah ka corruption, anyay, loot, bad politics etc….)   us baree me ek baar soche jarur aur jo koshish aapse ho sake aache ke liye wo jarur kare……..kyuki kahi se aur kisiko to pahla kadam badana hi hoga……….aur wese bhi youth society ke hatho me bht taqat he ….so pls think once about it………me ek koshish karna chahta tha wo mene is andaaj me ki he ….hope aap sabhi ko pasand aye………


           ! HALAT – E – WATAN !

Kuch Namuraado Ko Garibo Ki Daulat Nigalte Dekha He
Humne Kuch Darindo Ko Bahu Betiyo Per Machalte Dekha He

Jo Bane Bethe He Thekedaar Is Duniya Me  Nasihato Ke
Humne Unhe Dabe Paav Mahkhano Se Nikalte Dekha He

Jo Karte He Duniya Ko Badal Dene Ki Bate
Humne Un Mendako Ko Sirf Barsat Me Nikalte Dekha He


Rahne Do Maryada Aur Sikh Dene Wali Bate Apne Tak Hi
Humne Tumhe Bhi Girgit Ki Tarah Rang Badalte Dekha He

Duniya Ke Is Haal Ko Dekh “Mg” Ro Pade To Koi Gajab Nahi
Humne To Ye Duniya Dekh Pathrroo Se Askho Ko Nikalte Dekha He

Kis Se Nahi Hoti Khata Is Duniya Me Yarro
Humne Acho Acho Ko Girkar Sambhalte Dekha He

Ab Bhi He Umiid Kabhi To Badlenge Halat E Watan Yaha Bhi
Humne Akasr Andhera Cheer Roshni Ko Nikalte Dekha He

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«Reply #1 on: December 22, 2010, 05:31:44 AM »
 
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«Reply #2 on: December 22, 2010, 05:46:31 AM »
Mister Martrix aapne achha likha hai..iske liye taliyan bhi mil gai aapko..
Good.
lekin iss tarah se na badal paoge haalaat desh ke
rote rahoge sirf tadap tadap ke
        gar ho himmat aapme aur saare naujawano me MG
        kyun nahi koshish karte rajneeti e daldal me ghusne ko Mg
padhe likhe samajhdaar saare
chale jaate ho videsh batorne ko paise pankh pasaare
        baad aakar kahte ho kitna bigad gaya ye desh
        tum bhi ho zimmedaar iss barbaadi ke zara sa khud ke bhi girebaan me jhank kar dekh..
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«Reply #3 on: December 22, 2010, 05:48:55 AM »
bht khubbb nirala ji....bht achcheee
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«Reply #4 on: December 22, 2010, 06:04:56 AM »
Kasak ji--taliyon se kaam nhi chalega--
mai or aap or sabhi apne desh ke coruption ka jitna bhi birodh karen usse b jada Pyar karte hain hum iss desh ko.
aor ye ilzaam lagane se kuch nhi milega u nd aal sb jante hain.
yahan ham b zimedar h coruptin ko badhane me.
time bachane ko hm paise dekar dusron se kaam karwate hai. aise bht si baate hai sabi jante hai--ye sb coruption h jo dikhta nhi..
netaa log famous hote hai to dikhta hai unka coruption--
pr badlega kuch b nhi ..
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«Reply #5 on: December 22, 2010, 06:08:58 AM »
sahi he nirala ji......100% agreed....

hum sabhi ko apne apne level per puri koshish karni hogi......

thx apne ye pada aur apne view diye.....
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«Reply #6 on: December 22, 2010, 08:23:48 AM »
Bahut bahut Khoob Matrix Guy Ji Aur bahut Ache Vichaar Niralaji

Yeh dekh Kar Bahut Acha Laga Ke Koi Yahan Social Issues Par Bhi likh Raha Hai Varna Aajkal Aisi kavitayen Kam Hi Dekhne Ko milti hai..

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«Reply #7 on: December 22, 2010, 12:34:32 PM »
Wah wah MGji desh k liye aapka ye gehra chintan....
AAGE KADAM BADHANE KO NIMANTRAN....
Mujhe ek kaviki ye panktiyein yaad ho aayee....

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गगन चुम्बी अट्टालिकाएं
आडी तिरछी सुदूर विस्तृत,

सडको की सर्प मालाएं
दूर तक चीटियों सी गाड़ियां ही गाड़ियां

जगह जगह उगते कंक्रीट के जंगल
तारों का फैला मायाजाल

द्रुत से द्रुततर होती गति
सचमुच प्रगति ?

सुन्न पड़ती संवेदना
टूटती मान्यता

मूल्यों की आहुति
संबंधो में विकृति

विकास का तुम्हारा ये आमंत्रण
अथवा विनाश को मौन निमंत्रण "
.......NM.....
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«Reply #8 on: December 23, 2010, 10:01:00 AM »
Nice Bahut Khub Matrix Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: December 24, 2010, 12:52:56 PM »
thx rishi ji....khwaish ji and koyal ji....thx lot for liking it
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