kya baat ho...

by sushiljain on November 20, 2012, 10:39:38 AM
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unki nigaahon ke do moti churaalun to kya baat ho,                                             
unko apni aankho me basaalun, to kya baat ho.

wo zulfon ki latein jo unke gaalon ko chhu rahi hai,
unhe apne haathon se hataalun to kya baat ho.

raat jab unka deedar hua , do chand nazar kyu aaye?
asmaan ke chand ko bujhaalun to kya baat ho.

suna hai har baat se unki, mehkte phool jhadte hai,         
do phool main bhi uthalun to kya baat ho.

gam-e-dil, tanhaayi, udaasi, sab apne se lagte hai,
inhe chhod unhe apna banaalun to kya baat ho.
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«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2012, 11:02:08 AM »
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waah v nice....
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«Reply #2 on: November 20, 2012, 11:08:53 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: November 20, 2012, 11:21:21 AM »
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unki nigaahon ke do moti churaalun to kya baat ho,                                             
unko apni aankho me basaalun, to kya baat ho.

wo zulfon ki latein jo unke gaalon ko chhu rahi hai,
unhe apne haathon se hataalun to kya baat ho.

raat jab unka deedar hua , do chand nazar kyu aaye?
asmaan ke chand ko bujhaalun to kya baat ho.

suna hai har baat se unki, mehkte phool jhadte hai,         
do phool main bhi uthalun to kya baat ho.

gam-e-dil, tanhaayi, udaasi, sab apne se lagte hai,
inhe chhod unhe apna banaalun to kya baat ho.
bohut ummda sushil ji ,,,keep writing like this
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: November 20, 2012, 02:07:59 PM »
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thnk u vry much frns...happy9
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«Reply #5 on: November 20, 2012, 05:26:57 PM »
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Aadaab sushil ji
aapki ye pahli post padh raha hun.
pahle to aapka swaagat hai is bazm men
bahut hi umda kalaam pesh kiya hai
dil daad qubool farmaayen
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«Reply #6 on: November 21, 2012, 12:53:31 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #7 on: November 21, 2012, 05:22:17 AM »
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bahot bahot shukriya doston...
bahot acha laga apne mujhe padha.. happy9
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