:: "two long years" : dedicated to my love ::

by myheart_ursonly on January 15, 2005, 03:47:00 PM
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"two long years", dedicated to miss pretty eyes ("-")
- amit, verma_amit_4u@yahoo.com

Roses are red, violets are blue. I just wanna tell, how much i love you.
I can't stand your sorrow. All i hope for, is a better tomorrow.
Looking at your only pic makes me cry. I wish the distance we hold is just a lie.
Promise me and give me your hand. This is my word, i'll hold it till the end.
We'll have to wait for two long years, We'll have to cry together, those bloody tears.
Dont leave me, you are my need. Or my eyes will forever bleed.
Yes its true, I cant change your fate,  i'm no God.
All i wanna say is, i'll be always with you, whether it's even or odd!
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«Reply #1 on: January 15, 2005, 10:51:30 PM »
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aaaawwwwwhhhhh no comments :sad:
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«Reply #2 on: January 16, 2005, 05:25:20 AM »
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wah wah.......kya baat hai yaar
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«Reply #3 on: January 16, 2005, 05:43:00 AM »
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oh its so b'ful, one of d best poems i've ever read (i dun read others' poems,lol).......its really sickenin 2 c dat ppl here in yoindia dun care 2 comment on english poems,but im always wid u Chimpu,keep on pourin out ur emotions.  :wink:

if  u dun mind,can i contribute few lines 2 it?
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«Reply #4 on: January 16, 2005, 06:07:47 AM »
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Quote from: "Princess21"
wah wah.......kya baat hai yaar


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«Reply #5 on: January 16, 2005, 06:08:36 AM »
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oh its so b'ful, one of d best poems i've ever read (i dun read others' poems,lol).......its really sickenin 2 c dat ppl here in yoindia dun care 2 comment on english poems,but im always wid you Chimpu,keep on pourin out ur emotions.  :wink:

if  you dun mind,can i contribute few lines 2 it?


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«Reply #6 on: January 17, 2005, 04:41:07 PM »
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thats good hearty. Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: January 17, 2005, 04:47:31 PM »
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love is not measured in time
love is also measured by time
love is not shown by number of kisses
love not means number of hugs
love is not how much they much us
but love is that how much we miss them
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«Reply #8 on: January 17, 2005, 08:01:09 PM »
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hummm ... yogi ji!!!
love is all about dedication and care
love it all bout the courage and your dare
love it the feeling of heaven with the touch
love is all about saying you love her so much
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«Reply #9 on: January 17, 2005, 10:48:02 PM »
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JUST NOT BAD
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«Reply #10 on: January 18, 2005, 05:26:31 AM »
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nice work all!!!!!!!!!!!!
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